User talk:Sfwarriors99

This user is a student editor in University_of_California,_Berkeley/PLP_-_Berkeley_Interdisciplinary_Research_Group_on_Privacy_-_Coleman_Lab_(Spring_21) .

This user is a student editor in University_of_California,_Berkeley/PLP_-_Berkeley_Interdisciplinary_Research_Group_on_Privacy_-_Coleman_Lab_(Fall_2020) .

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Hello, Sfwarriors99, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:20, 29 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Hyper-surveillance

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A tag has been placed on Hyper-surveillance requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://www.bbc.com/worklife/article/20190718-hyper-surveillance, https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/2378023118761434, and https://www.aclu.org/issues/privacy-technology/surveillance-technologies/face-recognition-technology. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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Close paraphrasing

Hi. I recommend reading the guideline about Wikipedia:Close paraphrasing to help you better understand why your content still had problems after the changes you made. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:20, 2 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hyper-surveillance moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Hyper-surveillance, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. John B123 (talk) 21:55, 7 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hyper-surveillance moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Hyper-surveillance, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please follow the prompts on the Articles for Creation template atop the page. ... discospinster _talk 02:52, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I added a peer review. Sorry the review was completed so late in the day. --Eddyd101 (talk) 07:12, 22 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Hyper-surveillance (December 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by ThadeusOfNazereth was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at Hyper-surveillance instead.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Article already exists under the title of Mass surveillance, and this draft fails to provide a distinction between the concepts of "hyper" and "mass." In addition, the first sentence is directly copied from Mass surveillance.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Hyper-surveillance and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Hyper-surveillance, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{Db-g7}}" at the top of the draft text and click the blue "publish changes" button to save this edit.
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ThadeusOfNazereth^{Talk to Me!} 04:19, 7 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Sfwarriors99! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! ThadeusOfNazereth^{Talk to Me!} 04:19, 7 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Hyper-surveillance

Hello, Sfwarriors99. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Hyper-surveillance, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Draft space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for article space.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion under CSD G13. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it. You may request userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 05:01, 9 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Hyper-surveillance

Hello, Sfwarriors99. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Hyper-surveillance".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you plan on working on it further and you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it.

Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz ^{Read! Talk!} 04:34, 7 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]