Template:Did you know nominations/Madrasa and tomb of Alauddin Khilji

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 02:16, 21 July 2019 (UTC)

Madrasa and tomb of Alauddin Khilji[edit]

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Tomb of Alauddin Khilji

... ~~that the Madrasa and tomb of Alauddin Khilji (pictured) is the first such madrasa (Islamic school)-tomb combination to be built in India?~~

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Huang Weilu

Created by Royroydeb (talk). Self-nominated at 10:18, 26 April 2019 (UTC).

Doing...-Nizil (talk) 11:51, 15 May 2019 (UTC)

@Nizil Shah: I have moved the page, gave assessments and done the QPQ. RRD (talk) 14:38, 17 May 2019 (UTC)

@Royroydeb: New, long enough, cited, neutral, no copyvio, image free licensed and would look ok at 100x100 px, QPQ done. The hook is not interesting enough and bit long. Can you propose another one or reword it?-Nizil (talk) 11:30, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

@Nizil Shah:

ALT1: ... that the tomb of Sultan Alauddin Khalji (pictured) is the first tomb to be built inside a madrasa, an Islamic school in India? RRD (talk) 13:42, 21 May 2019 (UTC)

@Royroydeb: It is still long and bit confusing. I tweak it a little to make it more hooky. How is it? -Nizil (talk) 16:54, 24 May 2019 (UTC)

ALT1a: ... that a tomb of the king (pictured) was built inside an Islamic school in Delhi, India?

@Nizil Shah: The fact that it is tomb of Alauddin Khalji and is the first such tomb to be built in a school in India is missing. RRD (talk) 15:35, 26 May 2019 (UTC)

@Royroydeb:, its OK to not have king's name and first built in the hook. The hook should sound interesting and should lead reader to the article. So do you find ALTa more interesting and easy to understand?-Nizil (talk) 07:00, 31 May 2019 (UTC)

@Royroydeb:. -Nizil (talk) 07:55, 8 June 2019 (UTC)

@Nizil Shah: I would still push for tomb of Alauddin Khalji instead oftomb of the king. RRD (talk) 15:37, 10 June 2019 (UTC)

ALT1b: ... that a tomb of the king Alauddin Khalji (pictured) was built inside an Islamic school in Delhi, India?

@Royroydeb: Is it OK?-Nizil (talk) 05:41, 14 June 2019 (UTC)

@Royroydeb:, please reply.-Nizil (talk) 05:34, 27 June 2019 (UTC)

Only hook review needed as I have proposed a new hook.-Nizil (talk) 05:34, 27 June 2019 (UTC)

@Nizil Shah: Okay to the new hook. RRD (talk) 16:28, 27 June 2019 (UTC)

@Royroydeb:@Nizil Shah: I considered ALT1a and ALT1b for approval, but I do have one concern. The photo used in this nomination depicts the outside of the school, rather than the tomb itself. It is possible to either use a different photo of the tomb, or put the (pictured) later in the sentence near word madrasa. I am open to other suggestions or arrangements. Otherwise I found no other concerns in this nomination. Flibirigit (talk) 03:47, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

I am also OK with whatever RRD suggests. File:Alauddin Khalji's Tomb 03.jpg depicting tomb is good alternative. Moving (pictured) is OK if tomb image is not used. -Nizil (talk) 13:59, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

Okay, I will wait for RRD to comment. Flibirigit (talk) 20:30, 17 July 2019 (UTC)

@Nizil Shah and Flibirigit: I have now changed the image. RRD (talk) 04:50, 20 July 2019 (UTC)

approving ALT1a and ALT1b without preference. Both hooks are mentioned inline and properly cited. The article adheres to all other DYK policies as mentioned in the original review. Flibirigit (talk) 15:20, 20 July 2019 (UTC)