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Hi, Candleabracadabra!
The article on "Garden & Gun" magazine was deleted for three reasons. First, it was created by a user named User:Garden&Gun, which seems an obvious violation of Wikipedia's guideline on Conflict of Interest.
Second, you mentioned Notability - the article had no mention of why the magazine falls under Wikipedia's guidelines on Notability.
Third, there was very little content in the article, and it read like an advertisement - you might want to review Wikipedia's guidelines on Advertising.
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- A new magazine for the sporting Southerner, Garden & Gun reflects the modern lives of affluent Southerners and those who aspire to the sporting life of the South. As its title alludes, Garden & Gun speaks equally to men and women for whom outdoor activities such as hunting, gardening, fishing, sailing, equestrian sports and conservation are more than just hobbies but the centerpieces of a luxurious lifestyle and subjects worthy of intellectual pursuit.
- Through one of the South's best assets - its writers - the magazine features great writing from formidable contributers, such as Clyde Edgerton, Pat Conroy and Jack Hitt. Likewise, the photography is spectacular and of the highest quality.
- Garden & Gun's definition of the new South and its footprint include not only the states below the Mason-Dixon line but also the Caribbean. Its western border is Louisiana, the northern line the Virginias, the eastern seaboard to the east and Venezuela to the south.
- G&G was created and is staffed by veterans from The New Yorker, Field & Stream and Charleston magazine.
- G&G represents a unique and aspirational lifestyle title that celebrates Southern heritage and history while displaying a decidedly contemporary approach.
Thanks, and happy editing! -- SatyrTN (talk / contribs) 15:50, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
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[edit]Thanks for citing your article. But just had to swing by to say your username definitely gave me a laugh. :) Calabe1992 21:48, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for the note and for your help with the article. I'm always happy to amuse. Take care. Candleabracadabra (talk) 18:10, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
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[edit]I have listed both Lichty Guitars and Roobie Red Tea for deletion discussions at WP:AFD. In general, I question your creation of Wikipedia articles for every small company that happened to get an award from Garden & Gun magazine. This seems to me like an effort at cross-promotion - "hey, we'll give awards to these companies, and then bootstrap those awards into Wikipedia articles." NawlinWiki (talk) 17:49, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- FYI if you look at the history of the Garden & Gun magazine article you will see that it does not respresent the desired version of the people in that publication's employ, and I would appreciate help in maintaining a non pr version. I had never heard of the magazine until I was researching an article on Merrimack Canoes which were featured in an article I was reading in another magazine. I am surprised that both subjects weren't covered here, but they are somewhat recent I suppose. As I wanted to read about the canoe company, but there wasn't an article on it, I started one. Same with the magazine and other subjects. And yes, I am finding lots of other interesting businesses in the "Made in the South" contest Garden & Gun hosts, so I was starting articles on those as well. Isn't that the way articles are supposed to be born here? Candleabracadabra (talk) 18:16, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Sole reliance on Garden and Gun, a feature magazine, makes your articles read as promotion. You're relying far too heavily on laudatory quotes, which I've excised from a few articles and substituted more appropriate language that avoids puffery. The subjects may be notable, but you need multiple sources, preferably not from a "fine living" style magazine, and you need to avoid the obviously promotional tone that your recent articles have acquired. Acroterion (talk) 21:27, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Your change is in error. While using quotations might not be necessary, the critiques of the work are entirely appropriate. You will find similar assessments in any good Wikipedia article. I have not relied solely on any one source, but certainly being selected by an independent panel of judges for recognition is worthy of note, just as including key details of these assessments is worth noting. For some reason I have been treated with lots assumptions of bad faith, attacks, and attempted deletions. It's certainly discouraging. Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:30, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Wikipedia editors are extremely sensitive to spam, or a hint of spam. Quotes are to be used sparingly, not scattered through the article. You appear to be editing in good faith, but you haven't quite absorbed the neutrality ethos that prevails here. Just the facts, no editorializing, and, please, use the articles as sources, not for direct quotes. Feature magazines are poor sources for objective, encyclopedic content. Acroterion (talk) 21:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Your explanation is appreciated. I am open to tweaks, but a handcrafted canoe made with a particular wood and brass fittings is not the same as an aluminum mass produced canoe. So the articles about these custom craftspeople and their products must include an accurate description of their wares. I am open to using alternative sources and have added several already. Please keep in mind that these articles have just been started. Improvements and expansions are most welcome. Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:46, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- "Accurate" can simply mean "high-quality canoes" or "hand-crafted fly rods." I have that issue of Garden and Gun, so I'm familiar with the subjects, and have no problem with their inclusion - you just need to (I say this in all sadness), avoid the sprightly prose of others. We get a lot of spam here, and it's ruthlessly deleted, because it would take the place over if it wasn't. Emulate Joe Friday: just the facts, ma'am. Acroterion (talk) 21:50, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Also, it's important to bear in mind that WP is free content, which means that quotation that is not absolutely essential is discouraged, since extensive quotes eat into copyrighted content, which may not be hosted here. Unless it's the the Gettysburg Address (which is public domain anyway), it's best done by paraphrasing. Acroterion (talk) 22:05, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Your explanation is appreciated. I am open to tweaks, but a handcrafted canoe made with a particular wood and brass fittings is not the same as an aluminum mass produced canoe. So the articles about these custom craftspeople and their products must include an accurate description of their wares. I am open to using alternative sources and have added several already. Please keep in mind that these articles have just been started. Improvements and expansions are most welcome. Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:46, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Wikipedia editors are extremely sensitive to spam, or a hint of spam. Quotes are to be used sparingly, not scattered through the article. You appear to be editing in good faith, but you haven't quite absorbed the neutrality ethos that prevails here. Just the facts, no editorializing, and, please, use the articles as sources, not for direct quotes. Feature magazines are poor sources for objective, encyclopedic content. Acroterion (talk) 21:42, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Your change is in error. While using quotations might not be necessary, the critiques of the work are entirely appropriate. You will find similar assessments in any good Wikipedia article. I have not relied solely on any one source, but certainly being selected by an independent panel of judges for recognition is worthy of note, just as including key details of these assessments is worth noting. For some reason I have been treated with lots assumptions of bad faith, attacks, and attempted deletions. It's certainly discouraging. Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:30, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
- Sole reliance on Garden and Gun, a feature magazine, makes your articles read as promotion. You're relying far too heavily on laudatory quotes, which I've excised from a few articles and substituted more appropriate language that avoids puffery. The subjects may be notable, but you need multiple sources, preferably not from a "fine living" style magazine, and you need to avoid the obviously promotional tone that your recent articles have acquired. Acroterion (talk) 21:27, 9 December 2011 (UTC)
Speedy deletion nomination of Oyster Fly Rods
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Speedy deletion nomination of Fisk Knives
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Speedy deletion nomination of Leigh Magar
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Copyright problem: Cedar Mountain, North Carolina
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Hi. Do you know if the Civil War-era Charleston Mercury has anything to do with the current one? On the current website they mention going to print in 2002[1], and don't say anything about being 150+ years old. Just wondering if you've seen anything else in your research. Spyder_Monkey (Talk) 01:29, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
- I updated the article to note that it ceased publishing in 1868. Thanks for your help with it and others. Take care. Candleabracadabra (talk) 18:30, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
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Speedy deletion nomination of Cabriana Sea Skiffs
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- Clearly the deletion was an error, plenty of very substantial coverage in reliable sources. Speedy deleting the article is particularly egregious and narrowminded. It wasn't promotion. It was factual and based on reliable coverage. Candleabracadabra (talk) 16:53, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
Hi, I would userfy the article for you... but I am not an admin and you need to contact them to do that, if they still can. Alot of your articles keep getting bounced back and I think the reason is that you are not following rules. The Sea Skiffs article read like an advertisement, just because the company exists and you have a source doesn't mean that the article can read like an ad. It has to be neutral and unbiased. I don't have a vendetta against you in the least, if you would like me to see your next article(s) feel free to post to my talk page. Goodluck and hopefully these articles start working for you :) Zzaffuto118 (talk) 18:32, 5 January 2012 (UTC)
- The article has been userfied to User:Candleabracadabra/Cabriana Sea Skiffs for you to work on at your leisure.
- The nominator for speedy deletion evidently felt that the statements in the article, focusing on aesthetics rather than notability of the company, was unduly promotional, regardless of the sourcing. I deleted the article because I agreed.
- If you are associated with this company in any way, please see Wikipedia:Conflict of interest for further guidance. ~Amatulić (talk) 01:16, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]I noticed your contributions to this article and your ignore all rules out of process self nomination of the article and I wanted to say - well done and thanks for your contributions - Youreallycan (talk) 03:27, 7 January 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi,i can help you with the article ?tercer cielo bye Carliitaeliza (talk) 16:33, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
- Si'. I started it. It needs expansion with citations to reliable sources. Buena suerte. Candleabracadabra (talk) 16:35, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
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Juan carlos is of nationality dominican Carliitaeliza (talk) 19:18, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
I translate of spanish wikipedia tercer cielo to english wikipedia,i add template musical groups ok? i have photos ok ,bye Carliitaeliza (talk) 19:26, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me. Can you add a discography (list of albums and dates). Take care. Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:02, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
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You removed photos of tercer cielo,work us two in the article i created the article tercer cielo and removed me, Carliitaeliza (talk) 00:31, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
Ok i understand ,the article is fantastic & pretty be good,continue work us two,an hug, Carliitaeliza (talk) 03:04, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
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Hi - did you still want a copy of that moved to your userspace? - Rjd0060 (talk) 16:12, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
- Yes please. Candleabracadabra (talk) 16:40, 3 March 2012 (UTC)
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deviled crab
[edit]I'm not sure what you're trying to say in the description of a deviled crab. It's a croquette with crab meat surrounded by breading. The breading is on the outside, the crab is filling up the middle. Am I missing something? Zeng8r (talk) 03:37, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
- You were missing the breading. You also removed a helpful photo that illustrated the cultural context of this simple and traditional Ybor City comfort food. Candleabracadabra (talk) 18:20, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
- The breading is already mentioned in the same opening description. Technically, it's not the filling; it's what being filled. Anyway, your latest edits to the article look good.
