User talk:Ecradu01/sandbox

Feedback on article contribution

Congratulations - I see you've stuck with your community commenter and have ferreted out the meaning in the comments. Johnbod was referring to the "Further Reading" list on the Article page. That wasn't clear to me either. Kudos to you for persevering and living the "good faith" assumption.
These comments on the contribution itself are in no particular order:

• I'm assuming you are going to include in-text pointers to your reference list where they are appropriate.
• overall, I'd say this draft is excellent - and it seems your earlier critic agrees. Good for you.
• I don't have any substantive criticisms. Great work. Jagrif02 (talk) 20:06, 18 October 2016 (UTC)