User talk:Jamgreene/sandbox/Irnini Mons

Hi James, it looks like you have an excellent page here already so here are some options that may or may not improve your page:[1] Perhaps add a little more subtitles breaking up the sections of your page. [2] Explain what the four series of figures are getting across. [3] Perhaps move your time of events right below the table of contents, everything looks good though.

Hey James, You page looks great. This was kind of difficult be here are my three suggestions. 1. remove the links that don't exist so there aren't red words on yout page. 2. Is there a timescale for the events in the timeline section? 3. The picture in the volcanic development section isn't readable so maybe enlarge it or crop it to show the focal points of the diagram. Jelorr1 (talk) 14:53, 6 March 2014 (UTC)