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The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Sarastro1 via FACBot (talk) 22:38, 24 March 2017 [1].


Habits (Stay High)[edit]

Nominator(s): Paparazzzi (talk) 03:35, 18 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about "Habits (Stay High)", a song by Swedish singer and songwriter Tove Lo. It was a commercial success in 2014, thanks to the original track and a remix version by record production duo Hippie Sabotage. This article covers the information about both versions of the song. It is currently a GA, but I think it meets the criteria for a FA, since it features important aspects about the song and I consider is properly referenced. Paparazzzi (talk) 03:35, 18 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Aoba47
I will review this as I love this song!:
  • The image in the “Background and release” section needs an ALT description. Same for the image in the “Commercial performance” section and the image in the “First version” subsection and the image in the “Second version” subsection. Make sure that all of the images have ALT descriptions as it only appears that the infobox images have ALT descriptions.
  • Do you think that the following quote from the same section is really necessary ("means [the] most") as I would imagine that you can paraphrase this and get the same meaning? Same for the “huge” quote in the same sentence, and "did not get to finish too much" later in the paragraph?
  • You use the word “join” in close proximity in the “Buddhist movement” sentence and I would suggest adding some variety.
  • You use the transition “In an interview with...” in the final two sentences of the first paragraph of the same section. I would change one of the two.
  • Please finish the “Media data and Non-free use rationale” for both of the sound samples. There are two parts with “n.a.” for each.
  • You wikilink Lorde twice in the body of the article so please unlink the second instance.
@Paparazzzi: Great work with the article! Once my comments are addressed, then I will support this nomination. Good luck getting this promoted. Aoba47 (talk) 21:26, 26 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Aoba47: I have addressed your comments. Thank you so much for your review! Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 03:51, 1 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]
@Paparazzzi: Everything looks great to me! I can definitely support this nomination. I was wondering if you could possibly provide some comments for my FAC as well? I understand that it is a busy time of the year so it is okay if you do not have the time or energy for this. Either way, good luck with this and have a wonderful rest of your day! Aoba47 (talk) 15:06, 1 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Closing comment: I'm afraid this has stalled somewhat and we have no consensus to promote in five weeks. Therefore, I am archiving, and the article can be renominated after the usual two weeks. Sarastro1 (talk) 22:38, 24 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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