Template:Did you know nominations/Migrant Architects of the NHS (book)

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:36, 23 August 2018 (UTC)

Migrant Architects of the NHS (book)

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• ... that Migrant Architects of the NHS tells the story of how doctors from the Indian subcontinent emigrated to Britain and became general practitioners?

• Reviewed: Mary Blair Moody

Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 21:08, 9 August 2018 (UTC).

• This sounds like a fascinating book! The article is new enough and long enough. The hook is intriguing just for saying what the book is (kind of necessary in this case), and while I find it accurate, I do also have the worry that the Manchester University Press description might be a bit of a primary source. I've done some copyediting in the "Reception" section and removed a newspaper quote that seemed overly long without doing anything. QPQ present. Well done, would approve generally anyway but I do suggest taking a look at the citations around the hook. Raymie (t • c) 04:24, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

• Thank you. Clarified with secondary source. Whispyhistory (talk) 04:55, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

• That definitely helps. Raymie (t • c) 23:39, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

• @Whispyhistory and Philafrenzy: Hello, I came to promote this, but I think the "Reception" section would work better as a prose section as opposed to a list. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 01:03, 20 August 2018 (UTC)

Restoring tick as this is not a DYK concern. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:36, 23 August 2018 (UTC)