- If you're referring to the photo of the Carmine's sign, I removed it because it was just a painting of a croquetta and prominently displayed the restaurant name. As a crab connoisseur myself, I enjoy their version but considered the photo to be overly promotional. So one day while eating lunch, I paused to get a shot of an intact crab and an opened one to replace the photo of the sign. It's a gray area, tho, so feel free to put it back if you feel strongly about it.
- And, hey, since you're obviously a fellow aficionado of the finer things that Tampa has to offer, would you consider helping to expand the History of Tampa and/or History of Ybor City articles, especially the more recent history? I've done a LOT of work on those two over the past few years and would be happy to pass along the torch... Zeng8r (talk) 18:45, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
- Since the breading of deviled crabs seems to be thick, I deemed it important to note that as a fundamental quality right up front. I'm also okay with saying what it is (crab croqutette) and then explaining the prep (as it is written now). That it is breaded and that it is deep fried seem to me to be critical distinguishing characteristics. I'm also not convinced that the stuffing is just crab or even mostly crab, and the way it was written seemed to give that impression.
- As far as the photo of the signboard (as seen in this version http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Deviled_crab&oldid=481280809) it includes the name as "devil crab", shows a partial street view from Ybor along with some architectural detailing, and depicts an advertisement of the product that employs quaint simplicity in a way that captures context and feel for me. These are not high falutin food items. This is a product sold by small independent merchants advertising their wares in an old fashioned traditional kind of way. I think that's relevant. I saw your comment on the talk page, but I didn't want to argue about it. :) Cheers. Good eating. And enjoy your weekend. Candleabracadabra (talk) 19:26, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
- P.S. It would be nice to have an article on Taco Bus and other notable Tampa area institutions of eating. There seems to be quite a lack of coverage for topics I consider of substantial interest and notoriety (not to mention notability). Candleabracadabra (talk) 19:28, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
- And, hey, since you're obviously a fellow aficionado of the finer things that Tampa has to offer, would you consider helping to expand the History of Tampa and/or History of Ybor City articles, especially the more recent history? I've done a LOT of work on those two over the past few years and would be happy to pass along the torch... Zeng8r (talk) 18:45, 31 March 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]No disambiguation page was necessary. The other article doesn't exist and two pages are to be handled using a hatnote. Please revert. --Walter Görlitz (talk) 01:50, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
- I am working on the new article. Thanks. Candleabracadabra (talk) 01:52, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. In the future, please write the article first then move things around. I don't know if the new article has sufficient references to support the notability of the subject and its inclusion on Wikipedia. --Walter Görlitz (talk) 19:18, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
Wikiproject Tampa Bay
[edit]I see that you've been busy around here! It's an extremely hectic time of the year for me right now, so I won't be around here much until June. In the meantime, when you create a new article about something or someone related to the Tampa area, please drop a {{TampaWikiproject}} tag on the talk page. That will automatically group it together with other local-flavored articles, making them easier to find. Also, feel free to join the Tampa Bay wikiproject if you want, although it's been so quite for so long that it doesn't mean much any more.
Anyway, good job and happy editing!... Zeng8r (talk) 10:28, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
- Will do. Thanks for the note! Stay cool. Candleabracadabra (talk) 15:01, 5 April 2012 (UTC)
Pohoy
[edit]Just a heads up, I will be making extensive changes to the article Pohoy that you started. The web site and newspaper you cited as sources give a very limited view of the Pohoy. For instance, the Uzita and Moscoso chiefdoms may not have been contemporaneous with the Pohoy. Uzita and Moscoso are known only from contacts with the Narvaez and de Soto expeditions in the first half of the 16th century, while the Pohoy are known from the 17th and 18th centuries. In the early 17th century the Pohoy lived in an area on the south side of Tampa Bay that had been occupied by the Uzita in the 16th century. On another point, Luca, Guacozo, Vicela, and Tocaste were towns along the Withlacoochee River that the de Soto expedition passed through in 1539. It is not known what tribes or chiefdoms they belonged to. The attacks carried out by the Tocobaga and Pohoy in 1611 were not against Spanish settlements, but rather against Christianized Indians, probably Timucua, living along the lower Suwannee River.
