Talk:Triple planetary crisis

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Wiki Education assignment: Introduction to Environmental Sciences[edit]

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 22 August 2023 and 8 December 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Clairer744 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Carolinefortune.

— Assignment last updated by MethanoJen (talk) 19:39, 27 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Student editor introduction and source evaluation[edit]

Hello everyone! My name is Claire, and I am an environmental science student at Georgia Tech. I am excited to start editing this article. It seems that so far everything in the article is related to the topic with no distracting aspects. No information currently seems to be out of date, but there are many missing details to be added and many topics to expand on. In addition, pictures or graphics could be added as well. There is not much scientific information present, it is mostly just links to other Wikipedia pages of related topics. I will be adding more information soon, so if you have any suggestions, please reach out.

Thank you.

~~~~ Clairer744 (talk) 17:18, 12 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Please read MOS:SECTIONCAPS and comparable sections of Wikipedia's style manual. Please do not believe that adding images is necessary; young editors frequently get fixated on this issue, and older readers do not care. Please do not use the cliché "reach out" (here or anywhere else; it needs to be boycotted by literate humans, along with, e.g., "solutions" for anything but chemistry or crossword puzzles). Thanks! - Julietdeltalima (talk) 15:48, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the feedback, I will take it into account. I added an image as it is a criteria in my assignment, but I will remove it if that is necessary. I'm not exactly sure what the problem with saying "reach out" is, since this is just the talk page and I was under the impression I could write a somewhat more casually. However, I appreciate the reply and I will do my best to avoid using phrases that "literate humans" should boycott. Clairer744 (talk) 16:09, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]