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Reviewer: Utinsh (talk) 22:35, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here is the issues I managed to find.

  • Extra-time is linked twice
Unlinked the first one I saw. LOL –J10S Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • Maybe the sentence in which Nasri is revealed as the accused person in the book should have one or two extra references because it's a highly controversial matter.
Gotcha. –J10S Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Nasri returned to the team in June for matches."; An incomplete sentence?

Done. –J10S Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

  • Luxembourg linked twice in consecutive sentences.
Oops. Done. –J10S Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • According to WP:MOS you should try to avoid linking multiple consecutive words like you are doing in here "Lyon goalkeeper Hugo Lloris". Though I really don't know how avoid this happening in this particular example
I wiki-linked the first mention of the position in the article and un-linked this mention. –J10S Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  • His official website is down and link should be removed.
Removed. –J10S Talk 22:57, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Here is the issues I managed to find. It is a great article and mostly I'm really clutching at straws so feel free to challenge anything I'm asking from you. Utinsh (talk) 22:37, 9 April 2011 (UTC)[reply]