Template:Did you know nominations/Walter E. H. Cockle

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The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:49, 4 September 2022 (UTC)

Walter E. H. Cockle

5x expanded by Philafrenzy (talk) and Whispyhistory (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 21:07, 23 August 2022 (UTC).

Interesting life, expanded enough already, on fine sources, no copyvio obvious. Hook: it might be more interesting with adding that the play was partly lost, while "new edition" suggests just minor changes to me. Article: I suggest to link some of the topics in the Oxford. There is a comma too much after "Wasserman". Waiting for more expansion and a qpq. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:39, 23 August 2022 (UTC)
- no tag, qpq done, thanks --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:34, 4 September 2022 (UTC)