Talk:John Hines (Australian soldier)/GA1

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Reviewer: Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:32, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments[edit]

No disambiguation links

  1. The External links section is empty so can be deleted unless you plan adding something there.
  • It contains a link to a spoken version of the article, and according to Wikipedia:WikiProject Spoken Wikipedia/Template guidelines this is where such links need to be placed. This seems a bit odd to me, but I presume that spoken word articles are intended to assist sight impaired readers, so it's best that links to them are in a consistent location in articles.
  1. The web site Kelly, Darryl. "Just Soldiers". ANZAC Day Commemoration Committee of Queensland Incorporated. http://www.anzacday.org.au/justsoldiers/justsoldiers.html. needs an access date added
  • Done
  1. Citation 14 E00822 for consistency should be Collection. Australian War Memorial or the other website links changed to the article title.
  • That's the name of the website (which is an item within the AWM's collection database) and appears to be consistent with the other AWM links
  1. I presume it's not know how he was medically unfit when discharged in 1916?
  • Unfortunately not. The only record of this is his army personnel file, which simply states 'discharged medically unfit' on 20 January 1916.

A good read and fits the stereotype of an Aussie Digger to a T. Jim Sweeney (talk) 10:32, 17 July 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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