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Nominator(s): 金色黎明 (talk) 04:40, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I am nominating this for featured list because that has fulfill the condition 金色黎明 (talk) 04:40, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Link Roosevelt in the lead
  • "Ref" column header should be "Refs" as there are multiple refs on every row
  • "For the purpose of this list, other candidates are defined as those who finished in third place in the state" - did nobody at all finish third in 1944, 1960, etc?
  • Note b is missing the word "the" before "ballot" and also needs a full stop
  • That's it, I think! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:43, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for your guidance! Upon investigating the source, I have confirmed that only two candidates received votes in the elections of 1944, 1956, 1960, and 1964.--金色黎明 (talk) 08:26, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:55, 24 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Bergland's results in 1984 are erroneous: 12,000 votes would be more than 6% of that election. Presidential elections, 1789–1996 gives his vote total as 2,357.
  • The sources are well formatted. For consistency's sake, I'd put Menendez 2005 into an SFN; I know you only cite it once, but that way all the books will be in the works cited section.
  • Additionally, this is the only one you have a location for; I'd remove it or add locations to the other books.
  • Wikilink Walter Dean Burnham in the citation.

That's all from me. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 01:42, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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  • "Wyoming was the first place in America to grant women the right to vote, in 1869, well before it joined the Union in 1890." --> "Wyoming granted women the right to vote in 1869, prior to joining the Union, and was the first place in America to do so." It already states that Wyoming joined the union in 1890 the sentence prior. Feel free to modify this sentence as you see fit as my prose usually isn't the best either but it felt a little clunky to read.

That's it! Well done & thanks for your work. Staraction (talk | contribs) 02:53, 25 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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