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disambig
[edit]Acoustic and Milo need disambig. Randomblue (talk) 21:04, 16 January 2008 (UTC)
- checking the article I did it to Acoustic Guitar, about Milo, I looked at that Disambig. page and couldn't find which one it would be Samuel Sol (talk) 00:34, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
FAC Comments
[edit]- Replace the icons with letters. It tends to confuse readers specially the Australia and New Zealand flags which are hard to recognize because of its nearness of design.
- Not full dates are usually unlinked.
- Do we have to mention all the release dates?
- The song was written by
Powderfingerthe band's lead singer - Is the use of "some reviewers" not confusing to readers?
- Despite the reviews,
"I Don't Remember"the single charted poorly onlyreaching#42number 42 or forty-two (to have continues prose without figures).- The song was written — sure to repeat it?
- Use the sign for flat symbol as in B flat and wikilink it, and do not forget the G minor.
- Link B-side
- I think its fine to de-link riff in the second paragraph.
- For the music videos "for" or for the music videos "of"?
- The band and audience
isare comprised - Since the preceding sentence mentioned "often", any other review(s) other than Kathy McCabe's?
- The list of parodies can be incorporated to the music video section and be re-written into prose.
- "similar to 'Lost and Running', the first single released" from what album? Please indicate.
- "…appropriate "ad" for this album." Oops! Punctuation for "ad" is only a single quotation.
- "Did Bolger 'enjoyed the song'." This is a POVic phrase. Though it's apparent the reviewer likes the song, we can't say he enjoyed the song. (needs verification)
- "and calling it a catchier song
thenthan other works on the album" - "Reviewer Andrew Tijs from CitySearch Brisbane
statesstated" - "though provides mixed reviews when compared with other songs by the group, stating that" Any word other than "state"?
- "It's no eerie ballad like "The Day You Come", nor does it have "Like a Dog"'s snarl, nor "On My Mind"'s pub rock shudder." The singles should be singly quoted.
- Is release under the umbrella of response? Maybe the response could be a subsection of release.
- "then slid
four positionsto #47 in its second week" They'll know the single slid to four notches. - pinacle --> pinnacle
- "and then dropped off the chart altogether." Altogether what?
- The entries for US and NZ in the chart are futile because the single was unable to chart. Therefore, remove them or entirely remove the table since only one market was charted.
- Put the sample in the first section and mention some musical structure or any stuff about the music rather than just state "A 20 second sample from Powderfinger's 'I Don't Remember'." The use is not fair.
- Change em dashes to en dash in the track listing section to delimit their corresponding duration (to comply MoS).
- Featuring and Live should be in lowercase.
- Most song-related FAs use colons for personnel and credits.
- Formatting of publication date for citation number three and twenty-one are not consistent.
Please feel free to object. --BritandBeyonce (talk) 00:23, 17 January 2008 (UTC)
Other songs named 'I Don't Remember' exist, right?
[edit]This phrase should have a disambiguation page. Paperxcrip (talk) 03:14, 10 June 2009 (UTC)
- Yes. The first thing that popped into my head is the Peter Gabriel song from his third album.DavidRF (talk) 00:09, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
sic
[edit]"The new songs are excellent live; I Don't Remember has more energy than its [sic] recorded counterpart (Lost and Running)"
What is the [sic] for? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 79.221.55.1 (talk) 10:15, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
- The reviewer made a mistake, the [sic]'s are there to denote that it's not the one doing the quoting that made the mistake, it's the one who made the quote whose mistake it was. See sic. - Tbsdy lives (formerly Ta bu shi da yu) talk 12:45, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
- "its" is correct in this case though 57.66.9.145 (talk) 17:17, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
- So it is. - Tbsdy lives (formerly Ta bu shi da yu) talk 21:44, 22 November 2009 (UTC)
- "its" is correct in this case though 57.66.9.145 (talk) 17:17, 13 November 2009 (UTC)
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