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Hurricane Eugene (1987)[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because this is a GA of mine that I want to improve. Thanks for any comments. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 17:44, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Some quick comments -

"Eight tropical cyclone" → "Eighth tropical cyclone"
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"As it was rurning northwestward" - what do you mean?
- Reworded. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"The highest rain was..." should probably be better worded as "Rainfall peaked at..."
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

TheAustinMan^(Talk|Works) 17:58, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 18:10, 20 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]