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Increase brevity and combine 1st and 2nd paragraphs?[edit]
Hello, I am a brand-new editor and unsure of how much information is considered relevant/should be included in the introductory paragraph(s) of an article. It seems to me that the first two paragraphs of this article could be condensed down to read this:
The International Coffee Organization (ICO) was established in 1963, in London, by the United Nations (UN) as an administrative body of the International Coffee Agreement (ICA), which had been signed the year prior in 1962.
(This is what is currently written:)
The International Coffee Organization (ICO) was set up in 1963 in London, under the auspices of the United Nations (UN) due to the economic importance of coffee. It administers the International Coffee Agreement (ICA), an important instrument for development cooperation.
However, I am unsure if it's appropriate for me to delete the extraneous information in the second paragraph describing the chronological timeline of ICA re-negotiations.
