Template:Did you know nominations/Michael Peter Kaye

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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:00, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

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Michael Peter Kaye[edit]

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Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 18:04, 14 July 2018 (UTC).

  • @Whispyhistory and Philafrenzy: This article is new enough and long enough. The article is neutral and free from copyvios and close paraphrasing as far as I can see. QPQ has been done. There are two problems with the hook, one is that he co-founded an organisation called the "Society for Heart Transplantation" and it later became the "International Society for Heart and Lung Transplantation", so I think ALT1 is better than the original hook. The other problem is that although 1981 is mentioned in the lead, it is not in the main body of the text and needs to be cited there, or it could be inline cited in the lead, but that is a less good solution. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:30, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you @Cwmhiraeth:. You are correct. I think it's fixed now. ….. other founding members were well-recognized figures in transplantation, including Jack Copeland, Andrea Hastillo, Jacques Losman, Terence English, Stuart Jamieson, Michael Kaye, Edward Stinson, and Mark Thompson. The first official meeting of the newly formed ISHLT …..on March 14, 1981. [1]. Another possibility....
  • ALT2...that Michael Peter Kaye was the first director of what became the largest registry of heart and lung transplantation data in the world? the ISHLT International Registry for Heart and Lung Transplantation enters into its fourth decade. With data from more than 160,000 thoracic transplant recipients, the Registry is the largest repository of heart and lung transplant data in the world....Mike Kaye, the first Registry director,[2] Whispyhistory (talk) 18:45, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you. Approving ALT1 and ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:01, 19 July 2018 (UTC)
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