Template:Did you know nominations/Miriem Bensalah-Chaqroun

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The result was: promoted by valereee (talk) 12:29, 30 May 2019 (UTC)

Miriem Bensalah-Chaqroun[edit]

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Miriem Bensalah-Chaqroun

... ~~that in 2017, World Bank president Jim Yong Kim invited Miriem Bensalah-Chaqroun to the G20 Summit in Hamburg to help kickstart the Women Entrepreneurs Finance Initiative fund?~~
Source: Meriem Chaqroun Bensaleh Promotes Women Entrepreneurship at G20

Reviewed: ~~Coming soon~~ ~~Brenva Glacier (donated)~~ Mikhailovsky Palace

Created by Toreightyone (talk). Self-nominated at 22:28, 7 April 2019 (UTC).

Doing... starting review for nomination. Flibirigit (talk) 23:20, 22 April 2019 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited: - ?
Interesting: - ?

Image eligibility:

Freely licensed:
Used in article:
Clear at 100px: - ?

QPQ: - ?
Overall: Nomination submitted seven days after creation of the article. Length and sourcing are adequate. Article is neutral in tone. No plagiarism issues detected. The hook is reasonably interesting, and properly cited, but it currently links twice to 2017 G20 Hamburg summit. It needs to be reworked, and I recommend trying fewer blue links to avoid WP:SEAOFBLUE. Photo is properly licensed and used in the article, but I recommend using a slightly cropped version to make it more clear. Perhaps just the upper portion of the photo is best for this nomination, and the full photo can remain in the article. QPQ requirement is outstanding. Flibirigit (talk) 23:37, 22 April 2019 (UTC)

Adopting nomination The nominator has commented here that she many be too busy to continue. I adopt this nomination to move it forward, and I will donate a QPQ credit as well. Flibirigit (talk) 15:33, 18 May 2019 (UTC)

I have substituted cropped photos into this nomination. Flibirigit (talk) 16:42, 18 May 2019 (UTC)

Proposing an ALT1 below. Flibirigit (talk) 16:46, 18 May 2019 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that Moroccan businesswoman Miriem Bensalah-Chaqroun (pictured) helped kickstart the World Bank's Women Entrepreneurs Finance Initiative at the 2017 G20 Hamburg summit?
Source: Meriem Chaqroun Bensaleh Promotes Women Entrepreneurship at G20

Hey Flibirigit, I found some time this long weekend to come back to Wikipedia. I feel kinda bad about the QPQ credit so if you want you can use Template:Did you know nominations/Mikhailovsky Palace. I look forward to working with you on this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Toreightyone (talk • contribs)

Welcome back online. If you prefer to use your own QPQ, that is fine. I have updated the photo for you. Would you like to propose your own version of a hook? Flibirigit (talk) 15:11, 19 May 2019 (UTC)

Your ALT1 sounds awesome, if I may also suggest an alternative just for fun

ALT2: ... ~~that King Felipe VI of Spain awarded Moroccan businesswoman, Miriem Bensalah-Chaqroun with the Order of Civil Merit for boosting economic relations between the two countries?~~ Source: "Chairwoman of the Moroccan employers association, or CGEM, Miriem Bensalah Cheqroun, received Monday in Rabat the Cross of Grand Officer for the Order of Civil Merit of the Kingdom of Spain in recognition of her actions in promoting economic relations between Morocco and Spain."

But my main preference lies with ALT1. Thanks, Toreightyone (talk) 18:27, 19 May 2019 (UTC)

ALT2 is a good possibility, but it would need to indiciate "on behalf of King Felipe VI" or some other rewording. Yoninah, any thoughts on ALT1, ALT2 ot ALT2a? Flibirigit (talk) 19:29, 19 May 2019 (UTC)

ALT2a: ... that Moroccan businesswoman Miriem Bensalah-Chaqroun was awarded the Order of Civil Merit on behalf of King Felipe VI of Spain, for boosting economic relations between the two countries? Source: "Chairwoman of the Moroccan employers association, or CGEM, Miriem Bensalah Cheqroun, received Monday in Rabat the Cross of Grand Officer for the Order of Civil Merit of the Kingdom of Spain in recognition of her actions in promoting economic relations between Morocco and Spain."

I also prefer ALT1 for stronger wording. Yoninah (talk) 20:46, 19 May 2019 (UTC)

I have struck ALT2, but I cannot approve my own hooks ALT1 or ALT2a. Flibirigit (talk) 21:04, 19 May 2019 (UTC)

I substituted the images with a cropped portrait image, thanks to David Levy. Yoninah (talk) 09:49, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I came to do the review, but I'm wondering if you'd like to use a different picture that places her in august company:

Bensalah-Chaqroun (front row, fourth from right) with world leaders at the G20 Summit

Yoninah (talk) 10:25, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

I considered the group photo, but it is not very clear at 100px. I feel the cropped profile photo is much clearer and better portrays the subject of this biography. Flibirigit (talk) 16:30, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

OK. The article meets the DYK criteria in keeping with the review above. But it needs to be linked in at least one other Wikipedia article so it doesn't get an orphan tag. The ALT1 hook is verified and cited inline. The image is freely licensed, as is the other image in the article. The QPQ has been done. Yoninah (talk) 19:24, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

I linked to her page at University of Dallas under alumni, --Toreightyone (talk) 19:59, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

I also added a few income links. Flibirigit (talk) 20:18, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

Thank you both. ALT1 good to go and portrait image good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:50, 20 May 2019 (UTC)