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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 31 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
... that in 1958, professional La Dama Enmascarada was the first female forced to unmask when she lost a Lucha de Apuestas match to Irma González? Enciclopedia staff (September 2007). "Enciclopedia de las Mascaras" [The Eyclopedia of Masks]. La Dama Enmascarada (in Spanish). Mexico. p. 4. Tomo II.
"She is a five-time holder of the Mexican National Women's Championship, a two-time holder of the UWA World Women's Championship, holder of both"- try not to repeat the word "holder" too many times in one sentence
"were the first team to win the Mexican National Women's Tag Team Championship held in 1991." - The body and the Mexican National Women's Tag Team Championship both state it was 1990 that Gonzalez and Aguliar won that title not 1991
Also the above sentence does not need the word "held" because it is redundant
"Indonesian-based World championship" the word "world" in this instance does not need to start with a capital letter
"Her wrestling career spanned five decades, from the 1950s to the 1990s." I believe this sentence can be deleted and merged into the existing sentence During her over forty-year career and made shorter
"including Irma Moralez," - typo; should be Morales
Rosita Williams does not need to be linked twice in close succession
"Her second reign came to an end at the hands" - try to reword the phrase "at the hands" to something more formal
"González had a third reign with the 1959 championship." - better to rewrite the text in bold to championship in 1959.
"Regent of Mexico City, Ernesto P. Uruchurtu," - Ernesto P. Uruchurtu, the Regent of Mexico City,
"banned women's wrestling there effectively" - a comma should be added inbetween the words "there" and "effectively"
"La Dama Enmascarada gained a measure of revenge on" - try to change the text in bold to a phrase that is more formal and neutral
"She is the only non-family member ever given the right " - more complete; ever to be given
"in '71, '74 and '79," - This portion of text is unencyclopedic. It should be written as in 1971, 1974 and 1979
"but records are unclear who she took the title from" - better; unclear as to whom she
"by winning Martha's hair in 1982. 1982 also saw" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this
"La Mujer X at a regional show in Xalapa, Veracruz to unmask La Mujer X." - rewording the text in bold to the latter or her opponent would be ideal instead of using her name twice in the same sentence.
"defeating Lola González on August 27." - please clarify in the artcle whether Gonzalez won that title in 1982 or not
"held the championship for 497 days, until December 20, 1991, when the team of Martha Villalobos and Pantera Sureña won the championship." - try to avoid close reptition of the word "championship" and replace it with a similar word
For Reference 3, it would help to add the pages used in referencing this article if possible
Reference 13 is dead and will need to be archived
Overall the main issues concern about how portions of the prose are and the references. On hold for the time being. MWright96(talk) 19:49, 26 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
MWright96 I believe I have addressed all issues raised. Thank you for your input. MPJ-DK (talk) 13:23, 27 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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