I have John H. Hann's Indians of Central and South Florida 1513-1763 and Jerald Milanich's Florida's Indians from Ancient times to the Present at hand, and will be picking up Milanich's Florida Indians and the Invasion from Europe from the library tomorrow, and will use them to revise the article. I urge you to do more research on a subject before starting an article. This will help to establish the notability of the subject (i.e., coverage in multiple independent sources) and help in writing a decent article. -- Donald Albury 01:47, 6 April 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the note. I went with what I found the sources I could find. I'm glad you'll be fixing up and expanding the article. As you've noted, I don't know much about the subject. Candleabracadabra (talk) 15:17, 6 April 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi,
I moved it because it turns out that a bunch of counties have an Environmentally Sensitive Lands Protection Program, but each pertains to that county only. Is there a way around this? Name it generally, and then list the specific ones in a separate article? What do you think? If you google it, you'll see there are many. Best wishes, MathewTownsend (talk) 00:42, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
- I think they all have slightly different names. Definitely an article on the overarching subject would be interesting (Are they all funded the same way? Where was the first one? How do they differ from SWFWMD's funding model and objectives? Are there controversies over this approach? funding model? Who pays to maintain the preserves once established? Once the 30 years of sales tax is up (in the case of ESLPP, (haven't seen yet if others are set up the same)? Presumably voters will do another round of bond issuance? Does the funding model ever switch from acquisition to maintenance?). The size and scope of preserves established under these programs is very impressive. The one you started an article on in Sarasota County for example has set up very large and impressive preserves in the last 10-15 years. The ones in Hernando and Brevard seem to be named slightly differently and to use different acronyms. Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:46, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
- And there's ELAPP - Hillsborough County I'm not usually good at disentangling this type of stuff! MathewTownsend (talk) 01:04, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
- By design each county seems to use a different name. So I don't think there's anything really to untangle? Probably my ummm pointer at the top of the page you made isn't needed either. See alsos or a link to a single page with the various programs would suffice... Candleabracadabra (talk) 01:10, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
- And there's ELAPP - Hillsborough County I'm not usually good at disentangling this type of stuff! MathewTownsend (talk) 01:04, 13 April 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi Candleabracadabra, that particular part of the article has been a bone of contention for a while now. There's hardly a department of geology in the world that doesn't get funding from the oil & gas industry, as noted in the earlier edit summary. However, thanks for the other improvements that you've made, it certainly reads better now. Mikenorton (talk) 16:11, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the note Mike. I could see omitting that content, except that the bit immediately preceding it is from a PR person at the U saying something along the line of "the research isn't funded by the oil companies". If that's to be included then it seems only reasonable to me to note what funding the deparment receives from those same (disassociated) sources.
- I also found the article a bit perplexing in mixing the natural phenomenon with the energy extraction technique. These seem like two different and quite differentiated subjects. At the very least, the energy extraction technique should get top billing as it is a bigger issue in contemporary times. For someone wanting to read about the extraction technique to find that the subject is relegated to second billing behind a natural phenomenon is a bit weird. Perhaps this has been discussed on the talk page? Anyway, I appreciate your courteous note and thank you for sharing your opinion. Candleabracadabra (talk) 23:06, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
- Well there's an intense discussion going on about this on the talk page, so feel free to weigh in with your views. We really need a good source that says there is a conflict of interest. If the existing sources don't say so, it's not our job to fill in the gaps in my view.
- As to the 'mixing', hydraulic fracturing is a natural phenomenon, the production technique just exploits the same physics - rock gets fractured by high-pressure fluids either way. You could argue for two separate articles, but I think that might be difficult to do. Mikenorton (talk) 23:15, 26 April 2012 (UTC)
- The idea that the natural phenomenon is synonymous to the drilling technique is wacky. That's like saying that a natural oil seep is the the same as drilling for oil with rigs. Or that airplanes are a form of bird because both fly. The differences are many and they are immense. Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:46, 27 April 2012 (UTC)
- We'll have to disagree on that one. I learnt all about hydraulic fracturing decades (sadly it is that long ago) before I heard about its use in oil and gas production. Mikenorton (talk) 15:30, 27 April 2012 (UTC)
- The idea that the natural phenomenon is synonymous to the drilling technique is wacky. That's like saying that a natural oil seep is the the same as drilling for oil with rigs. Or that airplanes are a form of bird because both fly. The differences are many and they are immense. Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:46, 27 April 2012 (UTC)
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- Um, what? I don't mean to be a talk page lurker, but I noticed the recent addition of the warning above and couldn't help seeing what was going on.
