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Herbert Bertram Strong

I have fixed all of the issues you mentioned about this article. I hope it is now fit for publication on Wiki.

Thank you, Michael --Michael W. Parker (talk) 03:42, 7 January 2015 (UTC)

Thanks for the valuable feedback

Thanks for your valuable feedback on: Draft:Drunk Motorcyclist Protocol. It has been revised if you have time to check it out. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.69.214.202 (talk) 00:53, 8 January 2015 (UTC)

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V. R. Vidyarthi

Dear Reviewer,

Regarding your feedback on the article titled "V. R. Vidyarthi", the contents are direct excerpts from a book called "Addamlo Vidyarthi", meaning Vidyarthi in the mirror, published by "Jayamitra Publications" on Mr. V. R. Vidyarthi compiling an analysis on his poetry by several noted scholars and poets. I can acquire a copy of this book and ship it to you if necessary.

Kindly guide me in making this article published successfully.

Sincerely, Lipika2005 Lipika2005 (talk) 02:48, 14 January 2015 (UTC)

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Regarding V. R. Vidyarthi

Dear Reviewer,

Regarding your feedback on the article titled "V. R. Vidyarthi", the contents are direct excerpts from a book called "Addamlo Vidyarthi", meaning Vidyarthi in the mirror, published by "Jayamitra Publications" on Mr. V. R. Vidyarthi compiling an analysis on his poetry by several noted scholars and poets. I can acquire a copy of this book and ship it to you if necessary.

Kindly guide me in making this article published successfully.

Sincerely, Lipika2005 Lipika2005 (talk) 05:05, 26 January 2015 (UTC)

You still haven't implemented the suggestion I made at the draft page, to make it more neutral. Also, I was not the one to complain about the offline references, but do know that there is no requirement for you to ship anything to anyone (I actually highly recommend against it. Arfæst Ealdwrítere 21:49, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

16:32:26, 30 January 2015 review of submission by Cleanbreak

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Could you please clarify what I need to change in this article? I absolutely understand that Wikipedia articles need to be neutral, but I'm unclear as to where I'm not complying with this. I don't include anything other than factual statements about the company - is it that I mention awards Clean Break have won? I've also included as many independent sources as I could find. My apologies for being dense here - I've never written a wiki article before and would really appreciate a steer as to where I'm going wrong! Many thanks, Caro Boss

Cleanbreak (talk) 16:32, 30 January 2015 (UTC)

The problem is with the tone of the article. Phrases like 'Clean Break commissions female playwrights to produce bold work' and 'the courses are all free of charge to participants and aim to create a safe environment' are overtly complimentary. Make it more neutral, and then come back to me. Arfæst Ealdwrítere 22:37, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

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I had an article written on "Sanjib Sahoo" which got rejected. I want to get some assistance on how to address this.

Is a phone conversation possible?

Thanks TH — Preceding unsigned comment added by WikicontributorTH (talk • contribs) 20:15, 2 February 2015 (UTC)

The problem with the article is that it is not neutral. You cannot praise or compliment the subject of the article: rather just state the facts. No, phone communication is not usually possible. Arfæst Ealdwrítere 22:41, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

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