User talk:Hanyangprofessor2/Archive 2

Deadline6(Week10):YANGPEIFU

Hello! professor! I left feedback for other students, Please check it. Thank you.User talk:Zhangzhang111 Yangpeifu (talk) 11:54, 2 June 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Better late the never. Please try to finish other assignments on time to receive full marks for them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:29, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5--HE YUNONG & LI MINHUI

Hello, professor, I have perfected the article according to your suggestion, please check it, thank you! HE YUNONG (talk) 04:46, 3 June 2023 (UTC)

@HE YUNONG Good progress. I note that some references you use do not have URLs (links). Please add them (see for example: Ma, Aiping (2018-06-01). "有了标准的煎饼馃子能走得更远" [With the standard jianbing guozi, we can go further.]. Science and Technology Daily.) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:31, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline5 (week9) ZHENG YAYUAN&CHEN XINYI (Group 18 in Social Structure)

Hello Professor！I am Chen xinyi.My group member Zheng Yayuan and I chose to write two New English Wikipedia articles, "love when the stars fall (eng) "and "New Life Begins (eng)".

We decided that each of us would be responsible for writing one. Zheng Yayuan, a member of my group, chose to write "love when the stars fall (eng)". Here is her sandbox link: https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zhengyayuan/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92/%22The_Starry_Love_(eng)%22/%E6%98%9F%E8%90%BD%E5%87%9D%E6%88%90%E7%B3%96

I chose to write "New Life Begins (eng)". I finished writing this new article in English in the sandbox.Here is my link:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:XIMICHEN/sandbox_-_New_Life_Begins#Premise

Please check! thank you!XIMICHEN (talk) 08:40, 17 May 2023 (UTC)

@XIMICHEN Good progress. See my feedback to your teammate above, and regarding the New Life article, note we also should add information on awards and reception. After this is added, you can move (publish) both of your articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:28, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

Hello, Professor, I'm Chen Xinyi. I have finished editing the “New Life Begins” TV series for the English Wikipedia, and it has been published https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_Life_Begins and has been linked to the Chinese Wikipedia page, please check ~ thank you! XIMICHEN (talk) 15:44, 28 May 2023 (UTC)

@XIMICHEN Good! Please add WP:CATEGORIES and a section with reviews from newspapers or other reputable websites if you can find any. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:21, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (week10) Lee Jae Hyun

Hello professor. I reviewed "Soviet Union and the Korean War" translated by Choi Won Jun and gave a feedback on his talk page. check it plz! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Wjchoi8683

Dear student, I am afraid you forgot to sign. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:56, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

I just signed it. please check it one more time please!! 218.235.241.132 (talk) 03:04, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Ok, but you forgot to log in when leaving the comment on the talk page here. Edits which are not made while logged in cannot be counted for course credit as they are not associated with your account. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:25, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline6(Week10):ZHANGBINGYI

Hello, Professor! I have left a message on the friend's homepage! Please pay attention to check. User talk:Yangpeifu Zhangzhang111 (talk) 04:03, 5 June 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Good. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:26, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

认知心理学 ZHUYINGYING

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%EC%A3%BC%EC%98%81%EC%98%81/%EC%9D%B8%EC%A7%80%EC%8B%AC%EB%A6%AC%ED%95%99 58.225.53.194 (talk) 02:22, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (week 9) Kim,Kyung-Min / Lee,Jae-Hyun(Group 1)

Hello, professor！We have initially completed the article translated from English to Korean and Korean to English. We will attach the link, so please check it. Thank you. Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 04:39, 9 May 2023 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Good progress, but I see that there are still elements of the English article not translated to Korean (for example, the English one has twice as many references/footnotes).

Regarding your English article, I am afraid it has many problems that need to be fixed. The good news is that I see you found some reliable and useful sources (but the references are not formatted properly - they are missing English translated title, dates of publications, author names, etc.). However, you need to be able to read them and synthesize them into the summary of the topic (historiography of Korea), in  your own words, and in an acceptable English. You should use a tool like Grammarly to carefully proofread your article; I am afraid most of the content you've added is hard or impossible to understand in English due to the number of errors. Almost all sentences have at least one and usually several grammatical/vocabularly errors, and while I don't grade you for small errors, the amount of errors makes many sentences difficult to understand and the overall text, very hard to read. Many terms introduced are unliked and unexplained, for example "Ranke". Is this a person? A concept? What is "the method of Ranke history"? Etc. There are also many non-encyclopedic fragments that are essay-like or WP:EDITORIALIZING, for example the last paragraph of your addition. Finally, much of the content you've added is unreferenced. Please make sure each paragraph has a clear reference (or several if needed). Second, the grammar/language have many problems, starting with the first two paragraphs beginning wioth "first of all". _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:53, 11 May 2023 (UTC)

Hello, professor. I'm Lee Jae-Hyun, translated 'history of Korea'(Kor to Eng).

I accepted your feedback, and tried a lot to solve the problem.

1. References- I added translated title, dates of publications, author names...etc. But as you see, in my writing, 2nd and 3rd references lack author's name, and source/archive date because the source of the URL is from dictionary. I hope you take tat into consideration.

2. Grammatical/vocabularly errors - I revised a lot of grammatical errors, wrong words, and sentences. I also used tool named'Grammarly', so my writing will be more refined than before.

3. Revised non- encyclopedic fragments, and terms.

Thank you! JHyunlee (talk) 15:09, 12 May 2023 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Good progress! The most important things to fix now: 1) the article needs more references (footnote). Each paragraph should have one more references at the end that serve to verify the claims made (you can also add references to end of each sentence). 2) You will need to add a Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section (aka abstract, intro) to the top 3) For articles that exist on Korean Wikipedia but not English, please try to use Template:Interlanguage link (if this is too difficult, please talk to me during or after class and I'll show you how to do it) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:37, 15 May 2023 (UTC)

Professor, I accepted your feedback and tried to solve the rest of the problems that you said.

1. I added a lot of references in my article. I tried to add references to the end of each sentence, but it was so challenging. So I add references in each paragraph.

2. I used interlanguage link(articles that exist korean wikipedia but not english).

3. I added lead section. and also added references in section, too.

I hope my writing is better than before. Thank you!! JHyunlee (talk) 12:17, 21 May 2023 (UTC)

I reflected the feedback that the professor said on Wikipedia in Korean that "it seems to be missing." Please check Thank you. Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 02:09, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Very good, I see many more links and references in your English article. Keep up the good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:03, 19 May 2023 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Yes, I see a lot of progress. Keep working on adding more references, and also, add a translated title to your Korean references (don't replace the Korean hangul title, but use the translated title field - ask me for demonstration in or after class if you are unsure how to do this). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:40, 22 May 2023 (UTC)

Professor, I relfected your feed back that you said "Please use the translated title field". check it plz... Thank you!! 218.235.241.135 (talk) 07:06, 5 June 2023 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 @JHyunlee Well done. The only thing to finish now is to add missing references to the parts of the article that is missing them. Remember, each paragraph should have one or more references that verify all the facts mentioned in that paragraph. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:28, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

In my article, each paragraph have one or more references(verify all the facts mentioned in each paragraph)... I can't understand what "Remember, each paragraph should have one or more references that verify all the facts mentioned in that paragraph." means... :( JHyunlee (talk) 09:10, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

@JHyunlee In Historiography of Korea, there is no reference (footnote) at the end of a number of paragraphs. To start, the paragraph that begins with "In terms of historical history" has two footnotes, but there is no reference for the last two sentences ("In other words, until then, ideologically, the deep influence of Chinese...). Similar problems can be found in many other paragraphs, where you have a footnote or two in the middle, but none at the end. This suggest that the last few sentences in those paragraphs are unreferenced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:24, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

Professor, I just revised your feedback, So I added references about last sentences of all the paragraphs. Check it please!!! JHyunlee (talk) 02:44, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@JHyunlee Well done, this looks quite solid now. I do encourage you to proofread it for grammar/vocabulary once again to improve the quality. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:28, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

1) En to Ko - https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C_%EA%B3%84%EC%B8%B5

2) Ko to En - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Historiography_of_Korea

Deadline 6 :Kim minjun

Professor. I finished feedback on another student's talk page.

User talk:P.YEJI#Feedback: Kim minjun

Also, i skipped other Deadlines after Deadline 4. But i did wikipedia article translations about 'Journalistic objectivity' to '언론의 객관성' and 'Archaic globalization' to '고대의 세계화'

I uploaded in my talk page also.

Article Link: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B8%EB%A1%A0%EC%9D%98_%EA%B0%9D%EA%B4%80%EC%84%B1

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B3%A0%EB%8C%80%EC%9D%98_%EC%84%B8%EA%B3%84%ED%99%94

I'm a student who recently received confirmation of writing an article by the professor via email. My student number is 2020029198, and my name is Kim minjun.

Is it okay if I skip other deadlines? (Deadline5,7)

Additionally, I would like you to evaluate the translation I have done now. Thank you. If there is a disadvantage in your score because you don't perform any other deadlines, I will do it right away. Please check it.

KMJ0521 (talk) 12:54, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

@KMJ0521 Your translations are looking good. To compensate for missing some deadlines and gain extra credit, I encourage you do to an extra translation of some short article of your choice. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:29, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 6 : Mun seong-yoon

Professor, I finished feedback on another student's talk page

User talk:LIYULUN - Wikipedia

Also, i skipped other Deadlines after Deadline 4. But i did wikipedia article translation about 'Multicultural family in South Korea ' . to '한국의 다문화 가정'

- Multicultural family in South Korea - Wikipedia

I'm a student who recently received confirmation of writing an article by the professor via email. My student number is 2020009052, and my name is Mun seong-yoon.

And also I translated ' Street food of South Korea' and ' History of Korean animation ' . https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EA%B5%AD_%EC%95%A0%EB%8B%88%EB%A9%94%EC%9D%B4%EC%85%98%EC%9D%98_%EC%97%AD%EC%82%AC

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EA%B8%B8%EA%B1%B0%EB%A6%AC_%EC%9D%8C%EC%8B%9D — Preceding unsigned comment added by Msy0321 (talk • contribs) 14:15, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

@Msy0321 Your translations are looking good. To compensate for missing some deadlines and gain extra credit, I encourage you do to an extra translation of some short article of your choice. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:30, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Thank you.

Msy0321 (talk) 13:01, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%EC%A3%BC%EC%98%81%EC%98%81/%EC%9D%B8%EC%A7%80%EC%8B%AC%EB%A6%AC%ED%95%99 58.225.53.194 (talk) 02:19, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Wikipedia assignment：xuedongxin

Hello，professor！I have completed the article translated from English to chinese.https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donghem/Asian_Century and Chinese to English.User:Donghem/反台獨情緒 Donghem (talk) 03:05, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@Donghem Good job, to finish your translation you have to publish (move) your article from your sandbox (user space) to the public main space. See zh:Help:页面重命名 or ask me for help if you are unsure how to do this _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:33, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5--LI MINHUI & HE YUNONG(article modification)

Hello Professor, I have added links to all references that do not have links based on your suggestion.https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Jianbing_guozi&wvprov=sticky-header Please check it. Thank you!Hhhh2 (talk) 04:30, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@Hhhh2 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:33, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline5：ZHANG XIAORUI

Hello，professor！We have completed the article translated from Chinese to English.User:Zzzxxxrrr/Trilateral incidentPlease review it, thank you 218.235.241.134 (talk) 05:02, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear student (@Zzzxxxrrr). Please remember to log in when leaving messages. As I said in class, it's a good start, but you will need to link to English Wikipedia articles (see WP:BTW) and/or use {{interlanguage link}}. Further, please ensure each paragraph has one or more references that serve to verify all content in that article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:36, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Group 2 CHO woohyuck

Professor, I added a reference. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:CHO_woohyuck/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 CHO woohyuck (talk) 06:07, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@CHO woohyuck Good job, it looks like a very solid translation now! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:59, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Wikipedia assignment：LI XINWEI&XU RUOCI

Hello Professor ~ We have finished and published our second article，eighteen stairs! Hope you can check!Sandykkzk (talk) 02:15, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

@Sandykkzk Well done! Please add WP:CATEGORIES to your article. One more item to fix is WP:ORPHAN problem: please add mentions and links to your new article in related articles. For now, neither Chongqing nor Yuzhong District mentions your article, and I think they should. Everything else looks good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:29, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

we already added categories for this article！please check it~thank u Sandykkzk (talk) 07:05, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@Sandykkzk Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:31, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Group 2 GeonwooLee

Professor, I added a reference to the article and edited difficult sentences in English. Please check. User:GeonwooLee/sandbox GeonwooLee (talk) 07:07, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@GeonwooLee Good progress, but you need to increase the density of your citations. Many paragraphs of text in your draft are still unreferenced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:36, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Reporting on the main project_ Kim Jiwon(CI)

Hello, professor. I moved the article I translated, "Racial bias in criminal news in the United States" to a formal translation page from my sandbox.

Here are the two translated articles.https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EA%B5%AD_%EB%B2%94%EC%A3%84_%EB%89%B4%EC%8A%A4%EC%9D%98_%EC%9D%B8%EC%A2%85%EC%A0%81_%ED%8E%B8%EA%B2%AC

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A0%95%EB%B6%80%EC%9D%98_%EC%9D%B8%EA%B3%B5_%EC%A7%80%EB%8A%A5

Please take a look. Thank you. Meloncookie (talk) 12:44, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@Meloncookie Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:39, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: Gijs Siemer

Hi professor,

I finished both translations and made the corrections that were needed. https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gebruiker:GijsSi/Kladblok GijsSi (talk) 07:38, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

@GijsSi Good, now please publish your articles (copy their content from your sandbox to the main public space). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:40, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: GAO PEIYUN and YE SIQI

Hello, professor. This is the English article translated by our team. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:GAOPEIYUN/Chinese_Cultural_Renaissance Please check if it is ready for publication.GAOPEIYUN (talk) 08:40, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

@GAOPEIYUN Good progress. Before it is ready to be published, you should ensure that each paragraph is referenced. After that, please publish your article by moving it to the mainspace (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:41, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline8: Cho Minseok & Jung Minji (Group4)

Hi professor. We completed the main project of the class.

