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Ruan Lingyu[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because i am going to nominate it to become a GA in the near future as Xu Lai (actress). And the last thing, I'm not sure this article is well-written.

Thanks, TheFame08 (talk) 14:21, 25 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Lingzhi[edit]

You have Richard J. Meyer's book listed in the Bibliography, but nowhere in the citations. That's a grave error for two reasons: first, anything listed in the refs should be something that has been cited. Second, and far more importantly, this would be grounds for Oppose based on WP:WIAFA 1c.
That problem needs to be addressed. In short, you need to get a copy of Meyer's book, read it cover to cover, and then use it (with no errors of WP:COPYVIO.
@TheFame08: I think there are also many other good sources that you have overlooked. JSTOR would be a good place to start. Then Google Books. Lingzhi ♦ (talk) 10:51, 17 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Алый Король[edit]

Tones of books and articles have been written about her, but nothing of them is presented in this arcticle. No any professinal review, critic's aclaim. Nothing. Author is just too lazy to write --Алый Король (talk) 04:59, 2 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]