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A fact from Ethiopia in the Middle Ages appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 1 September 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that medieval Ethiopian kings claimed to be descended from Solomon?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/September. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Ethiopia in the Middle Ages.

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Did you know nomination[edit]

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 00:15, 27 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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... that medieval Ethiopian kings claimed to descend from Solomon? Sources: Hubbard, David Allan (1956). The literary sources of the Kebra Nagast. and Ayenachew, Deresse (2014). "Evolution and Organisation of the Ç̌äwa Military Regiments in Medieval Ethiopia" (PDF). Annales d'Ethiopie (29): 83–95
- ALT1:... that medieval Ethiopian kings' claims of descent from Solomon are based off a 14th century epic?Source: same as above

Reviewed: Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Half_Die
Comment: Hook can be found in Ethiopia_in_the_Middle_Ages#Solomonic_dynasty_(1270–mid-16th_century)

Created/expanded by Thiqq (talk). Nominated by A. C. Santacruz (talk) at 00:49, 26 August 2021 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article is new enough, long, sourced (very interesting read!). Hook is cited in article (assuming good faith) and interesting. no copyvio and qpq is done. BuySomeApples (talk) 06:21, 26 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

To T:DYK/P4

Promotion to "B" class on the quality scale[edit]

I believe that this article's promotion to "B" class on the quality scale for Wikipedia:WikiProject Ethiopia is justified - not least because, at the time of promotion, there were no criteria defined to assess "C" class at WikiProject_Ethiopia/Assessments ! --06:14, 29 August 2021 (UTC) Bushel C andle

GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ethiopia in the Middle Ages/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Shushugah (talk · contribs) 20:35, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I will begin my review below. I am looking forward to working with you on bringing this article to GA status.

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This article is almost GA status. The quality and formatting of the references are excellent. The images are all highly relevant (and well situated). I even learned about the Free Art License used for one of the images.

I would either make Aksum and Axum consistent or mention in the beginning that the two terms are used interchangeably. It took me some time and clicking to realize they're not separate concepts.

The main article for Judaism should be History of the Jews in Ethiopia or Kingdom of Semien not Beta Israel which deals with more modern topic.

Slaves came from/born in Ethiopia is less demeaning than produced by. A See also Wikilink to Slavery in Ethiopia would also make sense.

A Wikilink to first mention of Eritrea should be mentioned, along with an explanatory hatnote that it recently split from Ethiopia. When discussing the medieval context there's no need to refer to it as Ethiopia/Eritrea in 11th century. It can simply be Ethiopia or whatever other names it had at that point in time.

A See also section would be nice, with a link to History of Ethiopia the parent topic of this article.

All in all, really nicely done! ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 20:35, 4 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I've made the edits you suggested; let me know if it all looks in order now. Thanks for your help! Thiqq (talk) 03:26, 5 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Thiqq it was a pleasure working together and congratulations on a Good Article!