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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 16:17, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Another Believer, PDX sure has tons of restos eh? Sad to see this one go (looks better than Delta). Will come back with a pyramid of comments! GeraldWL 16:17, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald Waldo Luis, Thanks! Yes, Portland is quite the food destination (pre-COVID, of course). Looking forward to your comments. ---Another Believer (Talk) --Another Believer (Talk) 16:24, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Description

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The sentences starting off with "The" sounds like the object has been talked previously above. I suggest changing to:

Hanger steaks came with green chili pepper hollandaise sauce and home fries, and pulled pork sandwich served with blue cheese potato salad. Aeared chicken breast came with macaroni and cheese, pancetta, and broccolini, and pan-fried quail was served with hazelnut and quinoa stuffing, topped with marionberry gastrique, as well as escarole. Steamed mussels were served in a "Thai-inspired, tom kha-esque" broth. The Caesar salad had Romaine lettuce, boquerones, parmesan, and toasted focaccia croutons. A "slightly caramel-sweet" Dungeness crab bisque and sautéed squash were also on the menu. The dessert menu included chèvre cheesecake.

GeraldWL 16:46, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald Waldo Luis,  Done ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:54, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

History

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Events

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Reception

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Sources

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Reliable, and no original research. GeraldWL 16:46, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

👍 Like ---Another Believer (Talk) 16:59, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Stable?

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No edit wars, no 3RR violations. History page basically screams: I'm new, I'm new, and has not declared a war. GeraldWL 16:46, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

👍 Like ---Another Believer (Talk) 17:00, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Gerald Waldo Luis: In this edit, is the markup "|author=|title=|source=" needed? ---Another Believer (Talk) 17:09, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Another Believer, removed. GeraldWL 17:15, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, ---Another Believer (Talk) 17:17, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

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Another Believer, this is a super quick process! Did a Grammarly check just to finish it, and there's no problems!

Pass or fail?  Passed. GeraldWL 17:25, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Gerald Waldo Luis, Thanks! ---Another Believer (Talk) 17:49, 27 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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