1. Translate English into Korean wikipedia article: [1]

2. Expansion of an English article: South Korea–Ukraine relations Rukkha1024 (talk) 06:14, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

@Rukkha1024 Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:42, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit-Wikipedia and Blog (Introduction to Information Sociology）

@Hanyangprofessor2Hello professor, I am Cheng Tanwen, a student of your Introduction to Information Sociology class. I edited two additional Wikipedia articles and blogs. can I get extra credit for this?

Zhou Ye - Wikipedia

Zhang Ruonan - Wikipedia

https://socinvit2023.blogspot.com/2023/04/extra-creditexamples-of-values-that.html

https://socinvit2023.blogspot.com/2023/03/extra-credit-examples-of-charismatic.html Chengtw11 (talk) 12:14, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

@Chengtw11 Yes, good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:42, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: YE SIQI and GAO PEIYUN

Hello，professor！We have completed the article translated from Chinese to English. User:GAOPEIYUN/Chinese Cultural Renaissance - Wikipedia And we completed the article translated from English to Chinese.用户:YE SIQI/韩国综艺节目 - 维基百科，自由的百科全书 (wikipedia.org) Please check it.Thank you.YE SIQI (talk) 14:10, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

@YE SIQI Good. Good progress. Before your English article is ready to be published, you should ensure that each paragraph is referenced.

Your Chinese article looks ready to be published, please do so by moving it (see Wikipedia:Moving a page). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:44, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

인지심리학认知心理学ZHUYINGYING

Hello teacher, I'm zhuyingying, my student number is 2022009598, this is my Wikipedia assignment.

https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%EC%A3%BC%EC%98%81%EC%98%81/%EC%9D%B8%EC%A7%80%EC%8B%AC%EB%A6%AC%ED%95%99 218.235.241.136 (talk) 02:23, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear student (@주영영). Please make sure to log in when leaving messages. To finish your translation, please make sure all content is referenced. Right now most of your article does not appear to have footnotes _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:45, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Gijs Siemer - Translated Pages

Hi professor,

The pages have been translated: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cannabis-in-Zuid-Korea https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Russische-web-brigades

GijsSi (talk) GijsSi (talk) 03:04, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

@GijsSi Good job. Take a look at the comments on your Dutch talk page (nl:Overleg_gebruiker:GijsSi). It would be good to engage with Dutch volunteers and see what kind of improvements they'd like to see in your articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:46, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals Week) CHOI WONJUN

Dear professor, I successfully published my final two wiki assignments! I corrected some grammatical problems and references. Please check them, and let me know if there's anything else I need to do of get the final grade:)

Cannbis in South Korea translated to 대한민국의 대마초

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%8C%80%ED%95%9C%EB%AF%BC%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%EB%A7%88%EC%B4%88

Soviet Union and the Korean war translated to 소련과 한국 전쟁

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%86%8C%EB%A0%A8%EA%B3%BC_%ED%95%9C%EA%B5%AD_%EC%A0%84%EC%9F%81

Also, I have a question about class attendance. I missed class three times, and will this be a problem to get the final grades? Please let me know if there is a problem. Thank you for your hard work and effort during this semester! Wjchoi8683 (talk) 06:31, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

@Wjchoi8683 Good job. Missing the class three times should be ok with regard to your final grade. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:32, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8:xuedongxin and guanrui

Hi professor, I‘am Xue Dongxin.I added quote and changed the error. Please check it. Chinese to English:User:Donghem/反台獨情緒 English to Chinese:https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Donghem/Asian_Century# Donghem (talk) 08:52, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

Regarding your English article, it looks pretty good, but we still need to fix some issues.

1. If this topic has article on Chinese Wikipedia, please use template:Interlanguage link to link to the Chinese Wikipedia article. For example, zh:台獨派 should be linked to through such a template, instead of through pro-democracy people. In some cases you link to a Chinese Wikipedia article when there is an English article (Constitution of the People's Republic of China) - this needs to be fixed too.
2. There are unreferenced paragraphs, such as the second paragraph of your article.
3. There are some issues with grammar/vocabularly/content. For example, the said second paragraph ends with "( Taken on October 20, 2005)" which does not make any sense. Another sentence that reads badly is "Do NOT support Taiwan independence refers" (also, why is the word "NOT" capitalized?). Also, why do you use the term "de-Simetricalization" instead of De-Sinicization? Please use a spellchecker and eliminate errors such as "independenceEditor". Another example of a confusing sentence is "The position. This unorthodox and independent position is attributed to hidden Taiwan independence by mainland China.". In addition to being not possible to understand, it is also unreferenced. Another example: "Main article: Anti-Taiwan" - this seems like part of Wiki code that wasn't properly translated/linked. Yet another example: "Opposition to Taiwan refers to the disgust and disgust of". This strongly suggests to me that the text was translated by machine and not proofread by a human. Please show your text to someone proficient in English and ask them to help you with such errors, or use a tool like Grammarly.
4. Some of your references are to Facebook. Facebook is not a reliable source. Please replace it with a more reliable source. Most of your references need proper formatting - they need to tell us the name of the author, date of publication, title in English (keep original Chinese title if the source is Chinese). For example, your last reference is to BBC but it is in correctly attributed to web.arvchive.org, and it does not provide a date, English title (translated) or information about the author.

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:14, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Regarding your Asian Century translation, please publish it and the we can see what the Chinese volunteers/reviewers will say. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:16, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline8：ZHANG XIAORUI

Hello，professor！I finished editing.We have completed the article translated from Chinese to English.User:Zzzxxxrrr/Trilateral incident.We have completed the article translated from English to Chinese.https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Zzzxxxrrr/%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E7%9A%84%E5%A0%95%E8%83%8E Please check it, thank you Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 13:51, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

@Zzzxxxrrr Regarding your English article, the first thing to fix are references. You need to format them properly, the current footnote is not acceptable - it states "Online book sources - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia". zh.m.wikipedia.org (in Chinese) and links to a Chinese Wikipedia page. Please reformat this using Wikipedia:Citation templates . If this is a book reference, please fill in the paramters such as author's name, year of publication, title, translated title in English, publisher, and the page range information. Please ensure each paragraph has a reference. Your reference 3 is a bit better but it still contains many errors (last name: "延安军事志编纂委员会编", no first name, title is neither Chinese nor English - "yan an jun shi zhi"?). No publisher, no page range...

There are also a few minor grammar/vocabulary issues to fix. What (who) are "line executors"? In "AB regiments", what does AB stands for? The next sentence has grammar errors and needs to be rewritten, as currently it is very hard to understand, as it is missing the subject ("Extorted confessions by various illegal means, shot and buried more than 200 people alive in places such as Xiasiwan, Ganquan (where the Shaanxi-Gansu Border Special Committee resides) and Wayaobao, Zichang County (where the Shanxi-Shaanxi-Gansu Provincial Committee resides) on trumped-up charges Red Army cadres and local party and government cadres in the Shaanxi-Gansu border; Liu Zhidan, Xi Zhongxun, Gao Gang and other leading cadres above the Red Twenty-six Army Battalion and above the local county level were imprisoned more than 100 people."). Please show your text to someone proficient in English and ask them to help you with such errors, or use a tool like Grammarly. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:23, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Regarding your English to Chinese translation, please publish it and the we can see what the Chinese volunteers/reviewers will say. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:29, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline8:MAYUXUAN&WEIYUHAN(Collective Intelligence in Practice )

Hello, Professor! We have made some initial progress on the translation from English to Chinese and would appreciate your input. Please review it and provide us with your suggestions. Thank you!中国古典诗词 - Wikipedia MAYUXUAN (talk) 04:32, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@MAYUXUAN Good, but you should add references. See the error notice at the top of your translation: 此條目没有列出任何参考或来源。 (2012年1月20日)

維基百科所有的內容都應該可供查證。请协助補充可靠来源以改善这篇条目。无法查证的內容可能會因為異議提出而被移除。

_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:34, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Hello, Professor. I have added the references for our study. Could you please review them? Thank you! MAYUXUAN (talk) 10:59, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

@MAYUXUAN Reference to Cushman, Stephen; Cavanagh, Clare; Ramazani... is good, but it seems all your other footnotes are to Chinese Wikipedia. Wikipedia cannot be a reference for itself. You will need to find better references (books, academic articles or newspaper articles) for the claims made. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:33, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

Good afternoon, Professor. I have removed all citations from Wikipedia in my article and have included citations from published papers, books, and authoritative websites. I would appreciate it if you could review it. Thank you! MAYUXUAN (talk) 04:37, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

@MAYUXUAN Well done. The structure looks good. Now you can translate the rest of the English article to Chinese. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:43, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

Good evening, Professor. I have translated the remaining parts into Chinese, added some citations, and included the images from the original text. Please review them. Thank you! MAYUXUAN (talk) 13:25, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

@MAYUXUAN Well done, this looks like a proper article now. Good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:14, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8：ZHENG YAYUAN and CHENXINYI

Hello professor, I am ZHENG YAYUAN, I am responsible for the new article, I have changed the error and successfully published, please check, if you have any questions please contact me, thank you!The Starry Love Zhengyayuan (talk) 15:53, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

@Zhengyayuan Good start. Can you add information about reviews and awards? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:10, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have added some references in this article, references 1 and 3 are re-added by me, about the award I did not find any relevant information that can be used, about the review I have re-improved it and added reference 2, please take a look, thank you! Zhengyayuan (talk) 09:45, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

@Zhengyayuan Good progress. Now, the we need to fix the following:

1) If this topic has article on Chinese Wikipedia, please use template:Interlanguage link to link to the Chinese Wikipedia article.

2) Please add an WP:INFOBOX. This can be a bit complicated so I can show you how to do it in class tomorrow.

3) Please add translated title to the references using the translated title parameter. Do not remove the original Chinese title. If you need help, again, I can show you how to do so in class.

4) Please link your article to the Chinese article by using the "Add interlanguage links" tool accessible through the menu on the right in the article.

5) Please look at how articles about other Chinese dramas look like (ex. Reset (Chinese TV series and others you can see here), and think what you need to format to make your article look similar to them, in addition to infobox? For example, you should add the Chinese name of the show to the lead. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:22, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

The United States Helps and Beware of Taiwan （WANGYIZHE 2022014457）

User:Wyyz02/The United States Helps and Beware of Taiwan 220.74.125.148 (talk) 02:32, 5 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear student (@Wyyz02). First, please remember to log in. Second, your work is progressing nicely. The article still needs improvement, such as:

1) please proofread it for grammer and vocabulary, that also includes removing redundant repetitions such as that seen in the very first line of your article ("The United States cooperates in defending Taiwan against the People's Republic of China's armed attack on Taiwan and the United States cooperates in defending Taiwan."). Example of another sentence that is unclear/confusing: "Wang Yunfei, a senior researcher at the Hong Kong think tank, divides the United States into two categories: short-range and long-range".

2) section 'Before breaking off friendship' seems unfinished, with just half of a sentence

3) Some content (paragraphs) is missing references, for example - the first five paragraphs following the heading "After the war, the possible U.S. cooperative defense approach"

4) Your references (footnotes) need much formatting. Please ensure they contain date of publication, title in both Chinese and Englsh, and publisher. If you don't know how to fix this, please talk to me during or after class and I'll demonstrate. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:38, 8 June 2023 (UTC)

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Wyyz02/The_United_States_Helps_and_Beware_of_Taiwan#The_United_States_Helps_and_Beware_of_Taiwan

I modified it. This is my revised version. Wyyz02 (talk) 06:39, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals assingment) : Subin Jung

[soiology of everyday life]

Hello, professor!

I've done all the Wikipedia translation tasks,

Failed to leave a record on the talk page in the past.

So I attached the articles that I carried out,

To get extra points for raising the deadline late

I also attached the link to the article that was translated additionally.

Please check. Thank you!

English -> Korean: Post-truth

Korean -> English: https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B2%AD%EC%99%80%EB%8C%80

<Add article>

Korean -> English :https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Shinsegae?veaction=edit

I modified it by referring to the 'Reference' part that I learned in class.

We translated the Korean language "Archiving Date, Journalist Name, Article Link, Article Title, etc." into English and entered the necessary contents directly to proceed with additional Wikipedia. Jung Subin (talk) 13:44, 14 June 2023 (UTC) Jung Subin (talk) 13:44, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

@Jung Subin Good progress. Your Korean article looks good and you also qualify for some extra credit point from your edits too (well done!). What needs to be fixed in the English article:

1) some content in the Blue House article needs references. For example, the second paragraph in the "The relocation of light stage architecture section is unreferenced.

2) You should correct grammar/vocabulary errors on your article (I recommend using a tool like Grammarly and consulting with those friends or teachers of yours who know English well). The issues start with the aforementioned heading "The relocation of light stage architecture" which is not clear - how can architecture be "relocated"? What is "light stage architecture"? The next setence that is impossible to understand is "it was Hanseongbu that the new capital was designated". In addition to being grammatically confusing, what is Hanseongbu? Then in "Here, descendants of kings and founding contributors gathered to conduct large-scale membership." we have another very hard to understand sentence - membership is certainly not the correct term here. The next heading, "Become the presidential office of Cheong Wa Dae", once again is not well written and sounds very bad in English. Unfortunately, such problems persist every few sentences in your expansion. Please proofread your article carefully; an occasional minor error is allowed, but when every third sentence or so is impossible to understand, this is a major problem that needs to be fixed. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:49, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline week 8 Finals week by Florence Nazaire

Dear professor, I finished translating both my articles and have moved/published them into the public space. I hope I did it correctly, I would appreciate it if you could check it out. Thank you in advance! Here are the links:

Article 1: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Abortus_in_Zuid-Korea Article 2: https://nl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cosmetische_chirurgie_in_Zuid-Korea

With kind regards! --Flonaz (talk) 15:27, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

@Flonaz Good progress. Your projects look good - now we can see if the Dutch editors have any comments. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:54, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals assingment) : Subin Jung (group with Mun seong-yoon)

[collective intelligence]

Hello, professor!

I finished the "collective intelligence" wiki article(s) assignment with Mun seong-yoon.

I translated the revised parts of the article again,

I also attached all the references myself.

