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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk · contribs) 02:43, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


I will be reviewing this (more quickly than last time)! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:43, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

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Lead

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  • ”with pitching, and would often practice” – “with pitching, often practicing”
  • ”junior year with a” – “junior year in which he posted a”
  • ”but followed this effort” – “but he followed this effort”
  • ” Bauer became a free agent after the 2020 season, and chose to sign a three-year contract with the Dodgers that February” – “A free agent after the 2020 season, Bauer signed a three-year contract with the Dodgers in February 2021.”
  • ” He led the league in both strikeouts and innings pitched by July 2, when MLB placed Bauer on administrative leave while they investigated assault allegations made against him” – Update to “He led the league in both strikeouts and innings pitched through July 2 but spent the rest of the season on administrative leave imposed by MLB as they investigated assault allegations made against him”

Early life

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  • ”Clarita, and spent” – “Clarita, and he spent”
  • Did he graduate early because he didn’t mesh with his teammates? Or did he graduate early because he wanted to start his college career early, and he also happened to not mesh with his teammates?
    • Per the source: "It was enough to make me decide not to play my senior year, regardless of if I had a chance to go to college or not," Bauer said Monday. "So, I'll leave it there." I changed to "in part because" — GhostRiver 12:52, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

College career

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Minor leagues

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Arizona Diamondbacks

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  • This section looks good!

Cleveland Indians

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Cincinnati Reds

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Los Angeles Dodgers

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  • This section looks good!

Pitching style and criticism

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Business ventures

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  • This section looks good!

Charitable campaigns

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  • This section looks good!

Political beliefs and social media

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  • I remember reading that he supported Mitt Romney in 2012; might be good to mention that as well.


--- "purporting" is a grammatical error. "a purported" is closer to what is meant. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.93.241.135 (talk) 18:21, 1 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Assault allegations

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Great news; you don’t have to wait nine days for a review this time! Biggest change I found was that 2014 could use expansion; the rest seems like minor stuff. Let me know when you’re done, and I’ll give this another look! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 03:36, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sanfranciscogiants17 Thank you for reviewing such a long article; I've implemented everything that you've suggested! — GhostRiver 13:18, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
GhostRiver Looks good now; passing. Nice work! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 14:18, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]