User talk:Mo chocolat

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Hello, Mo chocolat, and welcome to Wikipedia. We appreciate encyclopedic contributions, but some of your recent contributions, such as your edit to the page Max Felchlin, seem to be advertising or for promotional purposes. Wikipedia does not allow advertising. For more information on this, please see:

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Please help me with...the content of Max Felchlin: Link: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Max_Felchlin

The informations there are completely wrong! Felchlin is NOT a confectioner for example. Even more there are a lot of mistakes in that article. Lately i published the german article about the company Felchlin here: https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Max_Felchlin_AG =>This article was discussed and approved.

Now i have the english translation of the article! Can i publish it? Can i just change the english article? The last time as i did it, it was just changed in this wrong article again.

Can somebody please give me an advise how to proceed?

Thank you very much!

Mo chocolat (talk) 12:55, 5 September 2016 (UTC)Mo chocolat - Robert[reply]

Your edits to the article were undone because they made the article very promotional. Wikipedia requires all articles to be neutral in tone. For example, "...delivers exceptional semi-finished products to top-end pastry shops" reads more like an advertisement than an encyclopaedia article. When you add new content, not only should it avoid WEASEL words and FLOWERY language, but also it must have independent reliable sources to verify the information added to the page. If you cannot find a source for the information you are adding, you should not add it to the article. If you want more help, stop by the Teahouse, Wikipedia's live help channel, or the help desk to ask someone for assistance. Primefac (talk) 13:59, 5 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Just to chime in, as the reverter...I've opened a discussion related to one of your objections at Talk:Max Felchlin#Is Felchlin a confectioner?. I invite you to respond there, so that we can find a resolution that pleases everyone. And if you have other concerns about the factual accuracy of the article, I invite you to open further discussions at Talk:Max Felchlin. Ibadibam (talk) 22:23, 6 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]