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List of New York Yankees team records[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to send it to FLC in the near-future. This is modeled off a couple of similar FLs, and I want to get some pointers before nominating it. Prose comments in particular would be helpful.

Thanks, Giants2008 (17-14) 21:38, 13 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from NatureBoyMD (talk · contribs)
  • The way you indicate general references for particular sections seems a little rough. Some of them aren't complete sentences, yet they have periods at the end. See if you think it might be better to replace all of those general ref sentences with sentences that sort-of introuce the section's content. Example: "These are records of players with the best performance in particular statistical categories during their career with the Yankees.[7]" (a la List of Nashville Sounds team records
    • I re-did all of them in the fashion of the Sounds list, and it does look better that way.
  • Some times you call the stat "walks" and sometime it's "bases on balls". You'll probably want to use "walks" everywhere.
    • Switched it to walks where necessary.
  • The ref for Spud Chandler's career pitching record is in error state.
    • This was fixed by Chrishomingtang before I got a chance to fix the other issues.
  • There are articles for Innings pitched, Games started, and possibly others, that might be better links than Innings#baseball and Starting_lineup#Baseball.
    • A couple of stats already had those links, and I've now replaced the rest with the more specific links.
  • The two 1928 entries at team single-game pitching records sort in the wrong order.
    • Fixed formatting to make them sort correctly.

The prose seems fine to me. Other than these notes, the list looks great. -NatureBoyMD (talk) 01:19, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Everything above is done. Giants2008 (17-14) 21:30, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
It looks great... Excepet you made the changes and then, evidently, reverted your own changes back to the way it was before. I took the liberty of undoing your last edit to the list so that the changes above are reflected. -NatureBoyMD (talk) 21:34, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I think I hit the edit button twice, which may have caused the problem. Thanks for catching that. Giants2008 (17-14) 23:17, 14 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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