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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 11:04, 23 March 2020 (UTC)

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Jenny (orangutan)

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Jenny
Jenny
  • Reviewed: Burkhard Driest
  • Comment: 5x expanded since 24 Feb. Still finalising it

5x expanded by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 15:45, 29 February 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.

QPQ: Unknown
Overall: All good to go once a QPQ is done. Ergo Sum 18:51, 2 March 2020 (UTC)

Thank you @Ergo Sum:...May I ping you when I have a QPQ? Whispyhistory (talk) 18:59, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
Of course. Ergo Sum 22:42, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
@Ergo Sum: QPQ done. Thank you for being patient. Whispyhistory (talk) 18:32, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
Good to go. Ergo Sum 20:03, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
  • Hi, I came by to promote this, but don't see an inline cite for the hook fact. Yoninah (talk) 21:29, 16 March 2020 (UTC)
Apologies @Yoninah:...I have amended. "Charles Darwin paid a visit to London Zoo where Jenny became the first ape that he met". On 28 March 1838, Charles Darwin came to the Zoo to see Jenny. It was his first sight of an ape. [1]. Whispyhistory (talk) 05:46, 17 March 2020 (UTC)
  • Thank you. But honestly, I think you could do much more with the hook. It was also confusing to me at first why the image shows the ape dressed in children's clothes; I thought it was a parody. If you want to retain the mention of Darwin, you could write:
  • ALT1: ... that Charles Darwin's visits to the London Zoo to see Jenny (depicted), an ape that displayed human-like reactions, reinforced his view that man was descended from animals? Yoninah (talk) 11:28, 17 March 2020 (UTC)
  • ALT1a: ... that Jenny's (depicted) human-like behaviour at London Zoo reinforced Charles Darwin's view that man was descended from animals? Philafrenzy (talk) 13:18, 17 March 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks! We need a new review for ALT1a. Pinging @Ergo Sum:. Yoninah (talk) 15:10, 17 March 2020 (UTC)
  • Verified the hook. Ergo Sum 16:53, 17 March 2020 (UTC)
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