- From what I can tell, Candleabracadabra followed proper procedure in removing a "proposed for deletion" banner at Parker Milner after adding more info and references to the article, and I don't see any reverts at all. Now, I have no opinion on whether or not the goalie in question is notable enough for an article; that should be discussed on the article's talk page, which was blank when I checked a few minutes ago. But I do know that to accuse Candleabracadabra of engaging in edit warring here is ridiculous. So there's my two cents. Zeng8r (talk) 21:43, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
- Indeed yes, anyone at all, even the person who wrote the article, can remove a Prod (except a BLP prod, without even needing to give a reason or to improve the article. The recourse if one thinks it unjustified is AfD, (which is where the article now appropriately is.). The warning messages are inappropriate. Candleabracadabra, you would be fully in order if you wish to remove them. DGG ( talk ) 22:14, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
- I believe the warning is in relation to the Buddy Fletcher article. Candleabracadabra (talk) 03:01, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- Indeed yes, anyone at all, even the person who wrote the article, can remove a Prod (except a BLP prod, without even needing to give a reason or to improve the article. The recourse if one thinks it unjustified is AfD, (which is where the article now appropriately is.). The warning messages are inappropriate. Candleabracadabra, you would be fully in order if you wish to remove them. DGG ( talk ) 22:14, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
- Oh. Well, I"m not getting into that one, either. While it might have been warranted, a 3RR warning is less effective and more adversarial than a personal note. This essay is good to keep in mind. Let's all just get along :) Zeng8r (talk) 14:38, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]If the claims in Caples Jefferson Architects are wrong, just what claims are wrong , and how do you know it? A claim of hoax and lying needs some support besides mere assertion. Which of the listings did you investigate and find false? (Indeed the hoax has already been disproved by the evidence that they did design at least some of the buildings). You need at this point to either specify or withdraw the comments. If what you say is right, and you can show it, you will have done the encyclopedia a service. DGG ( talk ) 22:14, 28 April 2012 (UTC)
- The article is getting a lot better. Several corrections have been made. As far as I can tell the firm did not design the Queens Theater in the Park. There was another building that they didn't design, but did an addition to. Several other projects were renovations or are yet to be built. It's nice that so many editors have helped fix the article and make it more accurate. The photo does not look real to me. I also think it fails the fair use test so I'm surprised it hasn't been removed. I considered removing everything that was unverified, but I didn't want to disrupt the AfD. As the article is getting fixed up I expect we can soon remove the hoax tag. If there is a better indication that an article contain misinformation I would have used that one. If you look at what the article was, I think it constitutes a dishonest depiction of the firm exaggerating their work and accomplishments. It looked like a piece of paid editing and was false advertising unsuitable for an encyclopedia. It's a lot better now and several editors have contributed to the effort. I would like to think I helped in unravelling what is real from what was claimed. Take care and have a great weekend. Candleabracadabra (talk) 03:01, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- the tags you were looking for are {{disputed}} for the article as a whole, and {{dubious}} to be added after the questioned information. DGG ( talk ) 17:25, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
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- I don't really think it's a copyvio. It's attributed and in quotes. But I will eliminate that portion. Candleabracadabra (talk) 16:45, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- I should clarify my original response to note that I was trying to explain that the copyvio triggered portion was attributed and in quotes. In response to this notice I removed that portion. Candleabracadabra (talk) 20:40, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- You're free to write a new article in your own words; the source is here. However, I won't restore it — you only changed a few words here and there from the source, and that's improper close paraphrasing: when you do that, you're not writing in your own words. Nyttend (talk) 19:35, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- Actually, the coren bot identified a red flag because I wrote in the article "According to xyz source" and then included a quotation I thought was interesting. I trimmed that out. What was left was fairly short and if it was a copyvio I'd like a chance to look at it and learn from my mistakes. Thank you. Candleabracadabra (talk) 19:39, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- As far as copyright is concerned, the new page is entirely fine. However, could you rework the referencing? It's much easier to understand the source for a particular sentence if you put each citation immediately after the information that it references, rather than putting all of the citations together at the end. Nyttend (talk) 20:35, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- I'd still like to see the deleted page. I don't remember what I had there. Once I've had a look and gotten what I need from it you're most welcome to delete it forever. Once that's accomplished, I'm happy to improve the citations in the current version of the article. Candleabracadabra (talk) 20:38, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- You don't need to see the deleted page; it's virtually the same as the "here" link, as I told you already. Moreover, as Eeekster said, we don't make deals; you're always responsible to follow policy regarding proper sources. Nyttend (talk) 02:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