English -> Korean : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/ChatGPT#%EC%8B%9C%EC%82%AC%EC%A0%90

Korean -> English : Reserve Officers' Training Corps (South Korea)

Thank you for the semester!

If there's anything else I need to do, If there's anything else I need to do, please reply! Jung Subin (talk) 15:52, 14 June 2023 (UTC) Jung Subin (talk) 15:53, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

@Jung Subin Good progress. Your Korean article's expansion looks good, we will see if there are any requests or feedback from the Korean community.

With regards to your English article, as I said earlier, it is imperative that we add references. There is much in your expansion that is unreferenced. I understand that the original Korean article is unreferenced, but as I said in class, in this case it is your responsibility to verity that content with other sources (books, academic or news articles) and add such references. Each paragraph needs to have one or more references that verify claims made in the text. PS. The section 'Instance of a foreign country' is not relevant to English Wikipedia, as it is just a poor summary of articles such as Junior Reserve Officers' Training Corps - which your current version does not even link to. It would be simplest to delete that section from your translation. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:59, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (The Finals assingment) : Mun seong-yoon (group with Subin Jung)

Hello, professor!

I finished the "collective intelligence" wiki article(s) assignment with Subin Jung.

I translated the revised parts of the article again,

I also attached all the references myself.

English -> Korean : https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/ChatGPT#%EC%8B%9C%EC%82%AC%EC%A0%90

Korean -> English : Reserve Officers' Training Corps (South Korea)

Thank you for the semester!

If there's anything else I need to do, If there's anything else I need to do, please reply! Msy0321 (talk) 15:56, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

@Msy0321 Please see above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:00, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline6(Week10):DENGQIN

Hello! professor! I left feedback for other students, Please check it. Thank you.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:LIYULUN#Deadline6:DENGQIN Dengqin11 (talk) 07:30, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 Good - better late than never as they say :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:26, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit wiki assignment (Kim Min-jun)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘Window handle’ to 창문 손잡이’

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Window_handle (window handle)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%B0%BD%EB%AC%B8_%EC%86%90%EC%9E%A1%EC%9D%B4 (창문 손잡이)

‘Export–Import Bank of the United States’ to ’미국 수출입 은행’

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Export%E2%80%93Import_Bank_of_the_United_States (Export–Import Bank of the United States)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%AF%B8%EA%B5%AD_%EC%88%98%EC%B6%9C%EC%9E%85_%EC%9D%80%ED%96%89 (미국 수출입 은행)

‘John thirtle’ to ‘존 서틀’

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/John_Thirtle (John thirtle)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A1%B4_%EC%84%9C%ED%8B%80 (존 서틀)

These are not main wiki assignment. But these are wiki translation extra credit! Please check it. Also, i uploaded that URL in my talkpage. KMJ0521 (talk) 14:10, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

KMJ0521 (talk) 14:10, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

@KMJ0521 Well done, those activities will certainly count towards a good number of extra credit _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:35, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

EXTRA, WIKI PROJECT(WEEKLY) ASSIGNMENT(PARK YEJI)

HI professor! I haven't been able to do more than 10 wiki tasks every week for a while, so I've been behind 70. I've done my backlog and I've done 100 edits by editing 30 more. Can I get extra points?

방어(어류) : Add Image and Paragraph 한대앞역 : Add Image 문경새재 : Add image 테이크원 : content, category, adding paragraphs 비긴어게인(시리즈) : Add content, category, reference 비긴어게인2  : Add categories, links, and references & modify content 비긴어게인3 : Content, links, see also, adding categories, and correcting typos 문동주(야구 선수) : Add references, content, and categories 한화 이글스 : add categories, see also 씨잼 : add content [|Fromis 9] & [Jamn] & [|Dr. Romantic] & [[2]] & [|Doctor_Cha ] & AKMU : Translating Korean Article Title into English 컴퓨터활용능력 & 한국사능력시험

I attached the articles I edited recently below. If you have any feedback, please let me know! Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by P.YEJI (talk • contribs) 17:25, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

@P.YEJI Very good, I think this will definitely generate a good amount of extra points on the plus side for you! I encourage you to try editing articles related to your future career so you can impress interviewers and coworkers in the future! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:36, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (Cuauhtémoc Serrano)

Dear professor I have finished with both of my articles: 1) https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Economic_inequality_in_South_Korea Adding 3 subtopics in the english Wikipedia.

2)https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Desigualdad_econ%C3%B3mica_en_Corea_del_Sur Translating from English to Spanish. Cuasrrc (talk) 02:23, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Cuasrrc Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline6:CHEN XINYI

Professor, I left feedback on another student's article. So please check if these are right.This is the link to his page:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:LIYULUN#Deadline6:CHEN_XINYI Thank you!XIMICHEN (talk) 02:44, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@XIMICHEN Good - better late than never as they say :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:38, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline8:CHEN XINLEI&MUQING(Collective Intelligence in Practice )

Hello，professor！We have finished our translation assignment, please check it.This is Chinese to English：Jiaxing railway station，This is English to Chinese：https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E7%A4%BC%E4%BB%AADdccxl (talk) 07:06, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

@Ddccxl Your translations look good. For the English one, please expand your citations (references) by adding translated title and other missing information from the citation templates (do not remove the Chinese title, add English translation using the translated title parameter). Ask me in class for demonstration if you'd like help. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

We have added English titles to the references according to your suggestions, please check！Jiaxing railway stationDdccxl (talk) 06:31, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Ddccxl Good job, they look much better now! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:59, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: DENGQIN、Chensiting

Hello，professor！This is our translated Wikipedia, please check it out.

Chinese--English:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chaoshan#Etymology_and_definition English--

Chinese:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:%E6%88%91%E4%BB%AC%E6%9C%AC%E6%80%A7%E4%B8%AD%E6%9B%B4%E5%A5%BD%E7%9A%84%E5%A4%A9%E4%BD%BF

English translation into Chinese, we have moved.Please check it out.Thank you！ Dengqin11 (talk) 07:50, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 Your Chinese article looks good.

Regarding your additions to Chaoshan, most of the content you've added is unreferenced. Please add reliable references to your submission. All content you add to Wikipedia needs to be reliably referenced, with one or more footnotes for each paragraph. Otherwise such content can be removed.

The next item to fix are links. For linking Chinese Wikipedia articles, please use Template:Interlanguage link. So Cao Dongzong and similar should use this tool to link to Chinese version. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:32, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

Hello，professor！We have added footnotes and referenced links, please refer to them, thank you. Dengqin11 (talk) 06:57, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 You will have to try again. You have added some references to Baidu that have already been removed by another editor (per Wikipedia:BAIDUBAIKE, Baidu is not allowed as a reference on Wikipedia, as it is a low quality source).

As for the links to Chinese Wikipedia you've added later, you should convert them into blue or red links using the template for interlanguage links I linked above. If you don't know how to do this, ask me during or after our final class on Monday tomorrow. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:11, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (YeonWoo Kim)

Dear professor I have finished my article:) 1) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%84%EC%8B%9C%EC%95%84_%EC%A4%91%EC%8B%AC%EC%A3%BC%EC%9D%98 Yeonu0407 (talk) 14:45, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Yeonu0407 Well done, it looks good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:12, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: TIAN XIAOYU& WEI YUXIN, group77 (Sociology of Everyday Life)

Hello professor, this is the second translation of our group. We have translated the English version of media ownership into the Chinese version. Please check if it is correct?Thank you. https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Qizicheng/%E6%B2%99%E7%9B%92 Qizicheng (talk) 19:32, 17 June 2023 (UTC)

@Qizicheng Your draft seems badly formatted, all references are broken. Please read WP:CITE, watch our LMS video on how to add / format references, or ask me in our final class tomorrow.

Right now your article is not formatted sufficiently to be published - you need to fix the formatting issues first. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:18, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: Group6 Park jeongeun, Lim Jiyeong

Hello, professor. We are Park Jung Eun and Lim Ji Young of Group 6. We have completed Wiki, which translates English into Korean and Korean into English. Please check if it is correct. Thank you. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Parkjeongeun0430 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Limjy0328 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Parkjeongeun0430 (talk • contribs) 10:00, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

@Parkjeongeun0430 Regarding your Korean translation, you need to add proper footnotes. Right now you have none. Please read WP:CITE, watch our LMS video on adding references, or ask me for help during my office hours today. Then you should move your article (publish it in the mainspace).

Regarding your English article, your assignment was to expand the existing article on Anarchism in Korea. Instead, it seems you tried to write an alternative. Unfortunately, your draft is poorly referenced (it has very few footnotes). Please try to expand the existing article with referenced content, as this is your intended assignment as recorded in my spreadsheet. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:41, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8：LI YULUN/2019082315HAO JINGYU(Group 20)Everyday Life and Social Structure

Dear professor,This is the ultimate wikipedia for our group, please check.

Chinese article 亚洲人权（Human rights in Asia）

Englishs article Xia family three daughters Love Apartment Season 5 LIYULUN (talk) 17:15, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

@LIYULUN Regarding Love Apartment Season 5, why did you create an article about Season 5 instead of the main show? Also, is this the correct English name? The Chinese article has English name "iPartment 5". English Wikipedia already has an article about iPartment. Your S5 article does not even inform the reader the main article exist. I don't see how season 5 of this show deserves its own article. Please integrate Season 5 content into the article about iPartment.

Further, I am afraid both of your articles require extensive proofreading for clarity / grammar / vocabulary. Reading the introduction of "Xia family three daughters" leaves the reader confused with regards to what is this about, since you mention at least four titles (in addition to the one given, "Get Love Back", "Love is Good" and "The World's Parents"). What is "the lower part"? A few seconds check for English sources also suggests that this there are other English titles used for this in the English promotional materials, for example "The Three Daughters of the Xia Family". You should base your article on English language sources. Why is there random sentence consisting of "group-directed" in the lead of that article? "Xia Friendly" reads like machine translation of somebody's name. What does it mean that somebody's role is "Chrysanthemum", or "strict"? The sentence "The 2011 National Drama Festival won the 2011 Best Long Drama Award" suggests that it was the Festival, not the show, which won the award. Such errors are very common in your articles.

Please carefully copyedit your articles for English grammar/vocabulary. Minor errors can happen, but your articles contain too many errors to be publishable currently. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:24, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear Professor,

   This is the article after we have revised it. We have compared it with the original Chinese article and found that the original article also has a little problem. But we have tried our best to revise it. We look forward to hearing from you. (LI YULUN l; HAO JINGYU)

   Thank you!

Draft:My Daughters

Draft:IPartment 5 LIYULUN (talk) 15:41, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear Professor, I would like to explain to you about the TV series Love Apartments. This drama was filmed in China over many years. Each season has many episodes. And each season is almost a completely new story, so it can be understood as 5 separate individuals. We have also watched the English version of Love Apartment, who is mainly there to summarise the drama. Of course, I have also added the link to the main text and annotated it in my article. Thank you! 2019082315HAO JINGYU (talk) 15:58, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

@2019082315HAO JINGYU @LIYULUN Thank you for your explanation. I do note that the article on iPartment does mention any of the interesting facts you bring up, and its summary of season 5 is very short. You can get extra credit by expanding that article (IPartment) with content of your article (currently located at Draft:IPartment 5). As for your articles please try to address the issues mentioned (grammar/vocabulary) - there are still numerous issues in both articles that make them difficult to read and understand. There are also errors that suggest you did not use a spellchecker, such as the term "firsTruee" in the Draft:My Daughters.

I suggest you show your text to someone proficient in English and ask them for some help. In addition, you need to fix the following problems (in Draft:My Daughters). 1) Wikipedia article should not contain external links to non-Wikipedia websites in the text (so you need to remove links like Shanghai Syndicate Film & TV Co Ltd. If this topic has article on Chinese Wikipedia, please use template:Interlanguage link to link to the Chinese Wikipedia article. 2) You should link to important concepts, such as names of notable people - for example, in the lead of that article, you write " Taiwanese directors Shen Yi and Zhou Guodong, and starring Tang Yan, Qi Wei, Zhang Lemon, Qiu Ze, Chen Chuhe, and Xu Zhengx" but you have not hyperlinked those names. While you are proofeading the article for grammar, please fix such linking problems (see also Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking). Also, please pay attention to minor errors like - why is "YU YOUSHAN" in capital letters? In "(Lin Peijun) decoration)", what do you mean by decoration? That does not appear to be a correct term. 3. There are also confusing parts of the article. In the section "Love is True, Good, and Beautiful (Part 2) ratings", the first two paragraphs don't seem to be relevant to the ratings, with the second being just a plot summary? 4.Notes section is unreferenced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:57, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear Professor, we will carefully revise it again according to your suggestion. Thank you!（LI YULUN; HAO JINGYU) 2019082315HAO JINGYU (talk) 07:32, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear professor,

   We have revised two articles. We found that there were many Chinese-style Internet terms in the article, so we asked our friends who are good at English, but they didn't know much about this aspect, so we checked some websites. This is an effect that we are trying our best to improve at present. Please ask the professor to check it. (LI YULUN; HAO JINGYU)

    Thank you.

