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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Dan Osinski/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 02:22, 13 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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1. Prose  On hold

2. Verifiability  On hold

3. Depth of Coverage  On hold

4. Neutral  Pass

5. Stable  Pass

6. Illustrations  Pass

7. Miscellaneous  Pass

Comments

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  • For ballplayers, the nationality is generally inserted into the first sentence, as well.
  • Is the John Blanchard that hit the minor league home run off Osinski the same person as Johnny Blanchard? The career dates might fit.
  • The Ron Ritchie you linked to is a deceased Canadian politician, so I think you have the wrong link there.
  • Might be best to have a footnote or a gloss that the spitball is an illegal pitch, that context is needed to really understand that section

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  • Associated Press as the author on ref 31.
  • You've got him as dying in Sun City in the infobox, but it's not cited there, and the text never explicity states that he died in Sun City.

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Really good work. Placing on hold. Hog Farm (talk) 22:25, 14 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]