- I'd still like to see the deleted page. I don't remember what I had there. Once I've had a look and gotten what I need from it you're most welcome to delete it forever. Once that's accomplished, I'm happy to improve the citations in the current version of the article. Candleabracadabra (talk) 20:38, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- As far as copyright is concerned, the new page is entirely fine. However, could you rework the referencing? It's much easier to understand the source for a particular sentence if you put each citation immediately after the information that it references, rather than putting all of the citations together at the end. Nyttend (talk) 20:35, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- Actually, the coren bot identified a red flag because I wrote in the article "According to xyz source" and then included a quotation I thought was interesting. I trimmed that out. What was left was fairly short and if it was a copyvio I'd like a chance to look at it and learn from my mistakes. Thank you. Candleabracadabra (talk) 19:39, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
I've been working on improving the article, and have added more inline citations. Please feel free to help with the efforts! Northamerica1000(talk) 17:45, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- I will have a look when I get a chance. Thanks for the note. Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:31, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
Speedy deletion nomination of Haffen Brewery
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- Could someone please restore this article to my userspace. This was a major Brewery in the Bronx for many decades. Unclear how it could be a speedy candidate? I suggest taking it to a deletion discussion if you really deem it unworthy of inclusion. It had only just been created. Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:29, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
[3] There were even cool ads for it! End prohibition, bring it back! Candleabracadabra (talk) 21:59, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
April 2012
[edit] Welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to contribute to the encyclopedia, but when you add or change content, as you did to the article City Hotel (Sonora, California), please cite a reliable source for your addition. This helps maintain our policy of verifiability. See Wikipedia:Citing sources for how to cite sources, and the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Please provide at least one source when creating an article. Eeekster (talk) 23:30, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- I've cited reliable sources for the Haffen Brewery and yet it was speedily deleted. If you restore it I will ad references to the City Hotel (Sonora, California) article. Deal? Candleabracadabra (talk) 23:32, 29 April 2012 (UTC)
- We don't make "deals" with regards to the requirement for providing sources. Eeekster (talk) 01:45, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]Userfied at User:Candleabracadabra/Haffen Brewery. Good luck. -- Alexf(talk) 01:06, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
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Musicals
[edit]Thanks for your nice note. If you plan to do more work on musicals, you might want to take a look at the WP:MUSICALS article structure page, which helps us to give a consistent look and feel to the articles about musicals. Plus, some good examples of articles in the area might be Her Majesty's Theatre (for a theatre) and Carousel (musical) for a musical. We generally try to follow the advice in WP:REDLINK, which says that if something urgently needs an article, then redlink it; otherwise, don't link it until you write an article on the topic. Personally, I generally try to focus on the musicals that were the most important ones in any period. That way, when someone sees a list of works by an author, or a list of works that were performed in a particular theatre, the blue-linked ones will be the most important ones, and that way we can help a reader to find the most interesting historical information. All the best! -- Ssilvers (talk) 17:10, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
- That makes some sense, but a subject's most notable works should be noted in the article's text. If projects are notable they should be linked. If there aren't articles on them yet, that is easily remedied. Take care. Thanks again for you're well executed reorganiztion edits that dramatically improved the article on In Gay New York. Candleabracadabra (talk) 20:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
Google books
[edit]Hi. If you search in google books paste the url into here and it will make the full refs for you, OK?♦ Dr. Blofeld 20:15, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
- Genius! I will try it. Thank you and for your edits. Candleabracadabra (talk) 20:20, 30 April 2012 (UTC)
Great article :). I have full JSTOR and LexisNexis access, so if you see anything in the future you want to write about, drop me a talkpage note or email and I'll find whatever sources I can. Ironholds (talk) 09:06, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
- In fact, I've granted you the "autopatrolled" right, a user right given to editors trusted to create consistently decent content. Keep up the great work! Ironholds (talk) 09:08, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
- Will do. Thank you for your kind note. Can you make sense of the midden v. mound distinction? I tried looking into it a bit, but it doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Take care. Candleabracadabra (talk) 13:54, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
- Mound is just an artificial hill, usually; a midden is an artificial hill made of refuse :). Ironholds (talk) 18:33, 3 May 2012 (UTC)
- Will do. Thank you for your kind note. Can you make sense of the midden v. mound distinction? I tried looking into it a bit, but it doesn't make a lot of sense to me. Take care. Candleabracadabra (talk) 13:54, 1 May 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]In your creation of Kelly Evans you included the unsourced statement "She is a lot better looking than cohost Andrew Ross Sorkin." Wikipedia is an encyclopedia. Certainly, you are aware by now that you should not be doing things like this. Hipocrite (talk) 16:39, 23 May 2012 (UTC)
DYK for Cypress dome
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- The article got 5375 views on May 24! Thanks for expanding it. —hike395 (talk) 03:41, 25 May 2012 (UTC)
blanking for deletion to make way for Campaign button (political). Two subjects do not require a disambig page and this is obviously the major subject.