Draft:My Daughters

Draft:IPartment 5 2019082315HAO JINGYU (talk) 11:08, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

@2019082315HAO JINGYU Good job improving the articles. They look much better. Please add English title to all your Chinese references (do not remove the Chinese title, use the translated title parameter or ask me for help if you don't know how to do it tomorrow in class). After that, you can republish your articles (move them back to the mainspace). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:25, 15 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear professor,Here are all the Chinese and English articles after our final release, please check

My Daughters

IPartment5

亚洲人权（Human rights in Asia） LIYULUN (talk) 08:45, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

@LIYULUN I see. For content IPartment5#Anecdote, please move it to relevant sections and add references, right now the content of that section reads like a collection of mostly unreferenced trivia (random facts). See also WP:TRIVIA. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:57, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Week 10) Jung Haerim

Professor, I left feedback on another student's article. So please check if these are right. Thank you:) Have a nice day! User talk:Lqy328/Agriculture in South Korea#Feedback: Jung Haerim Jungdoris (talk) 23:37, 13 June 2023 (UTC)

@Jungdoris Good - better late than never. But you have to move your comment to their talk page, you needlessly created an entire subpage for it that nobody will see. User talk:Lqy328/Agriculture in South Korea -> User talk:Lqy328. Please review the guide on how to use Wikipedia talk pages (see Help:Talk). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:29, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

Professor, I modified again. Please check if these are right. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Lqy328 61.77.60.253 (talk) 15:26, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Jungdoris Almost correct - now try again, this time while logged in. Remember that only edits done while logged in are credited for grade. Edits done as an IP cannot be recognized for wiki assignment, as they are not tied to your username. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:07, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Professor, I really modified again. So please check if it is right. User talk:Lqy328 Jungdoris (talk) 19:04, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

@Jungdoris Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:57, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit: Wikipedia edits 12 times a week(Everyday Life and Social Structure)

Hi Professor, I have completed 12 extra wiki edits this week and here is the link to my contribution. Can I get extra credit for this please? Thank you. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/Caiyayu Caiyayu (talk) 05:58, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@Caiyayu Yes, good job! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:02, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: Kim,Kyung-Min / Lee,Jae-Hyun(Group 1)

Dear professor We have finished article! please check if it is correct. Thank You Kkm.hanyang22 (talk) 11:34, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

@Kkm.hanyang22 Ok. Please write a Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section for the top of the article. To help you do so, you can use a tool like ChatGPT to generate a summary of your article - then make sure to carefully proofread it and ensure the summary is correct. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:01, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Professor, we accepted your feedback and made a lead section for each session. Please check! JHyunlee (talk) 04:22, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:48, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

1) En to Ko - https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%ED%9A%8C_%EA%B3%84%EC%B8%B5 2) Ko to En - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Historiography_of_Korea

Final,Jimin Park

Hello, professor. I'm park jimin who take a class collective intelligence. I've finished assignments. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Racism_in_the_United_States https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%ED%85%8C%EB%9F%AC%EC%9D%98_%EC%97%AD%EC%82%AC&action=history Thank you

Jiminewiki (talk) 09:32, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@Jiminewiki Good, but please note your article on United States was declined for publication by by Korean Wikipedia volunteers due to poor Korean grammar/vocabulary . See [https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=%EC%B4%88%EC%95%88:%EB%AF%B8%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EC%9D%B8%EC%A2%85%EC%B0%A8%EB%B3%84&action=history]. Please copyedit your article and publish it to receive the full grade. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:52, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5: Jeong jiyoon, Jung haerim (Group3)

Dear professor.

We confirm our article, and upload draft of that translation! Draft:Public institution in South Korea That is translation of Korean to English. https://ko.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%EC%A4%91%EB%A7%A4%EC%B2%B4 And that one is English to Korean. I wish we had done the right thing

Chericoco320 (talk) 19:32, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@Chericoco320 Your article still needs many more references before it can be published. Many paragraphs are unreferenced and such content cannot be accepted. Everything you write needs to have at least one reference. In addition, some of your footnotes are not references, just additional explanations (for example footnotes 1 and 2).

In addition, please write a Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Lead section for the top of the article (the current one does not read well). To help you do so, you can use a tool like ChatGPT to generate a summary of your article - then make sure to carefully proofread it and ensure the summary is correct. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:55, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 6: Jeong jiyoon

Dear professor. I left feedback on another student's article! Please check it. User talk:P.YEJI#Feedback: Jeong Jiyoon-DoesNotExist-DiscussionToolsHack

Chericoco320 (talk) 19:45, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@Chericoco320 Good, but rather late. I hope your colleague will notice your comments and benefit from them. In the future, please complete deadlines on time. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:56, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 (YeonWoo Kim)

Dear professor I have finished my 2nd article! Thank You 2) https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B5%AC%EC%A1%B0%EC%99%80_%EA%B8%B0%EA%B4%80 Yeonu0407 (talk) 15:26, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Yeonu0407 It seems that article was rejected by Korean volunteers, due to it being unfinished and poorly written. Please try to improve it and resubmit it after you add references and improve the quality of the prose. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:12, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Dear professor, I tried to improve my article and reupload it. Please let me know if there is any problem.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EA%B5%AC%EC%A1%B0%EC%99%80_%EA%B8%B0%EA%B4%80 Yeonu0407 (talk) 06:47, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

@Yeonu0407 We will see if the Korean volunteers agree. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:05, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Jeong Jiyoon)

Dear professor. I add citation on that article. Please check it.

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B4%EB%B9%99_%EA%B3%A0%ED%94%84%EB%A8%BC Chericoco320 (talk) 10:35, 17 June 2023 (UTC)

@Chericoco320 I am afraid this is not correct. Wikipedia cannot be used as a reference for itself. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:16, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

I use another site citation. Please check it!

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B4%EB%B9%99_%EA%B3%A0%ED%94%84%EB%A8%BC#%EC%82%B6 Chericoco320 (talk) 19:22, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@Chericoco320 Namu wiki is not a reliable source. We cannot use wikis as sources as anyone can edit them and outside Wikipedia most do not have any quality control. Please use academic articles, books, or newspaper articles as sources. Please watch our LMS video on what makes sources reliable and/or read Wikipedia:Reliable sources guideline. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:46, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

I use news citation about 'Goffman's book 'stigma''. I'm not sure this is the right way

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B4%EB%B9%99_%EA%B3%A0%ED%94%84%EB%A8%BC#%EC%97%85%EC%A0%81 Chericoco320 (talk) 04:55, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

@Chericoco320 This seems better. News are acceptable as reference, as long as they are written by journalists and are not self-published blogs. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:49, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, wiki project : Mun Seong-yoon

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘Rumbo’ in korean

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rumbo(%ED%85%8D%EC%82%AC%EC%8A%A4_%EC%8B%A0%EB%AC%B8%EC%82%AC)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘Rick Lindy’ in korean

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%A6%AD_%EB%A6%B0%EB%94%94

These are not main wiki assignment. But these are wiki translation extra credit! Please check it. Also, i uploaded that URL in my talkpage. Thank you!

Msy0321 (talk) 02:35, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Msy0321 Well done, those activities will certainly count towards a good number of extra credit _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@Msy0321 Please note that you need to fix the references in your second article. The first one was unfinished and contained many errors so it was declined for publication by the Korean volunteers. Please note that to get more than a small amount of extra credit, you should finish such projects. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:08, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Main project (GAO PEIYUN and YE SIQI)

Dear professor.Our main projects are published on Wikipedia. I left you a message when in the sandbox. Sorry for forgetting to update message after published. English article translated into Chinese Wikipedia https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/韩国综艺节目 Chinese article translated into English Wikipedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chinese_Cultural_Renaissance Thank you! GAOPEIYUN (talk) 14:26, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8: Jeong jiyoon, Jung haerim (group3)

Dear professor.

We finally complete the translation, and submit! Please check it!

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%96%B4%EB%B9%99_%EA%B3%A0%ED%94%84%EB%A8%BC#%EC%97%85%EC%A0%81 That is tranlated Korean to English. (Public institution in South Korea)- We added more citation to that article referring to your feedback

https://ko.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%ED%95%9C%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%EC%A4%91%EB%A7%A4%EC%B2%B4 And that is English to Korean. (Korean mass media) - We added an introduction using outline and more citation

We hope we've done the right assignment! Chericoco320 (talk) 18:09, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8:YANGPEIFU ZHANG BINGYI

User:Yangpeifu/Black painting event and 用户:Zhangzhang111/User:Zhangzhang111/健康与疾病社会学

Hello, professor, we have revised the question you said, and yangpeifu has published a blog post in Blogging Through sociology of Everday Life (2023), can I add points? Yangpeifu (talk) 07:33, 22 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 8 GeonwooLee, WoohyuckCHO (Group 2)

Hello, professor. We finished editing two articles for the group's main project.

Lee Bingheogak

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%9D%BC%EB%B3%B8%EC%9D%98_%EB%8C%80%EC%A4%91%EB%AC%B8%ED%99%94

Please check. Thank you. GeonwooLee (talk) 12:52, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

@GeonwooLee Good but you should ensure that each paragraph is referenced. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:43, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

I added a reference as you gave me feedback. And I've completed all the blog posts that I missed. Please check it out. GeonwooLee (talk) 08:39, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

@GeonwooLee Good progress; I've copyedited your article a bit. But there are still unreferenced parts in your article on Lee. For example, last paragraph in the "Birth And Family Clan" section has no reference for sentences "Bingheogak had a good memory even when he grew up and liked to study, so she read various books. She also wrote poems and various kinds of writings well, and was also called a female classical scholar(女士) by people around her." The second half of the next paragraph is likewise unreferenced. Please add references to those and similar parts. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:04, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

In addition, please add English translated title to your Korean references (do not remove the Korean title, add English title using the translated title parameter you can find in citation template menu - ask me for help during our last class on Monday tomorrow if you are not sure how to do so). Also, double check all your references to make sure they have date, author's name, publisher title and link. Some are incomplete. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:06, 18 June 2023 (UTC)

Professor, I've finished adding sections that lacked references and translating reference titles. Please check. GeonwooLee (talk) 08:12, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@GeonwooLee Good. Please review the article for grammar. Right now one of the most confusing items is the gender of the subject. The aritcle sometimes refers to Lee Bingheogak as a male (him), and sometimes as female (her). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:52, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

There was a part that wasn't properly confirmed. I'm sorry. I fixed it right away. GeonwooLee (talk) 09:52, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

@GeonwooLee So was the subject male of female? The article still does not make it clear and contradicts itself (". His father is Lee Chang-soo" vs "When her father put her on his lap". _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:44, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

I corrected the part you pointed out, looked at it overall, and checked for other errors. And in the beginning of the explanation, the gender of the person was clearly announced. Please check it again. GeonwooLee (talk) 10:16, 20 June 2023 (UTC)

@GeonwooLee It's good to clarify things in the lead. Yet again it does not seem you proofread this carefully. The very two sentences of the "Birth And Family Clan" say "His father is Lee Chang-soo and his mother is Mrs. Ryu".

In addition, please provide explanations for terms like CheongGyuBakMulGi, Bingheogakgo, Yijopanseo, Ye Mun-gwan Jehak or Soron, which are meaningless to the reader without links or explanations. If they have articles on Korean Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link to link to them. Otherwise, you need to explain them. I have added an explanation for Hongmungwan and Gyuhapchongseo, please do it for other Korean terms used in the article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:42, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

One more item to fix: please look at how the article looked before your expansion. While your version is longer, it seems you replaced all the old information, and in doing so, you removed some valuable content. For example, the old version provided day and  month of her birth and death date. Why did you remove it? The old version also correctly linked to her clan, Jeonju Yi clan, whereas your version has an incorrect link to Jeonju. You should resuse (restore) most or all content of the previous article's Early life and Works sections and use it to expand the lead of your current article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 09:18, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

I modified it again. I just checked my grades, but could you correct it after seeing the corrections that have been completed? I beg you. GeonwooLee (talk) 13:52, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

@GeonwooLee Good job, I'll update your grade. Your score for the final project is already near max. If you want to improve your grade, you should do some extra credit edits - see our LMS / syllabus for details. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:57, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, wiki project : Mun Seong-yoon (Collective intelligence)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘Grandfather's Journey’ in korean

할아버지의 여행 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

I did wikipedia article translations about 'Libra(DC comics)'

리브라(DC 코믹스) - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

I did wikipedia article translations about ' Cosecant squared antenna ' in korean

코시컨트 제곱 안테나 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

I did wikipedia article translations about '' in korean

사프넌 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

These are not main wiki assignment. But these are wiki translation extra credit! Please check it. Also, i uploaded that URL in my talkpage. Thank you! Msy0321 (talk) 13:10, 22 June 2023 (UTC)

@Msy0321 Good job, I'll update your grade shortly. Please note that ko:초안:리브라 (DC 코믹스) and the following two articles were declined for publication by Korean volunteers due to low quality of the translation. You will need to address those issues before your articles can be republished. If you can fix those issues, I can improve your grade further. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:02, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, wiki project : Mun Seong-yoon (Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘ Al kazeem ’ in korean

알 카짐 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘City workhouse castle’ in korean

시 구빈원 성 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘Toolik Lake’ in korean

툴릭 호수 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘Liburnians’ in korean

리부르니안 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

These are not main wiki assignment. But these are wiki translation extra credit! Please check it. Also, i uploaded that URL in my talkpage. Thank you! Msy0321 (talk) 15:16, 22 June 2023 (UTC)

@Msy0321 Please see my comment above and let me know when you have fixed issues related to poor translation, then I'll update your grade _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:04, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, wiki project : Mun Seong-yoon (Understanding of Daily Life and Social Structure)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘ Markets in Financial Instruments Directive 2014 ’ in korean

금융 상품 지침 2014의 시장 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org)

Msy0321 (talk) 04:27, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, wiki project : Mun Seong-yoon (Collective intelligence)

I did wikipedia article translations about ‘ Ibrahim Baggili ’ in korean

이브라힘 바길리 - 위키백과, 우리 모두의 백과사전 (wikipedia.org) Msy0321 (talk) 04:41, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

Challenges & Predictions for the Next 100 Years

A hundred years into the future

Today, with the rapid development of science and technology, anything we think is impossible can become a reality, just like 100 years ago, people could not imagine the prosperity of the Internet today. So what new technologies are likely to emerge in the next 100 years?

Contact lenses with Internet access

The glasses will also recognize a person's facial features and show what they see

It can also translate one language into another, so that people can understand the vision displayed on the lens.

I believe it will be loved by science fiction fans.

Organ shop

In the event of a car accident or illness, people can order spare organs grown from their own cells from "organ shops". Scientists can now grow cartilage, noses, ears, bones, skin, blood vessels and heart membranes.

Mind reading

Current technology can be used to implant the brains of patients paralyzed by stroke

Implant a chip in the computer and connect it to a laptop. These patients will eventually learn how to edit email, play video games and surf the Internet with their minds. Kay's working on one

A "dictionary of ideas," he has developed a computer program that can decipher brainwave signals. He said, "From a whole bunch

It will be possible to identify the specific image a patient is seeing, simply by examining the activity in his or her brain

Restore this image." Japan's Honda has built a robot that helmeted employees can control with their thoughts.

