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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 10:48, 14 May 2015 (UTC)
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Alex Behring
[edit]... that Alex Behring, chairman of the Burger King and Tim Hortons holding company, will also be chairman of the newly merged Kraft Heinz Company?
- Reviewed: Ruth Guler
- Comment: better hooks welcome!
Created by Edwardx (talk). Self-nominated at 21:50, 1 April 2015 (UTC).
- Will he be grilled on the witness stand? (In joke for DYK regulars) EEng (talk) 05:52, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
- Agree with EEng a little. Don't you think that it would be a better idea to avoid such sort of WP:CRYSTAL? It can be done if Edwardx would suggest some better hook. OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 05:21, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- honestly I was just making the joke. However, assuming reliable sources report that, if corporate Nature takes its course, whatshisname will be chairman of whsteveritscalled, we should probably phrase it as "slated to become" or something like that. EEng (talk) 06:08, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- Yeah that's better. OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 06:47, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, neutrally written. But there is some close paraphrasing:
- Source: Mr. Behring is a co-founder and the Managing Partner of 3G Capital, a global investment firm with offices in New York and Rio de Janeiro, since 2004.
- Article: Since 2004, Behring has been a co-founder and the managing partner of 3G Capital, a global investment firm with offices in New York City and Rio de Janeiro.
- Source: Mr. Behring was a co-founder and partner in Modus OSI Technologies, a technology firm with offices in Florida and Sao Paulo, from 1989 to 1993.
- Article: From 1989 to 1993, Behring was a co-founder and partner in Modus OSI Technologies, a technology company with offices in Florida, US, and São Paulo, Brazil.
- Generally, the page reads like a resume. Can you add any interesting aspects to his career, such as any accomplishments or awards? Something like that would make a good alt hook. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 21:25, 3 May 2015 (UTC)
- Yeah that's better. OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 06:47, 2 May 2015 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Alex Behring, slated to become chairman of the newly merged Kraft Heinz Company, has a BS degree in electrical engineering? EEng (talk) 00:53, 13 May 2015 (UTC)
with ALT1. OccultZone (Talk • Contributions • Log) 06:48, 13 May 2015 (UTC)
He had to get some kind of undergraduate degree before entering Harvard Business School. There's now more material in the article to make a better hook. How about:
- ALT2:
... that Baker Scholar Alex Behring has applied his management skills to burgers, coffee shops, and restaurants?We don't know if he was grilled on the witness stand. Yoninah (talk) 12:10, 13 May 2015 (UTC)