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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:51, 8 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    Allmusic is not so reliable regarding genres and dates, so it is better to replace it. New Age and Christmas does not seem to fit; New Age is more esoterical
    What has Jul (Norway) anything to do with the album?
    There are a bit too much quotes in the first section; try rewording with your own words or use indirect speech. Eg " as "[painful]"" could be surely "as painful"
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall: Hold--Kürbis () 11:17, 10 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Pass/Fail:
  • I removed New Age, but surely Christmas is applicable. --Another Believer (Talk) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Removed "July (Norway)" in the See also section. (I had previously thought someone might want more information about the Norwegian tradition given the sentence or two about Little Christmas Eve.) --Another Believer (Talk) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Corrected "painful". I removed quotation marks from "shuffling beat"--I think this is a musical term and not a descriptor. Similarly, I replaced "down-tempo" with a linked version of downtempo, replacing a descriptor with a musical term. --Another Believer (Talk) 15:31, 10 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • I will pass it now. Meets criteria. Regards.--Kürbis () 13:16, 12 September 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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