User talk:Pebbles44
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Peer Review[edit]
Hello,
Here are some minor changes I suggest to make your page on Claudia Myers a bit better:
In the Early Life section, I would write "an M.F.A." rather than "a M.F.A".
"A film about an army medic and single mother Maggie Swann (portrayed by Michelle Monaghan) struggling after a tour in Afghanistan."
This is not a full sentence, and it could be a bit more specific. For instance, "Fort Bliss is a film about an army medic and single mother Maggie Swann (portrayed by Michelle Monaghan) struggling to readjust to life with her family after a tour in Afghanistan."
Lastly, in the sentence "After the release, Independent Magazine named her one of the '10 Filmmakers to Watch in 2015'." and the sentence "As a writer and filmmaker, her works span across both fiction and documentary genres.", it would be clearer if you wrote "Scott" rather than "her".