Talk:Kit Mueller

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Good articleKit Mueller has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
December 10, 2011Peer reviewReviewed
December 11, 2011Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on November 19, 2011.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that although his high school basketball career was nearly ended by an accident with piranhas, Kit Mueller is second in Princeton basketball history in points and assists?
Current status: Good article

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:09, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this article upon completion of the peer review. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:09, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review is complete.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:53, 8 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • "Following the school year, he played in the suburban summer league" I presume basketball league? Clarify since tennis is noted in the previous sentence, so it could be confusing.
  • "the team was ranked 23 in the Chicago Sun-Times'" 23rd
  • "he was not one of the 9 area" nine
  • "He was benched for one game in early March of his junior year for disciplinary reasons by coach Dick Flaiz." This should be with the other junior info; out of place in his senior year section.
  • "all conference selection." wouldn't All-Conference be capped and hyphenated like All-Chicago and All-State?
  • "Mueller's final shot was deflected by Mourning. It is remembered by Princeton fans as an uncalled foul" sentences could be combined (by Mourning, which is remembered by)

I'll put the article on hold and pass when issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 04:18, 10 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Everything looks good now. I'm fairly sure single digit numbers are written out if they're the only one in a sentence, but no big deal; article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 01:09, 11 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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