Template:Did you know nominations/Ethel Armstrong

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 15:49, 25 March 2018 (UTC)

Ethel Armstrong[edit]

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... ~~that Ethel Armstrong began working as a radiographer for the NHS on the day that it was founded, and was awarded an MBE in 2018 for seven decades of service? [1]~~
- ALT1:... that radiographer Ethel Armstrong worked for a pioneering breast screening unit in Liverpool for several years before the practice was adopted by the whole NHS? [2]

Created by Zeromonk (talk). Self-nominated at 15:45, 16 March 2018 (UTC).

reviewing Whispyhistory (talk) 18:33, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

Alt2 ...that English radiographer Ethel Armstrong worked for the National Health Service from the day that it was founded in 1948 until its 70th anniversary in 2018? Philafrenzy (talk) 20:39, 19 March 2018 (UTC)

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Lovely story, neutral, clear. Zeromonk has less than 5 dyk credits. Proposed hook too long. Alt1 and Alt2 good. Thank you Whispyhistory (talk) 06:19, 20 March 2018 (UTC)