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Your submission at Articles for creation: High Commissioner for the fight against child poverty (September 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by GrabUp was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please cite more sources.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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GrabUp - Talk 16:32, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Cuentaderevision! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! GrabUp - Talk 16:32, 8 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hector Izquierdo Triana (September 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Utopes was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Utopes _{(talk / cont)} 05:27, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Thanks for creating a draft!

Hello Cuentaderevision, welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Liance, and I've been editing here for a while. I wanted to thank you for submitting Draft:Hector Izquierdo Triana to WikiProject Articles for Creation and helping to grow the encyclopedia! We appreciate your contributions and hope you stick around. I can see you've already started writing draft articles, so here are a few more resources that might be helpful:

The Teahouse - ask Wikipedians for general editing help
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I highly recommend visiting The Teahouse if you are unsure about anything Wiki related. It's a place where experienced editors answer questions and assist newcomers in the editing process. In addition, please do not hesitate to reach out on my talk page if you have any specific questions. Once again, welcome! I hope you enjoy your time here. ~Liance^talk 19:34, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Liance! I really appreciate your words.

Please, could you tell me any advice with "Draft:Hector Izquierdo Triana"? Hector is in charge of the reconstruction from a huge natural disaster: at 85 days, the volcano was the longest known and the most damaging volcanic eruption on Canaries in the last centuries. The total damage caused by the volcano amounts up to 1,000 million euros. The lava flow covered over 1,000 hectares (2,500 acres), prompting the evacuation of around 7,000 people. The lava flow was about 3.5 kilometres (2.2 miles) wide at its widest point, about 6.2 kilometres (3.9 miles) long and reached the sea, destroying more than 3,000 buildings. Hector Izquierdo left his job as Secretary of State of Finance in Madrid (which is a great job) to help his people because he was born closed to the volcano and his parents were evacuated. Last month he was awarded as knight with the Grand Cross of the Royal Order of the Civil Merit (it could be, more or less, like the Presidential Medal of Freedom in the United States or Knight of the Order of the British Empire). You have much much more experience in Wikipedia, could you have a look the draft and tell me what can I do to improve it?

Thank you very much and my very best regards. Cuentaderevision (talk) 21:22, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I don't review drafts by request but I did take a quick glance - it seems that the honor would qualify the subject under WP:NBIO. I would make sure all stated facts are backed up by an inline citation, and you could identify WP:THREE best sources on the talk page and draft to expedite the review process. Best of luck. ~Liance^talk 23:06, 9 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much. I have just included in the Draft Talk WP THREE: 1.- https://www.ft.com/content/6f688de4-c147-11e2-b93b-00144feab7de (BOE is The Boletín Oficial del Estado is the official gazette of the Kingdom of Spain) this is the appointment of Secretary of State for Finance): 2.- https://boe.es/boe/dias/2022/01/12/pdfs/BOE-A-2022-457.pdf and this is the list of those awarded with the Grand Cross in the last 5 years in Spain. Hector is the penultime of the first page. 3.- https://www.boe.es/boe/dias/2024/07/31/pdfs/BOE-A-2024-15832.pdf Cuentaderevision (talk) 22:45, 12 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Hector Izquierdo Triana has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Hector Izquierdo Triana. Thanks! ~Liance^talk 13:51, 13 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! Cuentaderevision (talk) 08:26, 14 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]