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Nice work - but a couple of things need fixing. One is that it's written in a style more suitable for a press release or a bio on an artist's own website. Wikipedia style is to be a little "drier" - see Airto Moreira for a similar percussionist, or Miles Davis, of course. The other thing is it's missing the right sort of introduction - name of the artist in bold, date and place of birth, etc. I may come back to this myself. --ajn (talk) 05:51, 22 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Age at death

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If he was born in '48 and died in '07, he was either 58 or 59 at time of death, not 61 as stated. tomasz. 22:20, 26 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]