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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:32, 15 November 2018 (UTC)

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Willie Borsch[edit]

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Created/expanded by Trekphiler (talk). Self-nominated at 07:02, 15 September 2018 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: created 14 Sep 2018, expanded 19 Sep 2018, 1674 characters (302 words) "readable prose size" at 19 Sep 2018, no longer a stub. Earwig's copyvio fine, AGF with offline source. I am not caught by the hook. It seems to me his one-armed driving style & false arm would be interesting to a broader audience, see suggestions below Find bruce (talk) 12:14, 21 October 2018 (UTC)

♠I don't disagree, the one-armed style & the fake arm are catchy, but IMO more kitch. For me, the appeal is in the irony of winning a title in a non-existent class (which is kind of a neat trick, like a dead guy narrating a movie).
♠What I'm hoping to get with the class hook is more "throughput": from the Main Page DYK to Borsch (where you find the fake arm), to the AA/FAs (for why there's no class to win), & from there (maybe) to a named car page, or maybe one of the driver pages, or maybe TF/FC. (And with any luck, drag racing fans will notice, & fill some of the redlinks along the way. ;p )
♠If a DYK got attention for Borche, & the AA/FAs, whatever the hook, tho, it'd suit me.
♠As an aside, since it's a named car, Winged Express should be italicized. TREKphiler any time you're ready, Uhura 12:53, 21 October 2018 (UTC)
I agree that fake arm is kitsch & have italicized Winged Express. As I have suggested alternative hooks & it appears that while you prefer your original but are happy with the alternatives, I need to request another reviewer to approve the own ALT hooks.
New reviewer requested Find bruce (talk) 23:31, 23 October 2018 (UTC)
  • Comment, I think the article needs cleanup, it is very interesting and unusual overall. Szzuk (talk) 22:03, 25 October 2018 (UTC)
  • Comment I think the content is interesting, but I agree with Szzuk that it needs cleanup. I think that should be done before linking it from the front page. Wugapodes [thɑk] [ˈkan.ˌʧɹɪbz] 04:45, 6 November 2018 (UTC)
  • Comment – I'll try to do MOS cleanup and get a review in tomorrow. – Reidgreg (talk) 20:51, 7 November 2018 (UTC)
    • Regarding cleanup, the articles Altered (drag racing) and Top Fuel do not uniformly apply capitalization to those terms. I went with the online sources which capitalized Top Fuel but not altered. I also added a little bit to support ALT1. – Reidgreg (talk) 03:53, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

Query: Needs a citation for his birth and death dates (which I did not spot in the online sources). Otherwise, article was new enough at time of nomination, is long enough, neutral, well-cited, and free of copyvio (Earwig scores are from a quote and proper nouns, AGF for offline source). Hooks are well-formatted, about 125–160 characters, cited, neutral and interesting. QPQ waived. – Reidgreg (talk) 03:53, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

Approved for all hooks – Reidgreg (talk) 16:17, 13 November 2018 (UTC)
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