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Your submission at Articles for creation: Town of Penfield, South Australia (August 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Dan arndt was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Fails WP:NGEO, lacks any sources or references.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Dan arndt (talk) 06:46, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Armoured Jupiter! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Dan arndt (talk) 06:46, 21 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Town of Penfield, South Australia

Hello, Armoured Jupiter. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Town of Penfield, South Australia, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 07:05, 21 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi i need my ip address removed from an article page edit, for Beverley south australia page. Armoured Jupiter (talk) 10:02, 12 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Ip address, hi I want the last edit ip address removed from , Beverley south australia page immediately.

I want the id address for Beverley south Australia Removed immediately. Armoured Jupiter (talk) 10:19, 12 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Town of Penfield, South Australia

Hello, Armoured Jupiter. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Town of Penfield".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. When you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 06:46, 21 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Please fix your edits of Islington Workshops article

Hello Armoured Jupiter, There are several things that need reversing or fixing among your recent edits to this article:

Information deleted from the infobox needs to be restored. I'm not sure why you have changed to an Australian Place infobox, but as you'll see, there is a problem with an unknown parameter. You might be better with Infobox Factory, as with Eveleigh Railway Workshops.
Your citations do not provide ready access to the sources because they are incomplete. For example, your citation, "A History of the South Australian Railways, Volume 5, 2011, p.136" doesn't state the author or publisher. It should be worded as
{{cite book|title= A history of the South Australian Railways volume 5: controversy and Mr Webb |last= Stewien|first= Ron |date= 2011 |location= Matraville NSW |publisher= Eveleigh Press |isbn= 9781876568610 }}</ref>{{rp|136}}
The "rp" coding allows you to show the page number in the body text but not have multiple lines of citation for the same work. To do that, give the first <ref> a name, such as "<ref name=SARhistoryVol5>", then for subsequent references just write "<ref name=SARhistoryVol5/>" followed by the new page number, for example "<ref name=SARhistoryVol5/>{{rp|138}}".
Headings should follow title case. Why have "Islington workshops" as a level 3 heading?
Terms such as "SA Gazette & Colonial Register", Gawler etc etc should be linked to their articles. For example, the newspaper should be coded as
<ref>{{cite news |title= Sales by auction |newspaper=[[South Australian Register|South Australian Gazette and Colonial Register]] |url= https://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/31750481?searchTerm=islington |volume= II |issue=61 |location=(Original, Adelaide. Digital reproduction, Canberra|publisher=National Library of Australia – [[Trove]] digital newspaper archive) |date=23 March 1839 |page=3 |access-date=7 August 2024}}</ref>
A particularly important link that needs to be included is to Webb. Without it, the reader won't know what the "Webb era" of profound change means.
You need to check terminology before you hit "Publish" -- random examples I see are "Victorian Railway Department", "defense", "center"and other US spellings.

I hope you take my comments positively, as they are meant. They reflect the fact that writing for Wikipedia is hard yakka, in no small measure because of citations and other conventions designed to achieve a degree of consistency in quality. Please post here back if you want to communicate; I'll watch for a while. Cheers, Simon – SCHolar44 🇦🇺 💬 at 14:09, 7 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]