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Semi-protected edit request on 1 September 2018

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Mack position will change to outside linebacker because the bears run a 3-4 defense. Falcaholic (talk) 20:48, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done He's not officially even on the Bears' roster. Jauerbackdude?/dude. 22:06, 1 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Image

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I think the profile image of Mack should be switched from the raiders away uniform to the image of the bears home uniform because he is currently a bear and not a raider anymore. Thoughts? — Preceding unsigned comment added by LaDanian1000000 (talkcontribs) 13:31, 22 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Khalil Mack/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 07:41, 7 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I will use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs)

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

Immediate Failures

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  • It is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria -
  • It contains copyright infringements -
  • It has, or needs, cleanup banners that are unquestionably still valid. These include{{cleanup}}, {{POV}}, {{unreferenced}} or large numbers of {{citation needed}}, {{clarify}}, or similar tags. (See also {{QF-tags}}). -
  • It is not stable due to edit warring on the page. -
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Prose

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Lede

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Sorry about the delay on this one. Here's some thoughts:

General

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GA Review

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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  • Automated note - If you fancy returning the favour, I have outstanding GA nominations that require reviewing at WP:GAN. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these, however it's definitely not mandatory. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs)
Ejgreen77 have you got time to look at some of the above from the first pass?Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 21:22, 19 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
As this has been up for quite a few days without any comments, I'm going to fail this one. If you'd like to denominate, take a look at the above, and repost at WP:GAN Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 18:59, 22 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Trade

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He’s a charger 2600:6C40:6B00:745:D499:6508:7193:ABAF (talk) 22:59, 10 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The deal is not official until the start of the new league year (March 16).[1] The article will be tagged with the "Current sports transaction". It's the same situation as Russell Wilson right now. --  StarScream1007  ►Talk  01:20, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 13 March 2022

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Change the team he plays for to the LA Chargers 2600:387:C:551B:0:0:0:6 (talk) 21:40, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

 Not done for now: See above. ScottishFinnishRadish (talk) 21:57, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

It’s official.

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The new league year has started, the Chargers acknowledged his arrival, and he has been traded. Update it!! 2600:8800:E0B:1600:1D00:1905:1F80:9610 (talk) 02:55, 17 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]