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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:22, 31 August 2018 (UTC)

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Mulshankar Mulani[edit]

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  • ... that the Gujarati playwright Mulshankar Mulani wrote a play on a youth who was devastated due to his attraction to the western world? Source: Choksi, Mahesh; Somani, Dhirendra, eds. (2004). ગુજરાતી રંગભૂમિ: રિદ્ધિ અને રોનક (Gujarati Rangbhoomi: Riddhi Ane Ronak) [Compilation of Information regarding professional theatre of Gujarat]. Ahmedabad: Gujarat Vishwakosh Trust. pp. 117–119.

Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 06:59, 14 August 2018 (UTC).

  • . Thank you. New enough, copyvio 0%, long enough. In-line citations present. AGF with sources.
  • I reworded a little. I think we can make it read better. I'll look again later.
  • The life section could be divided possibly (early life, career etc).
  • Divided in Early life and Theatre career sections.
  • I assume "weekly" means a weekly newspaper.
  • Clarified.
  • Is there another way of explaining 'failure' and 'hit? ie. failure because didn't achieve good reviews or because didn't bring in revenue.
  • Commercially successful/critically acclaimed would be better. I will change.
  • "he wrote Barrister (1897) which was a play about a youth who was devastated due to his attraction to the western world."....might be helpful to expand and explain.
  • What should I explain? The source said the same thing without dwelling into details.
  • QPQ needed and I otherwise prefer ALT1 or even shorter ALT2. Whispyhistory (talk) 15:22, 16 August 2018 (UTC)
  • QPQ soon. I am OK with any of hooks you choose.-Nizil (talk)
  • Thank you @Nizil Shah:. Once QPQ done, I'll tick for ALT1 or ALT2 as they are clearer. Whispyhistory (talk) 14:21, 17 August 2018 (UTC)
  •  Done QPQ. ALT2 would be better because it is shorter and Gujarati playwright is already assumed from Gujarati theatre. So approve ALT2. Thank you for all the suggestions and corrections. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 05:25, 18 August 2018 (UTC)
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