Human and robot fusion

In the next few years, robots may have a mouse, a cat or a dog

Even the intelligence of a monkey. By that time, some people thought robots might be dangerous. It has been suggested that we should implant chips in their "brains" so that if they develop bad thoughts, they can be turned off. But others say, why do the different robots merge? And that's exactly what Brooks, the former head of MIT's Artificial Intelligence Lab, had in mind. "Fifty years from now," he said

Within, we will be able to see fundamental changes in the human body through genetic modification. The human species will change in ways that are unimaginable today. We will find ourselves no longer constrained by Darwinian evolution. My prediction is, by

By 2100, our daily lives will be filled with smartphones

And humans will not be able to distinguish themselves from them, and we will be robots, interacting with robots."

The challenges of the next 100 years

First of all, the environmental problem is one of the most pressing and critical problems we face. Climate change. , air and water pollution, species

Extinction and other issues have seriously affected our lives and future. To address these issues, we need a range of innovative and visionary measures.

In terms of climate change, we need to reduce greenhouse gas emissions, especially carbon dioxide emissions. Can we do this by using more renewable energy? Such as solar energy, wind energy, water energy, etc., in order to reduce dependence on fossil fuels. At the same time, we also need to improve energy efficiency and reduce waste to reduce our environmental impact. In addition, we also need to adopt more stringent environmental protection measures, such as reducing industrial emissions and limiting the use of chemicals.

In terms of environmental protection, urban planning is also very important. We need to build more environmentally friendly and livable cities, and reduce traffic pollution by means of public transportation and bike-sharing. And congestion.

At the same time, we also need to build more public green Spaces and ecological reserves to increase the natural environment and ecological value of the city.

For the problems caused by big data and artificial intelligence, we need to develop stricter laws and ethics to protect individual privacy and interests. At the same time, we also need to strengthen the research and regulation of AI to ensure that they are in line with human interests and ethical standards. We need to establish more transparent and fair AI standards and regulations to ensure that their application does not cause harm to humans.

In addition to environmental problems and scientific and technological problems, we also need to pay attention to human social problems. Poverty, discrimination and inequality have become our reality. To deal with these problems, we need to invest in education, health, social welfare, etc., to ensure that everyone can enjoy basic rights and benefits.

At the same time, we also need to strengthen international cooperation and solidarity to deal with global problems. Wyyz02 (talk) 08:39, 23 June 2023 (UTC)

For an extra credit blog, you should post it on our blog; but in either case I've updated your grade with it yesterday. Unfortunately, your contributions to Korean Wikipedia have been declined by the Korean Wikipedia community as you rely too much on machine translation and did not proofread your submissions sufficiently despite being asked to do so by the volunteers there. Please remember that Wikipedia is a real world project, with rules and regulations we spend the last few months learning about, and part of what we need to learn is how to successfully interact with other people, including on Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:34, 24 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline8：ZHANG XIAORUI

Hello, professor.Based on the questions raised by the professor, I made some revisions to my article. For the article translated from Chinese to English, because there are three paragraphs in the original text without citations, my English article also failed to cite materials. English translation of the article into Chinese, and now some volunteers have left a message. Thank you. https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:%E9%9F%A9%E5%9B%BD%E7%9A%84%E5%A0%95%E8%83%8E User:Zzzxxxrrr/Trilateral incident Zzzxxxrrr (talk) 15:16, 24 June 2023 (UTC)

@Zzzxxxrrr I see you've made some fixes to your article, that's good progress and and I'll update your grade based on your recent activity. But to receive full points, your article should be published (moved to the mainspace). Please try to do so within the next ~12h - ask Chinese volunteers to review and publish your article. Good luck! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:52, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra Wiki project (Lim JIyeong)

As an exrta credit task, I have completed editing the wiki for "American Century" in Korean. Please check. User:Limjy0328/sandbox Limjy0328 (talk) 13:02, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, Wiki project (Park Jeong Eun)

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'digital object identifier', from English to Korean. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Digital_object_identifier

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%94%94%EC%A7%80%ED%84%B8_%EA%B0%9D%EC%B2%B4_%EC%8B%9D%EB%B3%84%EC%9E%90 Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 13:33, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, Wiki project (Park Jeong Eun)

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'GNU Project', from English to Korean. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GNU_Project

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/GNU_%ED%94%84%EB%A1%9C%EC%A0%9D%ED%8A%B8 Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 13:45, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, Wiki project (Park Jeong Eun)

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'CDS', from English to Korean. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CDS

https://ko.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=CDS&oldid=35114883 Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 13:50, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra Wiki project (Lim JIyeong)

As an exrta credit task, I have completed editing the wiki for "Anti-Korean sentiment in China" in Korean. Please check. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%82%AC%EC%9A%A9%EC%9E%90:Limjy0328/%EC%97%B0%EC%8A%B5%EC%9E%A5 --Limjy0328 (talk) 10:02, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

@Limjy0328 Please move your article out of the sandbox to the mainspace to receive full grade for this activity. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:46, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%A4%91%EA%B5%AD%EC%9D%98_%EB%B0%98%ED%95%9C_%EC%A0%95%EC%84%9C

I modified it. Please check it. Limjy0328 (talk) 14:54, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, Wiki project (Park Jeong Eun)

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'Akdim', from English to Korean. There is no Korean there, I edited it in Korean by pressing edit source on that page, 'English'. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akdim Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 13:57, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

@Parkjeongun0430: Thank you for translating this, and the following articles, that is a very appreciated task. However, I must warn that you should NOT be replacing the original English article with your Korean translations as you have done for LZ experiment, Xmx and Akdim. This leaves the articles unreadable to most English reading Wikipedia users. Your translations would need to go on the Korean Wikipedia, (https://ko.wikipedia.org), due the language written in. Your translations are saved in the page histories, so if you wish to do so, you can go back to those to copy the text if you wish to add them as new pages on https://ko.wikipedia.org . Best wishes, Zinnober9 (talk) 15:10, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra, Wiki project (Park Jeong Eun)

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'Aksu City', from English to Korean. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Aksu_City

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%84%ED%81%AC%EC%88%98%EC%8B%9C

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'Adjara', from English to Korean. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Adjara

https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EC%95%84%EC%9E%90%EB%A6%AC%EC%95%BC

Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 14:11, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

@Parkjeongeun0430 I am afraid your submissions are of too low quality to receive much extra credit. Many were at wrong Wikipedia site, and some of your edits at Korean Wikipedia have been declined for publication due to low quality of machine translation. I'll update your grade to reflect your efforts but I am afraid this is not going to change it much and the grading period is almost over. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:23, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

Extra Wiki project (Lim JIyeong)

As an exrta credit task, I have completed editing the wiki for "North Korean minorities" in Korean. Please check. https://ko.wikipedia.org/wiki/%EB%B6%81%ED%95%9C%EC%9D%98_%EC%86%8C%EC%88%98%EB%AF%BC%EC%A1%B1 Limjy0328 (talk)23:41, 24 June 2023 (UTC)--

@Limjy0328 Good job. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:24, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (HUANG YIXIAO)

Hello Professor, I took both of your courses and the first week was logging into the system and then complete the training, I asked you in class on Monday and you told me to send you a message twice and only have to do the training once. （Media Trends and Globalization course) HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 13:27, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

Extra, Wiki project (Park Jeong Eun)

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'Xmx' from English to Korean. There is no Korean there, I edited it in Korean by pressing edit source on that page, 'English'. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Xmx

Professor, I have completed the translation of Wikipedia, the 'LZ experiment' from English to Korean. There is no Korean there, I edited it in Korean by pressing edit source on that page, 'English'. Please check.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/LZ_experiment

Parkjeongeun0430 (talk) 14:00, 25 June 2023 (UTC)

@Parkjeongeun0430 That assignment was submitted to late to be graded and it was also done incorrectly. You should edit Korean content on Korean Wikipedia, not English. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:45, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Darlene Audrey)

Professor Piot, i am Darlene Audrey and i'm taking your Media Trends and Globalization class. I want to inform you that i have done the deadline 1 for the Student Training Modules and have enrolled in the dashboard system. Please check it.

Thank you. Darleneaudrey (talk) 01:23, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey Well done, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the reply. These are the proofs of my completed students training modules. Please kindly check it in here.. Darleneaudrey (talk) 06:12, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:05, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (ZHANG RUIQING)

Hello, Professor. I'm ZHANG RUIQING. I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization classes and Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I have completed deadline 1. Please check!

1. I have entered in our courses 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis', and I have enrolled in the dashboard system.

2. I have completed Student Training Modules [Basics, Special topics, How-to refreshers, and Exercises].

Please check it, thank you！ Rachel.zrq (talk) 06:04, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

@Rachel.zrq Well done, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:40, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

@Hanyangprofessor2 Hi, Professor. This is my proof of completing the training you can check

here!

and I made 10 edits on Wikivoyage and 10 edits on Wikipedia. Please check it, thank you very much. Have a good day! Rachel.zrq (talk) 12:05, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:06, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 ( Muna Aweis Araie)

Dear Professor,

I’m taking your course “Media Trends and Globalization” and I completed the training, here is the link. I enrolled in the course on the Dashboard system as well, thank you. --~~~~ Moonsunli (talk) 14:31, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

@Moonsunli Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:06, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline1： XU RUOCI

Dear Professor: I have completed the wiki training and enrolled in our course. And I also edited my user page(my user page:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ARoci_xu&wvprov=sticky-header). Please check them, thank youRoci xu (talk) 13:08, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Please read about WP:BOTTOMPOSTING and how to post messages at the bottom of the talk page and try again. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (JIN SIYU)

Professor, I completed the Training and confirm that I have enrolled in the dashboard system. Please check this assignment. Jinnnbrynn (talk) 08:14, 4 September 2023 (UTC)

@Jinnnbrynn Well done, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:40, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

Hello professor, this is my proof of completing the training you can check here. I also enrolled in our course 'Media Trends and Globalization'. Thank you! Jinnnbrynn (talk) 05:47, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

@Jinnnbrynn Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:00, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (HUANG YIXIAO)

Hello Professor, I've completed the training. Please check. （Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis course) HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 13:19, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Well done, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:40, 7 September 2023 (UTC)HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 03:50, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

::@Hanyangprofessor2 

Hello Professor

These are proof of the student training I have completed. Please check here and here, thank you.HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 12:55, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

deadline1

I completed the training. Hayeyong (talk) 02:37, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

@Hayeyong Ok, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline1-CHENG TANWEN

@Hanyangprofessor2 Hello, Professor. I'm CHENG TANWEN. I'm taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I have completed deadline 1. Please check!

1. I have entered in our courses 'Media Trends and Globalization' and 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis', and I have enrolled in the dashboard system.here it

2. I have completed Student Training Modules [Basics, Special topics, How-to refreshers, and Exercises].here it

Please check it, thank you！Chengtw11 (talk) 14:21, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Chengtw11 Ok - but please fix the code in your signature. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:02, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 (Vanessa Trzaska)

Dear Professor,

I'm participating in both of your courses (Media Trends and Globalization / Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis) as well. I completed the training for students, enrolled in the dashboards and made my first 10 edits on Wikivoyage. I would be glad if you could review and confirm it!

Kind regards,

Vanessa VaneTrz20 (talk) 14:22, 6 September 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Well done, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here. Regarding your 10 edits on Wikivoyage, I see them here, they look good! But note that some conten you've added was removed by an experienced editor as "unneeded". You can ask them for a more detailed explanation if you would like. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback! You should find a proof of the "Student Training Module" here

Please let me know if it worked! VaneTrz20 (talk) 05:01, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:05, 8 September 2023 (UTC)

Thank you! I also modified my signature, just checking if it's working with this message. ♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 13:30, 10 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 （ZHANG YUEXI）

Professor，I completed the Training and confirm that i have enrolled in the dashboard system.Please check. Yuexi Maria (talk) 08:04, 4 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yuexi Maria Well done, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:39, 7 September 2023 (UTC)

Dear professor，

Thank you for the reply.I have completed The training include[Basics& How-to refreshers sections]These are the proofs of my completed that, and I do not know why I can not sign in the website of Imgur, so I uploaded the picture to my blogger，please check it here.

And I also posted my views on the questions in the class in blogger,you can check it in our class comunity.And then,I will try my best to finish the training content of other sections in my spare time and reply to you.And I also edited my user page，you can check it,too.

Looking forward your reply. Yuexi Maria (talk) 11:11, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yuexi Maria Well done! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:14, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline1 （ZHANG KUN)

Hello, Professor. I'm ZHANG KUN. I'm taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I have completed deadline 1. Please check!

1. I have entered in 'Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis', and I have enrolled in the dashboard system.

2. I have completed Student Training Modules here

Please check it, thank you！ ZHANG KUN0305 (talk) 14:43, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG KUN0305 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:17, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

Wikis weekly project (HUANG YIXIAO)

Hi, Professor.

I completed my first week of 10 edits on Wikivoyage, please you could review and confirm it! thank you HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 07:20, 10 September 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Good job. But we will need to delete the File:Maanshan museum.jpg image, as we discussed in class, due to copyright issues. In here, you should restore the "see" section heading - please read https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Article_skeleton_templates/Sections . See also why your edit was reverted here.

See also here for another part of your edit that was undone (partially due to grammar errors) and I think the rest of this description is not idea either. Please try to describe the city for the tourists - why should they go there?

Finally, regarding this. On Wikivoyage you should not add external links, certainly not to Baidu which is not consiered a reliable source on Wikipedia. Likewise, per my link above about sections, you should not change the "Buy" heading into "Specialty", please restore it and proofread the text you added as there are several grammatical errors.