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[edit]Can photograph credits be required as in Caples Jefferson Architects? Candleabracadabra (talk) 15:03, 1 June 2012 (UTC)
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Dorignac's
[edit]Hi. Dorignac's! Ooops, I see you're still editing the article, so I'll keep away for a bit to avoid edit conflicts. We might add that they were fortunate not to flood in the Katrina levee failure disaster of 2005, and were hence an early reopener in the area [5] [6], as well as their well known wine & liquor selection. Cheers, -- Infrogmation (talk) 19:11, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
- No problem. Happy for the help. The first article I cited covered the beverage and Katrina issues a bit and noted increased beverage sales post-Katrina. Might also be worth noting th etwo remodels in the 1980s and more recently (the latest in part to sell more bevs). I think that's noted in that article as well.
- More importantly, is crawfish pie a pot pie or does it need a separate article? What about crawfish Monica? I'm also planning to start an article on Bittersweet Plantation Dairy. As luck would have it I believe they sell creole cream cheese! They also seem to specialize in Bulgarian style yogurt, whatever that is... What is pickle meat? And what about olive salad? The world wants to know!!! Bring your camera... Candleabracadabra (talk) 19:21, 15 June 2012 (UTC)
Hi, Canderlabracadabra! I think we need to talk about the American Indian Schools.
You argue that the school had independent notability but I do not believe it has been demonstrated. Study the article American Indian Model Schools very carefully. All of the relevant information on all three schools is in this article. Any individual school article will merely duplicate the info. The administration and school culture is no different among any of the schools. The schools have insufficient differentiation.
Think about public high schools in a large school district, which have different histories, cultures, practices, and relationships.
In any case, I started the discussion at the schools WikiProject: Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Schools#American_Indian_Model_Schools_-_Separate_articles_on_individual_schools
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- American Indian Charter School is exceptionally notable. It is one of the most studied and controversial charter schools in existence. The American Indian Model Schools charter school system you note grew out of it. Candleabracadabra (talk) 18:05, 18 June 2012 (UTC)
Greetings, Candleabracadabra. The recent edits you made to the lead of the above-named article will almost certainly be quickly changed and/or challenged so I would suggest that you defend or prepare to defend them on the article's talk page. Providing edit summaries, particularly when making changes to politically sensitive articles, is always recommended. Regards. Badmintonhist (talk) 20:46, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Did you have a question about my edits or the reasoning behind them? Why do you think I should prepare to defend them?
- That article is a mess. At least the introduction is a little better now. Candleabracadabra (talk) 18:55, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- Actually, I wasn't too thrilled with your changes. They seemed unnecessarily wordy. In any case, I pretty well knew that other editors would soon be changing them (as I would be if they didn't) but I wanted to hear your rationale for them first. As you see, a couple of other editors did change them. Badmintonhist (talk) 20:26, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
- It's particularly unfortunate that the crux of Anthony's comments on the issue of abortion have been lost in the edits that followed mine. Context matters. I'm afraid the baby has been lost along with the bathwater. Candleabracadabra (talk) 16:31, 23 June 2012 (UTC)
- Actually, I wasn't too thrilled with your changes. They seemed unnecessarily wordy. In any case, I pretty well knew that other editors would soon be changing them (as I would be if they didn't) but I wanted to hear your rationale for them first. As you see, a couple of other editors did change them. Badmintonhist (talk) 20:26, 22 June 2012 (UTC)
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Florence, South Carolina (ACL Depot)
[edit]The article would need some work if it were real, but I don't believe Atlantic Coast Line Depot (Florence, South Carolina) is truly on the National Register of Historic Places. I'm going to consult WikiProject NRHP and Trains about this. ----DanTD (talk) 00:06, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
- Okay. You did see [7] right? I always find their listing a bit muddled. Any clarification you have are most welcome. The building is real anyway. :) At least if seeing is believing... Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:16, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
- Yes, I saw the link to NRHP.com, and I know full-well that the building is real, partially because I took pictures of it. NRHP.com is usually not the most reliable source. There's a discussion of this over on WikiProject:NRHP right now, and if it's any consulation, I certainly appreciate the detail you've added to your article, that Florence (Amtrak station) doesn't have. ----DanTD (talk) 13:41, 27 June 2012 (UTC)
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Carrabelle River Bridge
[edit]I saw you asking another editor about bridge information. If you can decipher it, this PDF from the State of Florida has bridge information. (Don't blame me if you go blind trying to read the tiny print) Gamweb (talk) 15:05, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
American Indian Schools
[edit]Hi! Please see Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Schools#American_Indian_Model_Schools_and_duplicate_articles WhisperToMe (talk) 15:37, 1 August 2012 (UTC)
- I notice you are still contributing to Wikipedia, but have not responded to my argument. Do you now agree with the argument I suggested? WhisperToMe (talk) 18:28, 31 August 2012 (UTC)
