Template:Did you know nominations/HMS Mantua
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 01:02, 30 January 2018 (UTC)
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HMS Mantua[edit]
- ... that in 1918 infected crew members aboard the HMS Mantua inadvertently spread the Spanish Flu to Africa? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
- ALT1:... that in 1918 the crew of the HMS Mantua inadvertently introduced the Spanish Flu to Africa? Source: [Barry, John M. (2005). The Great Influenza: The Epic Story of the Deadliest Plague in History. Penguin. ISBN 9780143036494.]. Per source, "On 15 August the HMS Mantua arrived there with 200 hundred crew suffering from influenza. Sweating black men loaded tons of coal into her, guided by several her crew. When the laborers returned home, they brought more than their wages. Soon influenza had spread through the force of men who coaled the ships." Source 2: [Goldsmith, Connie (2010-08-01). Influenza. Twenty-First Century Books. ISBN 9780761363767.]. Per source 2, "The British ship HMS Mantua, carrying 200 flu-stricken sailors, infected local workers in Freetown when it landed in mid-august. The dockworkers -those that survived- then infected the crew of every ship stopping to fill up on coal."
Created by SamHolt6 (talk). Self-nominated at 19:06, 10 January 2018 (UTC).
Thank you. Short and interesting hook about flu into Africa. Proposed hook ok- length and interest. New. The article length of readable prose looks too small - 1453 character count. Would you like to add a bit more background information. It's a nice story. source 2 looks like a Wikipedia article. Whispyhistory (talk) 11:35, 11 January 2018 (UTC)
- Sadly there is not much more to the ship than is currently in the article. The Mantua was notable for a few instances, but was in the end an ocean liner. SamHolt6 (talk) 02:43, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
- yes, its possible to add bit more. I looked at your sources....maybe a little about background or Tibbits and what artillery the ship carried etc "Following the outbreak of the war, vice-admiral Charles Tibbits took command of the ship. In 1915, he was requested to take caution after he grounded her." Whispyhistory (talk) 07:06, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
minor edits done character count 1501, ok to go @SamHolt6:. Whispyhistory (talk) 20:22, 20 January 2018 (UTC)
- yes, its possible to add bit more. I looked at your sources....maybe a little about background or Tibbits and what artillery the ship carried etc "Following the outbreak of the war, vice-admiral Charles Tibbits took command of the ship. In 1915, he was requested to take caution after he grounded her." Whispyhistory (talk) 07:06, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