That said, it's a good start! Keep on editing! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:28, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have already fixed everything that needed to be fixed based on your tips, thank you for taking the time to review it.HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 03:06, 12 September 2023 (UTC)

Good :) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:16, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1 : Maxime Falconnier

Hello professor, I have joined the course registration and completed the wikipedia training. I have also made my ten weekly edits. Thank you. Maximefalco (talk) 02:04, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

@Maximefalco Ok, but please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here. Your 10 edits look good, the only very minor correction needed was this. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:19, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

Some Wiki edits: XU RUOCI

Hi Professor, I made some edits on Wikivoyage.Hope you check them.Thank you! Roci xu (talk) 14:56, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline1： XU RUOCI

Dear Professor: I'm very sorry for the error in the location of the message.I have completed the wiki training and enrolled in our course. And I also edited my user page(my user page:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ARoci_xu&wvprov=sticky-header). Please check them, thanksRoci xu (talk) 06:15, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Ok! Now this is correct! Your userpage is good but you will need to prove to me that you are indeed the author (creator) of the File:Welcome roci's page.png _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:13, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

ok I will show you on Friday. Thank you Roci xu (talk) 12:50, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Great, I'll be looking forward to it! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:35, 14 September 2023 (UTC)

Wiki voyage

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Caobao_Road_NO.7_Bridge_Blockhouse

Hello Professor, this is my new Wiki Travel. I wonder if you could check it out? Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 07:27, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu I am afraid this is not a suitable project for Wikivoyage. I recommend you save this in your Wikipedia userspace and develop this into an extra credit project on Wikipedia (not Wikivoyage). Individual monuments are not usually suitable projects for Wikivoyage, but they are ok for Wikipedia. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:15, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

Okay, I understand, thank you Professor! I changed it to this ,please check it ,thank you!

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Jianchuan Yangpeifu (talk) 11:28, 14 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Good, that topic is approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:27, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline1:DENGQIN

Hello, professor.I have completed the course registration and training, please confirm, thank you. Dengqin11 (talk) 01:35, 11 September 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:17, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

This is the picture to completing the training.

Dengqin11 (talk) 06:18, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:03, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) TANG JUNYUE

Hello, professor.I have completed the course registration and training, please confirm, thank you. 1.I'm completed the Wikipedia:Training/For students [3]

2.User talk:Yue03090616 Yue03090616 (talk) 05:22, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yue03090616 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:12, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) ZHANG BINGYI

https://imgur.com/ktmouhv

Hello, Professor. I completed the training and joined the plan. Please check it ,thank you! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 06:03, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:12, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) HAO JINGYU

Dear Professor, I have joined the course registration and completed Wiki training.（ https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students [4] ）if you could check it out? Thank you.

2019082315HAO JINGYU (talk) 07:20, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@2019082315HAO JINGYU Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:12, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1(Week 2) LI YULUN （Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis）

Hi, professor.I have completed the course registration and training,Please check it, thank you.https://imgur.com/a/1qic7RI LIYULUN (talk) 07:37, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@LIYULUN Ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:13, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Vanessa Trzaska)

Hello Professor,

I would like to work on my own on the following topics:

Media Trends & Globalization: Japanese popular culture, translating the article from English into German

Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis: creating a new article for my hometown "Heide" (Germany), there's already a german article about it on Wikivoyage but not very developed yet. Therefore, I would create a new article in English language (it's not existing yet at all)!!

Please let me know if my choices are okay! ♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 04:34, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 That's approved, but for MT&G, if you chose to translate to non-English language, you need to chose two topics, so there's one more for you to choose. Well done modifying your signature, which is an extra credit activity - remind me in class to get an extra point for that! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:05, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your advice!

Then, I would like to additionally work on the following article Asian Century for MT&G and translate it into German.

So if I understood correctly, it's minimun 2.000 words for translation, right? Should this be for each of the articles (Japanese popular culture (2.000 words) & Asian Century (2.000 words)) or in total 2.000 words (1.000 words each)? ♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 08:13, 15 September 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Asian Century to German is approved. Re 2k words, each article should be 2k words minimum after the translation. If it is more than that, it can generate extra credit. If less, another article needs to be translated, although 1k + 3k = 4k words work too. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:35, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline1 (LI YUSHUO)

Dear Professor,

  I am LI YUSHUO.And I'm taking Media Trends and Globalization classes.I have completed deadline 1.Please check it.Thank you *^_^*
  1.I have entered in our courses “Media Trends and Globalization” and I have enrolled in the dashboard system.
  2.I have completed Student Training Modules [Basics, Special topics, How-to refreshers, and Exercises].You can check it [5]https://yushuotina.imgur.com/all/?third_party=1 Yushuo Tina (talk) 08:07, 10 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yushuo Tina Please provide a working link to the image. The link above does not work _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:16, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

Ok!Sorry about that.How about this link[6]https://imgur.com/a/NTMwMXg.Please check it,thank you very much! Yushuo Tina (talk) 15:36, 17 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yushuo Tina Now it is ok _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:03, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 2 (Darlene Audrey)

Dear Professor, i would like to discuss about our (me and my team mate, kim minji) topic for the assignment. We think Globalization in South Korea is a good one. Please let me know if this topic is okay.

I also want to ask about the translation, is that right that if we chose this topic, we need to translate it to 2 languages because i fluent in bahasa indonesia and kim minji is fluent in korean?

And for the minimum words, is that right if the article that is translate to bahasa indonesia is 2.000 words and to the korean is also 2.000 so it would be 4.000 for the two of us?

Thank you. Darleneaudrey (talk) 03:42, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey You are correct that it's 4k for a 2-person group. But a 2p group needs to work on on one ENGLISH article and one non-ENGLISH, not two non-ENGLISH. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:37, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

So you can translate the Globalization in SK article to Korean of Indonesian as your non-English article, but you also need to chose an article to improve in English. How about Indonesia–South Korea relations? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:40, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the reply. okay if i get it right, so we have the Globalization in South Korea article for translate it to Korean/Indonesian as our non-English article and Indonesia–South Korea relations article for the expand to improve our english is that right? Darleneaudrey (talk) 06:02, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey Yes, although this is just my suggestion for the topic - you can propose your own this week if you don't like my suggestion. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:04, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1(week 2)XUEDONGXIN

Hello, Professor. I completed the training and joined the plan. Please check it ,thank you! https://imgur.com/a/l0eLbYz Donghem (talk) 07:21, 16 September 2023 (UTC)

@Donghem It's ok! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 10:04, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 1:YANG PEIFU

https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/training/students

Hello, Professor. I completed the training and joined the plan. Please check it ,thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 05:29, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:01, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

Ok！Here are photos of the completed training .Please check it ! Thanks! https://imgur.com/KhVfHlg Yangpeifu (talk) 06:34, 9 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:12, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 2(week 3)ZHANG YUEXI

Dear professor, these are two articles what I choose.The first one isBeer in South Korea,and the second one is Environment of China.Both will be translated to Chinese.Please check it, many thanks. Yuexi Maria (talk) 14:28, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

@Yuexi Maria Topics approved! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:13, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline2（week）YANGPEIFU

Hello professor, this is a Wikipedia article I found, translated from Chinese into English, I don’t know if I can continue to translate it. Please check it out! Thanks! CUHK student porn incident Part of my draft.

Dear student. First, please remember to WP:SIGN your posts properly. Second, this seems like a good extra credit project, but please make sure to add references. Content cannot be published on Wikipedia without references. If you would like to discuss your main project, please talk to me after class during my office hours. Also, please remember to add your name to our spreadsheet (link in the LMS). I don't see any "YANGPEIFU" in it at the moment. --_{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:15, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

Wikis weekly project (ZHANG BINGYI)

Hello, Professor.  I completed my first week of 10 edits on Wiki, please you could review and confirm it! Thank you The Bund

Zhangzhang111 (talk) 16:02, 19 September 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Ok, but please be careful - you've moved the list of references to the wrong place (I fixed it for you). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:18, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Vanessa Trzaska)

Dear Professor,

I added a reference (No.1 "Lee, Kyu Chang (...)) to the following article Abortion in North Korea.

I found the source on Google Scholar, which is a search engine suited for general literature review of scientific documents.

Please check it out and give me feedback! ♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 00:50, 20 September 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Well done. Adding academic references is the best. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 12:21, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

Wiki edits: XUE DONGXIN

Hi Professor, I want to translate this Wikipedia article from Chinese to English. https://zh.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%8F%8D%E5%8F%B0%E7%8D%A8%E6%83%85%E7%B7%92 (Anti-Taiwan independence sentiment) Donghem (talk) 07:32, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

@Donghem The topic is good and approved. Please talk to me after class/during office hours as you need to add your name to our spreadsheet (see link in the LMS if you want to do it before class). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:26, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (HUANG YIXIAO)

Hello Professor

I've added a reference link to the e-book novel different between

, please check. HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 12:52, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Good. But per WP:PRIMARY, the best reference would be not the work itself, but an independent source making this claim. Can you find such a source (for extra credit)? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:29, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Vanessa Trzaska)

Hello Professor,

I finished working on the 1st Blog assignment "What Is Globalization?". You can find here

Additionally, I replied to a post from a fellow student. You can find it here

I also created a first draft of my article Heide on Wikivoyage and did some Wiki edits for both of the courses (about 20 edits in total).

I would like to get some feedback about my blog post. ♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 14:33, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Well done with the blog assignment. It is well formatted and contains good arguments, so it gets full grade :) We will try to discuss your question in our class next week. Good job with  your wiki edits! Regarding the refernece here, try to use a Wikipedia:Citation template. If you don't know how, ask me during the wiki class or during my office hours. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:35, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

wiki edits（ZHANG BINGYI）

Hello professor, I want to translate wiki from Chinese to English. I have selected three articles, and I hope professor can check whether they can be translated，thank you~

[7] or [8] or [9] Zhangzhang111 (talk) 15:47, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Those are all very good choices. Please talk to me after class/during office hours as you need to add your name to our spreadsheet (see link in the LMS if you want to do it before class) _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:36, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline3（WU SHUAHN）

Hello, Professor. I added an external link. Please check it WSH0927 (talk) 15:56, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:37, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Wiki edits: XU RUOCI

Hi Professor, I made some edits on Wikivoyage.Hope you check them.Thank you! ~~ Roci xu (talk) 12:39, 21 September 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Of course. Well done creating voy:Pengzhou. Now you can link it to wikidata and other languages by clicking 'add links' in the language menu on the bottom left, then add Chinese wikivoyage (zh) name (彭州) there. You should also add the city name to voy:Sichuan and Chengdu (at the bottom, in 'go next' section.

In here, you removed the old dead link for the China Lantern Museum - good. But can you find a new working, official link to add? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:26, 22 September 2023 (UTC)

OK，I will try！ Roci xu (talk) 13:42, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Araie Muna)

Dear Professor, I searched for and added a reference in a part where it was written "citation needed".

Here is the link, and here is the {{Diff}}, [ https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Passing_(novel)&diff=prev&oldid=1176866462] I'm a bit lost and I did not understand if we were supposed to put the diff instead of the link ? Thank you. ~~~~ Moonsunli (talk) 14:16, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

@Moonsunli Excellent, that looks like a high quality academic citation that is relevant to the text. Very good! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:18, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

Deadline3：XU RUOCI， GENG JIAYI

Hi Professor， I think I have completed Deadline3. I think this article has met the requirements of the syllabus. And I added the article to the dashboard.Please check them， thank you~~ Roci xu (talk) 13:41, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Pengzhou Roci xu (talk) 13:47, 24 September 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu It is pretty close. There are few minor issues to fix: "Pengzhou City has four streets and nine towns under its jurisdiction" - the word street here is incorrect. History and geography section will need to be exanded with information of interest to tourist (on historical and natural landmarks). We will need to add a listing with GPS coordinates to the entry in Learn. The entry in Connect is incorrect, 'Public Security Bureau' may be relevan to 'Stay safe' section, but Connect is about something else. Please see the description of sections in https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Wikivoyage:Article_skeleton_templates/Sections for more. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 00:16, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix it. Roci xu (talk) 05:37, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

Hi Dear Professor, I have fixed the problem you mentioned. Please check them again and let me know if there are any other errors or I complete Dealine3. If I finish it, I'll move on to the next task. Thank you and hope you have a great Mid-Autumn Festival!!！ Roci xu (talk) 15:29, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Good progress. Please rewrite the first sentence of history into proper English (you can ask ChatGPT for advice). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:55, 26 September 2023 (UTC)

On Deadline 3: Week 5 (draft of the first article)

Hello professor, I am Li haochang, a student in this class (Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis). I have completed my draft, please check it. Thank you so much. Lihaochang666 (talk) 04:12, 25 September 2023 (UTC)

@Lihaochang666 Good progress. For your next improvements, please ensure all content reads well in English (try asking ChatGPT for advice), convert all locations into listings with GPS coordinates and add a map like we practiced in the last class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:57, 26 September 2023 (UTC)

Dealine 1: Lu Shu

Hello Professor, I have joined the course registration and completed Wiki training. I wonder if you could check it out? Thank you. 노주 (talk) 06:24, 11 September 2023 (UTC) The link below is photos, there are four photos, uploaded in my sandbox.

@노주 please provide a proof of completing the training, for example through a picture like your collegues did here. There are no links to any photos in your post above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 11:18, 13 September 2023 (UTC)

Hello Professor, I have revised the assignment, and a screenshot of the assignment is in my sandbox. Here is the link.User:노주/sandbox 노주 (talk) 07:42, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

@노주 Ok! Accepted! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:43, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Darlene Audrey)

Dear professor, i already added a new missing citation to this article D.O. (entertainer), please check it. And for the diff, i still cannot figured it out myself so i will ask you later in the class. Thank you Darleneaudrey (talk) 07:56, 29 September 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey For the diff, study the guide at Help:Diff - but of course I am happy to show you more in class or during office hours. Regarding the ref you added (diff), it has two problems. First, is it reliable? Blogs are problematic - see WP:RS. Second, please add the name of the author to the citation template, and a translated title (English) to the "translated title" parameter you can find in the template as well. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:46, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 2(Week3) Wiki Edits - LU SHU & DENG QIN

Hello Professor,This is Lushu, and our group members include Lushu and Dengqin. We apologize for reaching out to you this late, as we hadn't finalized a specific topic promptly and wanted to contact you in a timely manner. For our first article, we have chosen Anthony Giddens. As for the second article, we have two options: 'IPartment 5' and 'Leifeng Pagoda' We are more inclined to edit 'Leifeng Pagoda' Can these two topics be suitable for our editing articles? We hope you can clarify our confusion. Looking forward to your response. 노주 (talk) 07:24, 2 October 2023 (UTC)

@노주 Dear Lu Shu. Anthony Giddens is approved - just let me know if you are translating his entry to Chinese or Korean? However, for your second topic, both Leifeng Pagoda and the other articles have good articles in English. You should chose to translate something that has very small or no article at all. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:50, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

Dear Professor, we have reviewed the articles, and as there are already good English articles on Anthony Giddens(https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E5%AE%89%E6%9D%B1%E5%B0%BC%C2%B7%E7%B4%80%E7%99%BB%E6%96%AF), we have decided to translate the English one into Chinese and edit the Chinese version. For the second article, we have considered it for a while and believe that Shanxi mature vinegar is a good choice. Although both the English and Chinese versions have limited content, we can search for additional information to expand and add to the English version. Is this topic suitable for us to edit? Looking forward to your response. 노주 (talk) 02:17, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

@노주 Shanxi mature vinegar is already expanded sufficiently. You need to find a or is a topic that does not exist on English Wikipedia or is very short,.<500 words _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 02:43, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3 (Maxime Falconnier)

Dear professor,

I created a first draft of my article on La Toussuire for the Understanding Small and Bid Data with Wikis course.

