Talk:Joe Small (cricketer)/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 16:54, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Having read the article a few times over, think this easily meets the GA criteria. Well sourced, no dead or dab links, lead does a good summary job of Small's career and prose is very good. Just two minor quibbles:

Should there be spaces in WC Shepherd?

Not too sure, but don't see why not. Done. Sarastro1 (talk) 21:43, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

"At the time, West Indian batsman were traditionally white" should that be batsmen were?

Yes! Done. Sarastro1 (talk) 21:43, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Source needed for "After scoring 72, he took six for 43 to help his team defeat British Guiana."

It was actually covered by the ref at the end of the next sentence, but I can see where the confusion may arise, so added another ref. Sarastro1 (talk) 21:43, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Otherwise happy to pass this; on hold. Lemonade51 (talk) 16:54, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. Sarastro1 (talk) 21:43, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]