Template:Did you know nominations/Cardiac allograft vasculopathy

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 14:42, 22 February 2019 (UTC)

Cardiac allograft vasculopathy[edit]

Created/expanded by Whispyhistory (talk). Self-nominated at 19:52, 29 January 2019 (UTC).

  • @Whispyhistory: This article is new enough and long enough. The ALT0 hook facts are cited inline and the article is neutral. I have added ALT1 as a possible alternative hook. The phrase "in a transplanted heart progressively narrow and lead to dysfunction of the heart muscle or sudden death" occurs in the source and article so perhaps you could rework that bit. Otherwise the article is copyvio-free. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:36, 12 February 2019 (UTC)
  • Thanks @Cwmhiraeth:. Rephrased as per request. CAV affects upto half of recipients at 10 years. Is that still ok with ALT1?
  • Thank you. I have added "within ten years" to ALT1, because in twenty years, it might be more than 50% I suppose. Approving ALT0 (I cannot approve ALT1 because I proposed it). Cwmhiraeth (talk) 11:58, 12 February 2019 (UTC)