About the MTG course, i finally choose my subject : Alcoohol in France. The page doesn't exist, so I will create it.

I also did my 20 weekly edits (for both courses). Finally, I added a citation on this article Pornichet in the 'waterfront renovation' section.

Please let me know if this is all good, or if something is missing about what we need to do regarding the deadline. Maximefalco (talk) 08:34, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

@Maximefalco Good start on Wikivoyage - please add do and see listings, as those are most important for tourists.

The topic of Alcoohol in France is approved (note there is Alcohol in New France). Compare also Alcohol in Australia, Alcohol in Iran and other main articles in Category:Alcohol by country. See also Category:Alcohol in France for related topics that you may want to mention that have articles on English Wikipedia. For topics that exists on French but not English Wikipedia, use Template:Interlanguage link _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:59, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 2(Week3) Wiki Edits - LU SHU & DENG QIN

Hello Professor。I'm Dengqin.For topics that we haven't decided yet, we chose Chinese Legendary Times https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/%E4%B8%AD%E5%9B%BD%E4%BC%A0%E8%AF%B4%E6%97%B6%E4%BB%A3 as our topic for translating Chinese into English.Please check if we can use this theme. Dengqin11 (talk) 13:11, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 Yes, this is a very nice topic, it is approved. Please stop by in class so we can update the spreadsheet by confirming which articles you want to translate. Right now I have recorded "criticisms of globalization to zh; alter globalization from zh to en". The second one seems to be an error? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:17, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Wiki edits: DENG QIN

Hello Professor!I'm sorry I'm late, but I caught up on my task of editing 10 Wikimedia articles a week for the last four weeks.Because I had two of your lectures, I made up the weekly wiki assignments for the previous four weeks.Chinese translation into English 40, and English translation into Chinese 40, a total of 80.Here is the link: Chinese translation into English:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:Contributions/Dengqin11 English translation into Chinese:https://zh.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:%E7%94%A8%E6%88%B7%E8%B4%A1%E7%8C%AE/Dengqin11 Please confirm. Thank you. Dengqin11 (talk) 07:30, 6 October 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 For your Wikipedia edits, please make sure that all content you add is referenced (per WP:V). Unreferenced content can be removed from Wikipedia and does not count for our assignment (but you can rescue it by adding references). Much of the content you have added sadly seems unreferenced. Also, remember that references should be reliable (see WP:RS). When linking to a topic that exists on Chinese but not English Wikipedia, please use Template:Interlanguage link _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:22, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3: Week 5 LI YULUN & HAO JINGYU group10（Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis）

Hi Professor, here's the wiki guided tour article selected by our group with some basic editing, check it out!https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Ya%27an#Internet LIYULUN (talk) 10:51, 6 October 2023 (UTC)

@LIYULUN Good progress, but see how experienced Wikivoyage editors improved your edits (see history, review fixes and comments by Ikan Kekek). Try to learn from those fixes, so that they are not necessary with your next series of edits. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:24, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

On Deadline 3: Week 5 LIHAOCHANG&LINZIYU

Our group has completed the first draft and asked the professor to check it.

And we are constantly improving. Lihaochang666 (talk) 04:16, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

@Lihaochang666 I think so - good job :) but see how experienced Wikivoyage editors improved your edits (see this for example, review fixes and comments by Ikan Kekek). Try to learn from those fixes, so that they are not necessary with your next series of edits. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:24, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Vanessa Trzaska)

Hello Professor,

I finished doing my weekly wiki edits for both courses.

Additionally I worked on the second draft of my Wikivoyage article about my hometown Heide (You can find the progress here!)

I also translated the first article Japanese popular culture into German language (around 2.000 words). I will work on the second one in the upcoming weeks.

I realized that some references in the English version aren't up-to-date anymore. Links are sometimes dead and I couldn't find the references online so I just put " / " instead. I'm not sure how to solve this problem. Maybe I can just remove the references on the German article I translated?

I would appreciate some feedback! ♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 14:51, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Good job. Note one small error (fixed by an experienced volunteer) here. When translating to German, please make sure to proofread the article if you are relying on machine translation help, see de:Wikipedia:Übersetzungen .

For old references, see if you can recover them by finding them in the Internet Archive. I can show you how to do so in class or during office hours. If they cannot be recovered, we need to find a better, working reference to confirm them or remove the unreferenced content (see Wikipedia:Verifiability / de:Wikipedia:Belege). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:27, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 2 DENGQIN

Hello Professor! In Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis I picked Nanchong as the topic and finished, half of the editors, please refer to it. Thank you!https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Nanchong Dengqin11 (talk) 13:53, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 This is a good start, but it is very important to add information (listings) to see/do, which is what tourists are most interested in. The bus section is right now a very unwieldy list, that is probably too detailed for wikivoyage (or badly formatted - is there a way to do it better?). @Ikan Kekek, what do you think - can this be salvaged somehow? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:19, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

The detailed route information in the "By bus" subsection should be deleted and replaced by basic information, such as what the fare is, how to obtain fare cards or tickets if necessary, how to pay, and a link to the bus rapid transit agency's website so people can look at the route information there. In the "By subway" subsection, the important information again would be practical, and in addition to the type of content I mentioned for the "By bus" subsection, should also include what places of interest to travelers can be accessed by which line. Stuff like this is encyclopedic and not interesting to most travelers: "Line 1 has 17 stations, including 3 hub stations; Line 2 has 19 stations, 3 hub stations; Line 3 has 12 stations; and Line 2 has 2 hub stations." Also note that "History" is not a section header on Wikivoyage but an optional subsection header in the "Understand" section. Can the article be salvaged? Sure it can! But information useful to visitors must be added: "See" and "Do" listings, as you said, but "Eat" and "Sleep" are also important. "Learn," "Work," "Connect" and "Cope" are optional sections that can be deleted if there's nothing travel-relevant to say about those topics. Ikan Kekek (talk) 20:37, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

@Dengqin11 Pinging student to make sure they see the extensive and very helpful feedback provided above. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:09, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3: Week 5 XUEDONGXIN

Hello Professor, this is my draft of Wikipedia.Please check it.Anti-Taiwan independence sentiment Donghem (talk) 08:37, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@Donghem Good start, but you should have waited for my detailed review before publishing it. As you can see from the discussion here)  :, this is not yet ready to be published. Currently, there are numerous issues such as: 1) malformatted translation (image caption is copied without the image as the second paragraph in the lead), 2) poor grammar/vocabulary (please use tools like Grammarly and AI tools to copyedit your prose into passable English, 3) format the references so that they use Wikipedia:Citation templates, and contain all the necessary metadata (translated title for Chinese sources, author's name, publisher, date, etc.) 4) Finally, since the original Chinese article is pretty poor (there is too much reliance on simple quotations, which is against Wikipedia:Quotations policy - half of the article - section 'Anti-Taiwan independence speech' - seems composed of nothing but said quotations), you should try to use some scholarly English language sources to improve the article, see here for good sources. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:25, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

PS. See also my feedback to you from June. Since this is a continuation of work you begun in previous class, I expect you to improve the article above average (using English scholarly sources). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:51, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

OK, I will modify it as soon as possible, thank you very much. Donghem (talk) 07:35, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3: (Week 5) YANGPEIFU

Hello Professor, this is my draft of Wikipedia.Draft:CUHK student porn incident and Caobao Road No. 7 Bridge Blockhouse. Please check it!( Yulong)Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 08:51, 10 October 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Good progress.

Regarding Caobao Road No. 7 Bridge Blockhouse, please replace the table in to top right with a correct WP:INFOBOX. Easiest way to do so is to find an existing good article on a similar topic, copy the infobox from it, and adjust it to your article. If the article exists on Chinese Wikipedia, please link it by using the "Add interlanguage links" from the menu on the right. I expect there may be some topics on Chinese Wikipedia that you mention that do not exist in English - please use Template:Interlanguage link to link them; otherwise they need to be red-linked and explained (for example, what is Qingxiang - the article that links from here to there does not seem to be correct?). Please use tools like Grammarly and AI tools to copyedit your prose into better English, there are some sentences that do not read well. The section 'Other' reads like 'Trivia'. See MOS:TRIVIA for why this is bad. Please incorporate the content form here under other sections or create new ones. The very end of this section has no reference. Finally, format the references so that they use Wikipedia:Citation templates, and contain all the necessary metadata (translated title for Chinese sources, author's name, publisher, date, etc.).

Regarding your second article (Draft:CUHK student porn incident , please do the same fixes as I noted above (copyedit language with Grammarly/AI tools, improve the formatting of the references). I note that your article was recently reviewed by an experienced volunteer (User:Johannes Maximilian) due to "This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. ", but I hope they'll elaborate here. All content outside the lead seems referenced, and the content in the lead seems to summarize referenced content from the body.

Regarding your Wikivoyage article at Yulong , it is progressing well. Please convert entries about various places into listings, so that they have GPS coordinates. This seems to be the most important issue to address in that article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:44, 12 October 2023 (UTC)

Thank you Professor, i will check and modify it carefully! 218.235.241.117 (talk) 07:53, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

Wiki Edits：ZHANGBINGYI

Hello Professor, this is my draft of Wikipedia.Draft:Tibet travel

Please check it!Thank you! Zhangzhang111 (talk) 15:14, 14 October 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 As discussed in class, please add more references and format them with missing metadata. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:31, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3: (Week 5) WU SHUHAN

Hello Professor, I was seriously ill last week.So I didn't submit my homework by the deadline.I'm sorry. This is my draft of Wikipedia. Luo yusheng Please check it!Thank you! WSH0927 (talk) 13:16, 15 October 2023 (UTC)

@WSH0927 That's a good start, but much of your article is missing references. Please ensure that each fact has a reference (footnote), and that each footnote is correctly formatted with citation templates with metadata. From our syllabus: You should use a citation template (위키백과:인용 틀) and make sure your reference has a title, author, publisher, date of publication (if available), and translated title (in addition to the original title, not instead of it) and quote supporting the claim being made (if the reference has a different language from the Wikipedia it is published on - for example if you add a Korean-language reference to English Wikipedia, please make sure English title and quote are included. The reference should contain a quotation (one or two sentences) that show it is relevant to and supports the claim it is referenced. The reference needs to be reliable (see WP:RS). I recommend using sources found through Google Scholar service. Explicitly, Baidu is not allowed per WP:BAIDU rule. When adding a non-English reference to English Wikipedia, please add the translated title to the metadata article, and a quotation from the source that proves the content is relevant _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:34, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4 (Maxime Falconnier

Hello Professor

Here is my draft of Understanding Small and Big Data course : La Toussuire

Thanks for checking it and giving me some feedbacks ! Maximefalco (talk) 06:20, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

@Maximefalco It is a good start, but it is rather short. We should have more see and do listings. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:35, 16 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Darlene Audrey)

Dear Professor, i have done uploading my translation article from English to Indonesia and you already review it yesterday in the classroom. I already add the categories and references as you said. Please kindly check it Globalisasi di Korea Selatan. I also done with the Blog reading assignment 2 and i have made 25 wiki edits. Thank you! Darleneaudrey (talk) 04:35, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey Looks like good progress. Your article would benefit from some images. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:25, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4： XU RUOCI & GENG JIAYI

Hi Professor， I refined my draft and revised some of it. Please check it and give me some comments and suggestions.Thank you！！！https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Pengzhou Roci xu (talk) 12:56, 18 October 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Good progress. Please spellcheck your work - I recommend using tools like Grammarly; there are still errors like typo "Climacte". Are there any festivals we can add to "Do"? Compare your article to voy:Ansan for example. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:27, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Vanessa Trzaska)

Dear Professor,

I finished doing my weekly wiki edits for both courses.

I translated my second article from English into German language. You can find it here (Asian Century into Asiatisches Jahrhundert). I would be happy for you to review it and give me some advise on what to improve.

Additionally, I finished the Blog Post Assignment 2. You can find my blog post here. I also answered one of the student's blog post to complete the assignment.

I worked on my Wikivoyage article about the town "Heide" as well. Here is my progress. Out of curiosity, I also checked some of my fellow students' articles out. I noticed that many of their listings have very long texts. That's why I was wondering how long description texts should be. I could imagine that longer texts are a bit overwhelming and also quite boring for the possible reader. Here is an example for reference.

My last question would be whether there is a general requirement as to how much the Wikivoyage article should have? Is there a certain number of listings or text we should add?

