Talk:Linda Syddick Napaltjarri/GA1
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Reviewer: Mephiston999 (talk) 22:58, 1 March 2010 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
Comments[edit]
Lead[edit]
- The lead does not summarize the entire article adequately. Please expand it and make sure that all the main aspects of the article are present in the lead.
- Can an appropriate infobox be found, I'm sure you can find an infobox for an artist.
Life[edit]
Done Decrease size of image.
Art[edit]
Background[edit]
Done Link acrylic paints
Done men of central Australia to women painting ..... men of central Australia towards women painting
Done and in the 1990s large numbers of them ..... and in the 1990s a large number of them
Career[edit]
Done when works by her were hung in a private gallery ... when her works were hung in a private gallery.
Done Disambiguation of Dreaming.
Miscellaneous[edit]
- It would be great to add a picture of her or of one of her works.
Done Persondata must be added, see WP:PDATA for more info.
- Be consistent with dates format in the reference section.
Overall a good article, just a few issues to address and I shall pass it. Mephiston999 (talk) 23:38, 1 March 2010 (UTC)