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--Another Believer (Talk) 15:17, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 01:52, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Does anything need to be changed? The link appears to work without difficulty and I do not get get a different URL if I access the link through Allmusic directly. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Works for me as well. Probably just an issue with Checklinks. Statυs (talk) 04:45, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Holiday" is not a genre of music, it is a type. And besides, it is not found in the provided source.
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • the group led by American singer-songwriter Alison Sudol --> Relevance?
So, here's the thing. A Fine Frenzy is sometimes referred to as a band/group; other times it is referred to as the stage name for Allison Sudol... or the "character" of her music (if that makes sense). My attempt was so mention both the group and Sudol in the lead so that references to both later in the article would make sense. Some sources talk about the groups, others about Sudol. If you think this is too complicated I could find a way to simplify. You'll notice Sudol is mentioned specifically throughout the A Fine Frenzy article. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
What about a note stating this? Have a note going off of "A Fine Frenzy" and say that bit of info. Not everyone who reads the article will know what exactly it means, unless they are familiar with them. Know what I mean? Statυs (talk) 04:45, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
OK, so I amended the lead to show that AFF is an American group led by Alison Sudol. This way later references to both make sense. --Another Believer (Talk) 15:25, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Initially released exclusively through Target just two months following Sudol's previous studio album Bomb in a Birdcage,[1][4] the EP contains cover versions of three popular holiday songs ("Blue Christmas", "Winter Wonderland" and "Christmas Time Is Here" from A Charlie Brown Christmas) as well as three original tracks --> Too long of a sentence. How about something like: It was initially released exclusively through Target just two months following Sudol's previous studio album Bomb in a Birdcage. The EP contains cover versions of three popular holiday songs ("Blue Christmas", "Winter Wonderland" and "Christmas Time Is Here" from A Charlie Brown Christmas), as well as three original tracks.
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • number 3 - number three
Done. --04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
  • Specify that Billboard is a U.S. chart.
  • Top Holiday Albums chart and number 28 on the Top Rock Albums --> Specify U.S. and Billboard
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • With a total length under 22 minutes --> Should say approximately, as the length is exactly 21:49.
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sudol said of "Redribbon Foxes" --> Of "Redribbon Foxes", Sudol stated:
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • In the chart performance section, also specify U.S. and Billboard.
Done. --Another Believer (Talk) 04:34, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I hope I have addressed all concerns. Please let me know if not. Thank you so much for taking the time to offer a review. Much appreciated! --Another Believer (Talk) 15:25, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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