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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Don Eddy (baseball)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:15, 24 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • Just to avoid short sentences, perhaps "He batted right-handed but threw left-handed. Eddy was a native of Swaledale, Iowa." > "A native of Swaledale, Iowa, he batted right-handed but threw left-handed."?
  • "the depth chart" what's one of those?
  • " as a pitcher in 1966" overlinked.
  • "Duluth–Superior Dukes " en-dash.
  • "a 7-5 loss" likewise.
  • "pitcher in short relief" what does that mean?
  • "on developing a curveball.[3]" overlinked.
  • "holes in one" hyphenate?
  • "in Rockwell, Iowa, from" overlinked.

That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 11:43, 27 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]