Talk:Thorkell (Vinland Saga)

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Review: April 13, 2024. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 14:33, 23 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 10:31, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Stay tuned.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 10:31, 5 April 2024 (UTC) Incipit.[reply]

Explain what Jomsvikings are.
- Done.
"as a Jomsviking commander who later commanded". Repetition. Why later? And since he's a commander, shouldn't be obvious he commanded something? Explain better.
- Revised
"The voice actor found the early read of the series' writing interesting to read even one term that appeared in the work". Can you rewrite this sentence? It's quite confusing for me.
- Removed
"He enjoyed working with Yuto Uemura (Thorfinn) and Naoya Uchida (Askeladd) due to the dialogues the series has when their characters interact". Quite trivial.
- Removed
"Thorkell joins Floki's team to take down Vagn's side". Explain better and present these characters, please.
- Done
Same for Einar.
- Done
There's an overlink for Floki in "Role".
- Done

@Tintor2:. That's all. I'll read Reception later. Good work.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 13:22, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@TeenAngels1234: Revised. Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 18:23, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. Let's go.

"Akio Otsuka's voice acting was praised by Yukimura.[2]" This is also quite trivial.
- Removed.
"The medievalist Maxime Danesin noted how the European Middle Ages are seen through the prism of Contemporary Japanese Literature noted Yukimura takes liberties".. Something's wrong there.
- Reworded.
"Yaledma Ayala Sepúlveda". Who is this? From the title of the source ("MA thesis"), are we sure this is a RS?
- Removed.

@Tintor2: That's all.

@TeenAngels1234: Revised. Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 18:16, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Comment: Allright. Pretty good article. Well-written, with good sources and clear even for a non-VS fan like me. Good work. Pass.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 20:08, 13 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]