Template:Did you know nominations/Mary Fenton

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 7 August 2018 (UTC)

Mary Fenton, Kavasji Palanji Khatau[edit]

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... that Mary Fenton, the first Anglo-Indian actress of the Parsi, Gujarati and Urdu theatre, was introduced to acting by her husband Kavasji Palanji Khatau? Hansen, Kathryn (1999). "Making Women Visible: Gender and Race Cross-Dressing in the Parsi Theatre". Theatre Journal. 51 (2): 141, 143. JSTOR 25068647 and http://www.oxfordreference.com/view/10.1093/acref/9780195644463.001.0001/acref-9780195644463-e-0284# for Gujarati and Urdu theatre

Reviewed: Wizard of Legend

Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 13:39, 19 July 2018 (UTC).

reviewing. Kavasji Palanji Khatau not new enough (unbold). QPQ pending, copyvio 2%. Checking rest Whispyhistory (talk) 07:13, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

@Nizil Shah: Interesting article topic and worth improving, especially if can get hold of an image. Created 30 June 2018, nominated 19 July 2018, not 5X expanded.Whispyhistory (talk) 07:49, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

Thank you for review. Drafts were created before but articles were moved to mainspace on 19 July and nominated. So both articles are new and ok for dyk. I can not find image from any sources so far. Will try more to find. Will look into copyvio if any. QPQ soon. Will ask for copyediting if required. Thanks. I am waiting for more inputs.-Nizil (talk)

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Overall: Reviewed, some grammar editing done so please check ok with you @Nizil Shah:. Copyvio is ok. Re-bolded husband. Fulfils DYK criteria, although I think there is more to this person to add, especially after reading about the play about her (last reference). Well done. I'll tick after QPQ Whispyhistory (talk) 18:50, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

@Whispyhistory:, QPQ submitted. Can you go through Kavasji Palanji Khatau as well and correct grammatical errors, if any? I would like to have it checked as well because it is also submitted for DYK. Thank you for detailed review. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 04:44, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

sure. Can you make sure there is an inline citation directly after your hook in the Mary article?Whispyhistory (talk) 05:33, 30 July 2018 (UTC)

for both. I rephrased some. Both articles have potential for expansion. Interesting subject. dyk criteria fulfilled. Whispyhistory (talk) 07:20, 31 July 2018 (UTC)