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I just noticed this article and wanted to thank you for writing it up. If you ever need help getting the right diacritics or etymology for a Vietnamese name, I'd be glad to figure it out for you. – Minh Nguyễn (talk, contribs) 04:28, 10 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the offer and for your fixes to the article. I look forward to calling on you in the future for assistance. Take care. Candleabracadabra (talk) 12:54, 11 September 2012 (UTC)
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Florida Women's Hall of Fame
[edit]Hi there. I just now noticed that the Florida Women's Hall of Fame was the original article you created, before you moved it to the Florida Commission....etc. Just wanted you to know I wasn't trying to over-ride anything you had done. My moving the page was to try and save it. The tag that was on there was threatening deletion for lack of notability. I think the way you had the article was fine with notability. But moving it back to naming it the Hall of the Fame does, I certainly hope, make it harder for someone to propose deletion. — Maile (talk) 01:17, 20 October 2012 (UTC)
- I understand and agree with you entirely. Take care and have a nice weekend. Candleabracadabra (talk) 01:27, 20 October 2012 (UTC)
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I've reverted your unexplained revert of my removal of spammed blog links in the External links section of addition of Creole cream cheese. I believe you know how to use edit summaries and that reverting anyone's edits requires some explanation. --Ronz (talk) 21:18, 18 November 2012 (UTC)
- You removed an external link to a recipe page covering how to prepare the article subject, including ingredients and instructions. The loss of a connection to this information has degraded the usefulness of the article. Please restore the link or find a suitable replacement. Thank you. Candleabracadabra (talk) 17:36, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
- See WP:NOTRECIPE and Wikibooks Cookbook.
- If you'd like to add a link to an appropriate recipe from Wikibooks Cookbook, it would be helpful. --Ronz (talk) 22:33, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
- If you don't like the recipe pages I used you are free to choose a different link that you think is more appropriate. I don't think Wikicookbooks is any more valid than a New Orleans webpage covering the subject, but the main point is that the recipe be linked to so the article is most useful to readers. Candleabracadabra (talk) 01:58, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- Generally, we don't link recipes. I'm not sure what exception might apply in this case. If you're interested in starting a discussion at WT:EL, I'll be interested in seeing what others have to say.
- Here is the last discussion I can find on the general issue. --Ronz (talk) 02:17, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- Thank you for linking to the discussion. I read it and the consensus seems pretty clear that a recipe page can be a useful external link that helps readers understand a subject better, although decisions should be made on a case by case basis. I have not spammed any website and used what seems an appropriate source for information on the dish's recipe. As I've indicated, I don't have a major preference on what source is used, but I think a recipe page would be a useful link for that article. Candleabracadabra (talk) 02:27, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- If you don't like the recipe pages I used you are free to choose a different link that you think is more appropriate. I don't think Wikicookbooks is any more valid than a New Orleans webpage covering the subject, but the main point is that the recipe be linked to so the article is most useful to readers. Candleabracadabra (talk) 01:58, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
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[edit]Creating multiple short, poor articles and tagging them for someone else to improve is not a good way to help make Wikipedia better. Instead why not focus on one article and improve it yourself, then you would be making a proper contribution--Jac16888 Talk 22:18, 19 November 2012 (UTC)
- Please cease interfering with my article creations in a destructive manner. If you don't like or respect my work, ignore it. I don't create articles on non-notable subjects and your deletions violate fundamental Wikipedia policies. The articles on Gonzalo Arango Arias and Fanny Buitrago were brand new. They will be improved over time. Please restore them and do not attack my work in the future. You are part of the problem of unconstructive, rude, and inconsiderate people on Wikipedia who lack courtesy and make the editing process here less enjoyable than it should be. Shape up! You should also consult the WP:Before and WP:notability pages, as well as the pillars of the community.Candleabracadabra (talk) 01:54, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- It's difficult to be destuctive when your articles are not themselves productive. Adding badly/incompletely translated articles and expecting somebody else to fix them is not collaboration it's making Wikipedia worse.--Jac16888 Talk 18:40, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
- Please stay away from me and my article contributions. Thank you. Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:34, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
- I will continue to take any action I deem warranted against any contributions you make which are not an improvement to Wikipedia, if you have a problem with that then you can prevent it by improving the quality of your contributions--Jac16888 Talk 18:18, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
- Please stay away from me and my article contributions. Thank you. Candleabracadabra (talk) 00:34, 21 November 2012 (UTC)
- It's difficult to be destuctive when your articles are not themselves productive. Adding badly/incompletely translated articles and expecting somebody else to fix them is not collaboration it's making Wikipedia worse.--Jac16888 Talk 18:40, 20 November 2012 (UTC)
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- Please see Talk:Sandy_Hook_Elementary_School_shooting#Order_in_the_lead regarding the ordering of events in the lede, i.e., the shooting of the students then the killing of the mother is preferred because of the emphasis/focus. Regards, AzureCitizen (talk) 23:15, 20 December 2012 (UTC)