User talk:CMTucker/Sandbox

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This is a nice start! Here are a few thoughts for possible improvements:

1. You might consider renaming the section titled "History of the Internet Kill Switch ...", as it provides context more than a history of the debate. Maybe "Background policies ..." or "Context ..."?
   
2. In the section "Criticisms ..." maybe you should replace "John Stewart" with "Media criticism" because you also talk about CNN.
   
3. Initially, I thought that putting the policy issues section first might create a better flow, but there are also good arguments for keeping it the way it is.
   

--JMBauer (talk) 17:31, 30 April 2011 (UTC)