User talk:TaeyoungYoon
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:24, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
COEX Aquarium[edit]
- The URL of the original article : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/COEX_Aquarium
- Two comments, respectful and clear.
1. COEX aquariums have been built since 2000, and it modifies the interior themes continuously. Therefore, it is necessary to express the information of year in which the listed aquarium themes was made. 2. It will be more helpful to explain the main content of each theme in the list. In this article, undersea tunnel was only described and it doesn't seem to be enough.
TaeyoungYoon (talk) 17:13, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
Andong-jjimdak[edit]
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Andong-jjimdak
1. In the preparation section, the broth is usually prepared with a small mount of water and cleaned chopped chicken. You mentioned "boiling" but it will be better to mention putting water to make sentence clear. 2. It is better to write the same form of a name. Andong-jjimdak with a hyphen was used at a topic, but Andong jjimdak without a hyphen was used several times at the paragraph. Because it is a special name of a cook, using the same formed name is important.
TaeyoungYoon (talk) 20:51, 8 March 2017 (UTC)
== My topics ==
Topic: Lotus glass Lotus glass is a new developed glass product by Corning and was introduced on October 26, 2011. Due to its thermal attributes, Lotus glass can be kept in its initial shape and quality in the high temperature and applied in OLED and next-generation LCD displays. The Corning Lotus Glass platform enables organic light-emitting diode (OLED) displays and liquid crystal displays (LCD) that use either low-temperature poly-silicon (LTPS) or oxide thin-film transistor (TFT) backplanes. The result is an energy-efficient, immersive display device that features high resolution, fast response times, and bright picture quality.
https://www.corning.com/worldwide/en/products/display-glass/products/corning-lotus-nxt-glass.html
http://www.corning.com/media/worldwide/cdt/documents/Lotus_NXT_Glass_for_OLED_White_Paper.pdf
** I just put some introduction of Lotus glass and citations. I want to summarize many information about Lotus glass just like "Gorilla glass" in Wikipedia article.
1. Median crack / depth: terminology used in glass manufacturing industry, optimum scoring depth to cut glass without failure.
AN INTERESTING IDEA, TAEYOUNG, BUT IT SEEMS QUITE SPECIFIC AND I DON'T KNOW IF IT WOULD BE ENOUGH FOR 750 WORDS. WHAT ABOUT A NEW ARTICLE ON "PRECISION GLASS"? I FOUND "PRECISION GLASS MOULDING," BUT THAT JUST SEEMS LIKE ONE PROCESS. WOULD THERE BE ENOUGH ABOUT PRECISION GLASS, INCLUDING THIS MEDIAN CRACK/DEPTH, TO BUILD AN ARTICLE AROUND? YOU COULD ALSO SUMMARIZE DIFFERENT PROCESSES FOR BUILDING IT, AND IT COULD LINK TO LIQUID CRYSTAL DISPLAYS. OR COULD YOU FIND MORE SOURCES JUST FOR MEDIAN CRACK/DEPTH? EricGrunwald (talk) 19:15, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
www.corning.com/media/worldwide/cdt/documents/TIP_308.pdf
www.corning.com/media/worldwide/cdt/documents/TIP_305.pdf
Lotus glass/username[edit]
Hi Taeyoung, I think that is a fine topic, on one condition: remember that a Wikipedia should not be an advertisement, and should be neutral and descriptive. One way to help you do that is to change your username so that you do not feel worried about putting information up there that might get you in trouble, thus allowing you to explore limitations and drawbacks as well as advantages and benefits.
To change your username, see: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Special:GlobalRenameRequest
For a reason, you can just put something to the effect that you unwisely chose your full name (I should have warned you!) when you signed up and now want to be free to be objective and not risk harassment. That's what I said, and they changed mine. Choose something that is untraceable by sight (nothing with your initials, etc.).
WritingMan (talk) 21:51, 25 April 2017 (UTC)