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Good articleLinda Syddick Napaltjarri has been listed as one of the Art and architecture good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
March 4, 2010Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 26, 2010.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Napaljarri artists include Biddy, Daisy, Susie, Kowai, Wentja, Peggy, Doris, Parara, Eileen, Louisa, Lucy, Helen, Linda, Kitty, Sheila, Valerie, Maggie, Topsy, Nora, Ada, Ngoia, Molly, Mona and Norah?

Sources still to be incorporated

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  • Entry in Oxford Companion, pp. 706-707 (by Margie West)

Rating

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I have rated this B as it appears to be comprehensive, but it should have a picture of the artist if possible.--Grahame (talk) 07:34, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Linda Syddick Napaltjarri/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Mephiston999 (talk) 22:58, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it reasonably well written?
    A. Prose quality:
    B. MoS compliance:
  2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
    A. References to sources:
    B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
    C. No original research:
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. Major aspects:
    B. Focused:
  4. Is it neutral?
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. Is it stable?
    No edit wars, etc:
  6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
    A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
    B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:

Comments

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Lead

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  • The lead does not summarize the entire article adequately. Please expand it and make sure that all the main aspects of the article are present in the lead.
  • Can an appropriate infobox be found, I'm sure you can find an infobox for an artist.

Life

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  •  Done Decrease size of image.

Art

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Background

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  •  Done Link acrylic paints
  •  Done men of central Australia to women painting ..... men of central Australia towards women painting
  •  Done and in the 1990s large numbers of them ..... and in the 1990s a large number of them

Career

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  •  Done when works by her were hung in a private gallery ... when her works were hung in a private gallery.
  •  Done Disambiguation of Dreaming.

Miscellaneous

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  • It would be great to add a picture of her or of one of her works.
  •  Done Persondata must be added, see WP:PDATA for more info.
  • Be consistent with dates format in the reference section.


Overall a good article, just a few issues to address and I shall pass it. Mephiston999 (talk) 23:38, 1 March 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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