Thank you in advance! ♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 14:52, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Good work. Regarding the length of each listing, the description can be few sentences long. If something seems overly long, please let me know and I'll review it and provide feedback to you and the student author in question. For this and your final question, a good reference is found on Wikivoyage help pages. For example, listings are discussed at voy:Wikivoyage:Listings. As for your final question, how about you ask it at voy:Wikivoyage:Arrivals lounge? There, experts who know even more about Wikivoyage then me will answer it shortly.This is a good list of policies: voy:Wikivoyage:Manual of style, and you can see examples of best articles at voy:Star articles. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:33, 20 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: (Week 7) YANGPEIFU

Hello Professor, I revised my draft of Wikipedia and added some templates. Please check it. Thank you! Draft: CUHK student porn incident and Caobao Road No. 7 Bridge Blockhouse. Yangpeifu (talk) 10:37, 21 October 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Very good progress. I think your CUHK article is ready to be published. I'll get back to you soon on that. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:42, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: (Week 7) WU SHUAHAN

Hello, Professor. I revised my Wikipedia draft. Please check it. And finished the second draft of the Wikitourism project, here. But I'm not sure what is the length of a good wiki travel article? WSH0927 (talk) 13:32, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

The Wikitourism project is this. I made a mistake. Sorry. WSH0927 (talk) 13:45, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

@WSH0927 For your Wikivoyage project, please add a map, as well as the 'understand' section with short history and climate, like we practiced in class in the recent weeks. You also should add more see and do listings. For do, you should include festivals. Compare your entry to voy:Ansan for an idea on how to format entry correctly and what to add.

Regarding your Wikipedia article, please consult my advice from last time (#Deadline 3: (Week 5) WU SHUHAN). You now have some references, but ALL of the content (each sentence) needs a reference. Unreferenced content is not allowed on Wikipedia per Wikipedia:Verifiability policy, and does not count for our assignment. You also need to format your references better, many are missing much metadata (author names, translated titles, etc.). Your article also needs blue links to other Wikipedia articles (see WP:BTW) and a WP:INFOBOX (I recommend copying one from an article about another Chinese actor, then modifying its contents). _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:46, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 4: Week 7 LI YULUN & HAO JINGYU group10（Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis）

Hello Professor, this is our further edited wiki voyage article, please check it outhttps://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Ya%27an LIYULUN (talk) 14:32, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

@LIYULUN Good. Please add GPS to the listing for 'Fuyunhaizi' . There are some errors to correct, ex. why is the address for the "Menghuo Castle" saying asbestos? Try to add 'Directions' to the listings that miss them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:51, 23 October 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 3(Week5) & Deadline 4(Week5) - HUANG YIXIAO

Hello Professor

I've completed week five.

Please check it or have any tips for me.

Media Trends and Globalization here

Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis here

HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 11:24, 1 October 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Your Chinese Wikipedia translation is a good start. Please make sure to add references to each paragraph. Please ensure that your article reads good in Chinese, to avoid having your article declined due to problems with weak translation. Please read zh:维基百科:翻譯指引 carefully. When you are sure the language is ok, and all content is referenced, please publish your article(s) by moving the content to the mainspace. Please let me know when you publish them. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:47, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

Hello Professor

I already add all content is referenced. But how can i move the content to the mainspace? HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 10:59, 6 October 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Please see Wikipedia:Moving a page / zh:Help:页面重命名 _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:55, 9 October 2023 (UTC)

Hello Professor

My first english to chinese translation has been revised and the Chinese wiki administrator has moved to mainspace. please check it. HUANG YIXIAO (talk) 11:44, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

@HUANG YIXIAO Excellent, well done. Your main project indeed appears finished, if it has been accepted by a Wikipedia administator/reviewer. You can now do other wiki edits for extra credit. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:07, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Regarding Wikivoyage project (Ma'anshan), it is a good start. I'll be looking forward to seeing it expanded much more with many more listings. Please read voy:WV:TOUT and consider whehter adjectives such as "beautiful" are ok? For PUTANG, please explain what it is (a park?). Also, is it PUTANG or Putang? Check if any listings have entries on English or Chinese Wikiepdia, or Wikidata, and try to connect them like we practiced in class few weeks ago. If you forgot how to do so, ask me in class. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:53, 3 October 2023 (UTC)

Wiki edits: XU RUOCI

Hi Professor, I made some edits on Wikivoyage.And I put a new link of ‘China Lantern Museum’.Hope you check them.Thank you! ~~ Roci xu (talk) 07:37, 29 October 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Good. If you'd like more specific feedback, please link the page or pages you edited that you'd like me to discuss in detail. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:08, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Wikidata Create a new Item

From alive Hi Professor, I created a new Item on Wikidata. Hope you check them.Thank you! Yangpeifu (talk) 09:10, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Looks good. In next class, we will try to add more content there! _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:09, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Vanessa Trzaska)

Dear Professor,

For the Media Trends and Globalization course, I reviewed the following articles Caobao Road No. 7 Bridge Blockhouse and Draft:CUHK student porn incident. You can see my feedback for the fellow student here.

For the Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis course, I reviewed the following article Yichang. You can see my feedback for the fellow student here.

Additionally, I also completed my weekly wiki edits on Wikidata and Wikivoyage

Kind regards,

♥VanessaTrzaska♥ (talk) 03:37, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

@VaneTrz20 Excellent. I hope they find your feedback useful, and I hope that you get useful feedback in exchange. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:09, 2 November 2023 (UTC)

LIHAOCHANG

Hello Professor. This is my translation assignment. Please check. Can I publish? Lihaochang666 (talk) 07:17, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

@Lihaochang666 For now the article needs a lot of work. 'feature' does not explain why Guan Zhong or Confucius are relevant to your topic, and this is a problem with much of the article. 'scope' has reference only for the first few words. 'history' section starts by talking about 'Shandong culture' which is not mentioned before. Sadly, it seems that the original Chinese Wikipedia article is of very low quality and very little from it can be published on English Wikipedia. I recommend writing a new short version of 500 words using reliable, academic sources. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:27, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit opportunity for Week 10: peer review of another student's article

@Hanyangprofessor2， Hello, Professor. I'm CHENG TANWEN. I'm taking Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis. I have made constructive comments on other students' home pages, please check it，thank you. Chengtw11 (talk) 06:10, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

@Chengtw11 Excellent. I hope they find your feedback useful, and I hope that you get useful feedback in exchange. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:34, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 10: peer review of another student's article(ZHANG KUN)

Hello Professor,I'm ZHANG KUN from Understanding Small and Big Data with Wikis.

I completed a peer review of other students' articles(here),please check it. Thank you. ZHANG KUN0305 (talk) 06:18, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

@ZHANG KUN0305 Excellent. I hope they find your feedback useful, and I hope that you get useful feedback in exchange. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:34, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5 (Maxime Falconnier)

Hello Professor

Here is my draft of my article on La Toussuire for the MTG course

And here is my draft France for the Understanding Small and Big Data course

Let me know if it's all good ! Thank you Maximefalco (talk) 07:01, 4 November 2023 (UTC)

@Maximefalco Regarding the Wikivoyage article, as we discussed, it is short enough that I recommend you try to create another similar entry to reach the word count comparable to other student projects in our course.

Regarding Alcohol in France, please see issuse raised by other reviewers. Much of your article is unreferenced. It can be expanded with content from fr:Consommation d'alcool en France. It also needs a WP:LEAD summary at the top. Note that some people suggest on talk that it should be merged with French wine#Wine regions of France. You are welcome to comment in that discussion. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 07:34, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

About the Wikivoyage article, I will continue to expand it so that I can reach the word count, I know i will success with only one article.

Regarding Alcohol in France, I add 8 references, I will put a few one so I don't really understand the issue with that. Maximefalco (talk) 09:13, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

@Maximefalco I think that to improve the article, we need to discuss non-wine alcohol. Summarize and link to the articles on Beer in France, French wine and write something about Category:French distilled drinks - this should help. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:09, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5: XU RUOCI & GENG JIAYI

Hi! Dear Professor, I made some edits and changes to my post and changed the banner to the right size based on the website prompts. Please check it and let me know what other edits need to be made. Thank you~~ link: https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/Pengzhou Roci xu (talk) 12:44, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Well done. Your article looks pretty good. For the final step, ask experienced Wikivoyage editors for feedback by starting a discussion and link it from here"" with a comment: please review my article or similar. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:14, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 10: XU RUOCI

I read other students' article "Dezhou" and left my advice on the discussion page.Please check it. Thank you~~

Link: https://en.wikivoyage.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3ADezhou#Some_advice(XU_RUOCI) Roci xu (talk) 12:49, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Hi! Dear Professor!I apologize that I seem to have gotten the comment in the wrong place, so I've re-commented on the user discussion page.

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User_talk:Lihaochang666#Some_advice_on_the_article_%22Dezhou%22_(XU_RUOCI)

Please check it!!! Thank you~ Roci xu (talk) 13:00, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Good job, it looks fine now. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:16, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Week 10:LIHAOCHANG

professor. I have finished the review please check. 118.218.37.247 (talk) 13:14, 6 November 2023 (UTC)

Good, but you did not sign your message so the person who left it does not know who it is from, and I cannot count it for your credit because it does not show up in your contributions. Please sign your posts. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 10:YANGPEIFU

Dear Professor,

I reviewed the following articles Abortion in North Korea. You can see my feedback for my fellow students here.Thank you~ Yangpeifu (talk) 12:28, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Well done, I hope you also get useful feedback in return. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:17, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 5:YANGPEIFU

Hello Professor! My draft article has been approved! (CUHK student porn incident) Thank you for your help! There are still 2 articles(Draft: Be With You (2023 TV dream）and Caobao Road No. 7 Bridge Blockhouse )that I need to improve. I will continue to work hard. Yangpeifu (talk) 12:37, 8 November 2023 (UTC)

@Yangpeifu Excellent job, I provided feedback to you during office hours - but let me know if you have any more quesitons. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 08:18, 10 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 10:WU SHUHAN

Hello Professor, I have browsed my friend's homepage and left feedback on the discussion page. You can view it. thank you. WSH0927 (talk) 14:00, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

@WSH0927 Well done, I hope you also get useful feedback in return. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:59, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 10:XUE DONGXIN

Dear Professor,

I gave feedback below my classmates’ articles. You can see my feedback for my fellow students here.Thank you~ User talk:Yangpeifu#Feedback 4 Donghem (talk) 01:30, 13 November 2023 (UTC)

@Donghem Well done, I hope you also get useful feedback in return. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:59, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 10: GENG JIAYI

Hello professor, I have read and commented on my friend's homepage about Texas,you for providing the link.Thankyou

https://en.wikivoyage.org/wiki/User_talk:Lihaochang666 jiaaaay 13:05, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

@Jiaaaay Well done, I hope you also get useful feedback in return. But, what Texas? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 03:58, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

I'm sorry to tell you that the translation software I used in my comment was wrong. It's China Dezhou 175.212.190.7 (talk) 04:04, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

GENG JIAYI

Hello professor, I need to edit the wiki tour page 10 times a week from the first week to this week has accumulated to 110 times, you can view it through my homepage, thank you jiaaaay 13:09, 12 November 2023 (UTC)

@Jiaaaay Yes, you need to make 10 edits each week. Good job with your recent edits, but review how experienced Wikivoyage editors are fixing your edits: ex. here or here. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 04:16, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Wiki edits: XU RUOCI

Hi Dear Professor, I made some edits on Wikivoyage of the article ‘Guangyuan’.Please check it，thanks~~ Roci xu (talk) 08:21, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Good but please pay attention to language or details. For example, the listing for " thousand-Buddha cliff statue (千佛崖摩崖造像)" refers to the topic as "Thousand Buddha Cliff Scenic Spot" and "Thousand Buddha Cliffs Cliff Statue". Which of the three English names here is correct? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 05:45, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for your advice and I'll double-check and change it. Roci xu (talk) 08:04, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

Extra credit Week 10:ZHANG BINGYI

Dear Professor,

I gave feedback on my classmates’ articles. You can see my feedback for my fellow students. Thank you~ User talk:Yangpeifu#Feedback 4 Zhangzhang111 (talk) 06:05, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

@Zhangzhang111 Good. Learning from others is helpful. Can you give your colleague any feedback by telling them how they can do something better? _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:43, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

Deadline6: XU RUOCI & GENG JIAYI

Hi Dear Professor! I've added two activities to my article about Pengzhou and I put the link here. Please check them~~Thank you Roci xu (talk) 06:27, 17 November 2023 (UTC)

@Roci xu Well done _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:44, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

LIHAOCHANG

Hello professor. I'm really sorry for not leaving you a message in time. My computer has been repaired. Now let me report on my work.

1. My city editing has been completed. Please check with the teacher and I will listen to the advice given by the professor.

2. My extra city has been edited 120 times, please confirm it. Lihaochang666 (talk) 16:57, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

@Lihaochang666 This is a good start but we need to do more. Understand needs to have a history and climate section. Your listings need GPS coordinates, and various details. Your map needs to be centered and zoom correctly. Do section needs festivals. Comparre your entry to Ansan, for example. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:46, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

xuedongxin

dear professor

I've made changes to my wiki article.Please check it and tell me where I need to improve.Thank you sincerely.Draft:Anti-Taiwan independence sentiment Donghem (talk) 22:53, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

@Donghem I think your article is more concize now. We need to ensure each claim is supported by references. I recommend you to add relevant quotations to each reference. For example, which sentence in which source supports the claim that "Minshi Company, Freedom Times, Sanli Company" are organizations that support Taiwan independence? Second, the section 'Define' is confusing. As is 'Anti-Taiwan'. How many concepts are we discussing? Anti-Taiwanese sentiment is an important topic, but it likely should be discussed in its own article. I recommend that you split that section into its own separate article. _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:21, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

OK, thanks for the suggestion. I have changed the article as you suggested. Please check again. Thank you sincerely. Donghem (talk) 08:23, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Deadline 6 (Darlene Audrey)

Dear professor, sorry I couldn't submit the assignment according to the deadline, 2 weeks ago my laptop was damaged so I was only able to use it as before this week.

I have finished reviewing a classmate's article, and you can check it here.

I have also started improving the Wikipedia article that Kim Minji and I chose, the Indonesia-South Korea relations, I have added citations and started improving the article in the culture section. Any feedback and comment would be appreciated. Thank you! Darleneaudrey (talk) 09:27, 25 November 2023 (UTC)

@Darleneaudrey This is a good start. It would be good to try to find academic citations to improve this and confirm claims like "popular South Korean culture is well known in Indonesia". _{Piotrus at Hanyang| reply here} 06:43, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Thank you for the feedback, I will try to do it right away.

And I also want to inform you that I have done my Blog Reading Assignment 3. Thank you! Darleneaudrey (talk) 04:56, 29 November 2023 (UTC)